Kill Byakuran

The author's style seems to be more Japanese light novel. I have never been able to appreciate this style, so I can't comment on the style, but [1] The language is relatively fluent, and the conversational environment and written expressions are not like a newcomer at all. I believe that as I continue writing, I will get better and better. This is a gift. 2If there is anything that needs to be strengthened, let's add a transitional section in terms of time span, and then I think we should probably stick to writing, because in terms of writing, I am already very good for a newcomer~~ Of course, students below the university still focus on learning. 3If you try a drama-style novel in the future, don't carelessly dump the link. I will review it carefully :-D ——The only novice in the group comments [I feel tired and don't love it]

I found that Zuojun seemed to like using kaomoji emoticons, it was so cute! Compared to the mushrooms, they are also very cute, right? I really like seeing those rows of little expressions! And the author Jun's writing is very good! The portrayal of the characters is also very good. Forgive me for having been swimming in the ocean of novels for so many years, but I still have no idea what is good and what is bad about a novel... In my opinion, all novels are the same. The difference lies in whether I seem to be happy or not... But Zuojun's writing is indeed good, and the text is very easy to read! But I haven't watched anime very much, and my English is very poor, so I confused the characters with who they are. It seems really, I didn't even mention it and I was all in tears. Is it because I am really a bad student? However, it can be roughly seen that the tendency of this article is more cheerful, which is also my favorite type of article. So, even if I don't understand much, I still decided to write a long review to support it. Writing an article is not easy. I hope Zuojun can persevere. Don't let me down the long review that I typed carefully. I'll update the article. Sorry! I took a look and the latest update was August 14th. Zuojun, are you really going to give up on the first article you wrote? Digging a hole but not filling it is a shameful act! Is it really okay for you to stop writing just a few chapters? How embarrassing are you for the readers who want to read on? Seeing the readers who have not deleted their favorites so far, and seeing me working so hard to write long reviews, do you really have the heart to cheat on me? Do you know that it's really sad that there is no follow-up after reading the article halfway? Although I don't know who is who, as long as I click on an article, I will read it carefully! So, dear Zuojun, why don't you come back quickly and continue writing?! I don't ask for how long the writing is, nor how good the writing style is. As long as you continue to update, I will continue reading! Please finish writing it seriously, my final thanks. Zuo Jun should also be concerned about his first article, right? No matter what it is, if you do it for the first time, you will always invest more, right? Please keep writing, be responsible for yourself, and also be responsible for your true love readers! Finally, dear Zuojun, shall we be gay friends?! The number of words is not enough, wow! I have no choice but to comment below. The author must believe that I sincerely want to write a long review for you!!! So, here's the time to make up the number of words~ Blah blah blah blah, come on, be a successful little author. And you should pay attention to update the article obediently, water it for a while, I will water it, okay the water will not come out, that's it, we will see you next time!

Don't use too many long sentences, otherwise you will feel suffocated while reading them. But it's great, I like this style of writing!! Collected

Good friends in the group come and support me! Here is Tianwei