Immortal Yuan Chen picks up a little tiger, and a century of peaceful life is suddenly thrown into turmoil. It turns out their fated bond had long been in someone else's hands.
The ascetic mountain god is organizing a blind date for his pet son's lifelong event... Haha. Very nice, please update soon~
He was actually the first one to leave a comment. Cheers to the author!
It's an ancient fairy tale, the writing style is very fresh, I like it.
In the third chapter, I felt that the language used to describe the little tiger was monotonous and straightforward, a bit wordy, and inconsistent with the previous smoothness and naturalness.
In addition, the perspective change between the fairy hero and the little tiger is abrupt, and the tiger's perspective is unnatural. Although the story is narrated from a third-party wide-angle perspective, it is still mainly about the feelings and reflections from the perspective of the immortal. Therefore, it was a bit stiff when I first penetrated into Little Tiger's inner feelings. After that, there were a few times where the situation turned out to be straightforward.
The language is full of aura. Such as this sentence
"The flower demon and fox fairy and other female monsters did not dare to offend the immortal lord, but regarded the black tiger as a kindred spirit, so whenever they had the chance, they would exhale into their ears like orchid, with a pair of enchanting eyes. However, before the Dankou's hand touched the corner of his clothes, they were dodged by him. No matter how young he was, he wanted to pick up the yang and replenish the yin, but with a look from the other party, the banshees were as if they had fallen into a cold pool and couldn't move. As time went by, this kind of thing gradually became less common."
The words are concise and the angles are clever. It avoids the front of the tiger monster and the redundant description of each monster. It only highlights some iconic details. The picture feels like a camera flickering smoothly, and it looks like a cold and stern tiger monster boy.
The ascetic mountain god is organizing a blind date for his pet son's lifelong event... Haha. Very nice, please update soon~
He was actually the first one to leave a comment. Cheers to the author! It's an ancient fairy tale, the writing style is very fresh, I like it. In the third chapter, I felt that the language used to describe the little tiger was monotonous and straightforward, a bit wordy, and inconsistent with the previous smoothness and naturalness. In addition, the perspective change between the fairy hero and the little tiger is abrupt, and the tiger's perspective is unnatural. Although the story is narrated from a third-party wide-angle perspective, it is still mainly about the feelings and reflections from the perspective of the immortal. Therefore, it was a bit stiff when I first penetrated into Little Tiger's inner feelings. After that, there were a few times where the situation turned out to be straightforward. The language is full of aura. Such as this sentence "The flower demon and fox fairy and other female monsters did not dare to offend the immortal lord, but regarded the black tiger as a kindred spirit, so whenever they had the chance, they would exhale into their ears like orchid, with a pair of enchanting eyes. However, before the Dankou's hand touched the corner of his clothes, they were dodged by him. No matter how young he was, he wanted to pick up the yang and replenish the yin, but with a look from the other party, the banshees were as if they had fallen into a cold pool and couldn't move. As time went by, this kind of thing gradually became less common." The words are concise and the angles are clever. It avoids the front of the tiger monster and the redundant description of each monster. It only highlights some iconic details. The picture feels like a camera flickering smoothly, and it looks like a cold and stern tiger monster boy.