Ye Hai fell into a pit one day, and ended up transmigrating!
Huh? What's this hard thing in my mouth?
A jade? Don't tell me I've become that idle rich young master? Or did I just come out of the womb?!
This story is also known as A Fake Baoyu Fell from the Sky
When a modern child prodigy and top student transmigrates into the world of Dream of the Red Chamber, what can he do to change his fate of becoming a monk? And perhaps save Lin Daiyu from drowning in tears along the way?
Jia Lian and Wang Xifeng... don't need his help.
His cheap old dad, Jia Zheng: get on his good side first, and make use of him when the time is right.
Madam Wang... behave yourself and don't provoke me, and I won't make trouble for you.
Open a restaurant, make a fortune, practice martial arts, meddle in politics, and land himself a minor official post. Those are Ye Hai's goals!
The author's imagination has turned into a black hole, and she's a total oddball. There may be a golden finger, so this could be... a wish-fulfillment story? Anyway, the protagonist will have a fairly smooth ride, so proceed with caution if that's not your thing!
Some parts may follow the original plot. The era is mostly fictional, though it may broadly resemble the Ming Dynasty, and there will also be some original characters. If you have any suggestions, feel free to share them, and Muzi will make improvements!
As a newcomer, I'm starting my second story with the belief that if you don't invite trouble, you won't get into trouble. My first story is Detective Conan Fanfiction: My Queen. If you're interested, come check it out!
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A friend's recommended story: Old Dreams of the Xi Dynasty
And a new story I'm currently drafting: The Empress's Heist
Theme:
The general direction of this article is good, but the details are terrible. For example, Daiyu was afraid of breaking the rules and not cleaning up the guise on the bed, but she could pull off the red hijab without any scruples. Isn't it a rule to ask the groom to pick a red hijab? Moreover, choosing a hijab has the connotation of satisfying one's wishes. Is it really okay to be so careless?
There are so many contradictory and illogical details in the text that it makes people unable to complain. This text is quite Su from the beginning. If the logic is not rigorous, it will never return to Su's direction.
Being kind is also kindness. Not to mention filial piety, at least don't be cold and cold-eyed.
This Baoyu is a bit cold-hearted. Even if Jia Mu has sorry for everyone, she has not been sorry for him.
It's great to read the conclusion!
Chasing articles is the most annoying thing. As the author said: Waiting is the most annoying thing, bar none.
The colleague glared at the two naughty kids several times - "colleague" should be "at the same time".
Actually arranged for Gu An to be GAY? It's not necessary.
Is Daiyu full of confinement? Just go to the battlefield and kill the enemy? Why did the author suddenly convulse and write abusive articles?
Why arrange a sister and a brother? I like my brother and sister.
Didn't you say you won't have a child until two years later?
Is this Baoyu's contraceptive failure? But Daiyu is eighteen or nineteen years old, which is much better than sixteen.
"Indulge in mistakes, despair in insight." - Daiyu is very transparent in nature.
Where has Wei Ruolan gone?
I really don't like Xiangyun very much.
The general direction of this article is good, but the details are terrible. For example, Daiyu was afraid of breaking the rules and not cleaning up the guise on the bed, but she could pull off the red hijab without any scruples. Isn't it a rule to ask the groom to pick a red hijab? Moreover, choosing a hijab has the connotation of satisfying one's wishes. Is it really okay to be so careless? There are so many contradictory and illogical details in the text that it makes people unable to complain. This text is quite Su from the beginning. If the logic is not rigorous, it will never return to Su's direction.
Being kind is also kindness. Not to mention filial piety, at least don't be cold and cold-eyed.
This Baoyu is a bit cold-hearted. Even if Jia Mu has sorry for everyone, she has not been sorry for him.
It's great to read the conclusion! Chasing articles is the most annoying thing. As the author said: Waiting is the most annoying thing, bar none.
The colleague glared at the two naughty kids several times - "colleague" should be "at the same time". Actually arranged for Gu An to be GAY? It's not necessary.
Is Daiyu full of confinement? Just go to the battlefield and kill the enemy? Why did the author suddenly convulse and write abusive articles?
Why arrange a sister and a brother? I like my brother and sister.
Didn't you say you won't have a child until two years later? Is this Baoyu's contraceptive failure? But Daiyu is eighteen or nineteen years old, which is much better than sixteen.
"Indulge in mistakes, despair in insight." - Daiyu is very transparent in nature.
Where has Wei Ruolan gone? I really don't like Xiangyun very much.