To the One I Cherish Most

I feel that the lower part is better written than the upper part. Maybe the author's writing style is more suitable for such a plain and warm day. Although there are conflicts, they are actually the running-in that often occurs in marriage and that most people need to go through. In fact, Qin Zihang has not grown up enough until now, but who made him meet Lin Yiran first? He is lucky enough. I am very touched by some words in the article, but I personally think that these words (especially in the same chapter) should not appear too many times, otherwise they will feel a bit deliberate and pretentious. All in all, I think the author's writing is pretty good. It's probably because the subject matter is not popular and there is no V. It seems a bit deserted. The writing could also be more attractive. I hope the author will continue to work hard ^_^

To be honest, a family without children is really incomplete. But even if it is incomplete, people will still praise the broken-arm Venus as beautiful, the leaning Leaning Tower of Pisa as beautiful, and the dilapidated Roman ruins as beautiful. For Lin Yiran, with Qin Zihang in his life, incompleteness is another kind of perfection. This is the first time I saw such a description, and I was really, really moved.

I think the emotional description in this paragraph is a bit unnatural. I can understand Qin Zihang's mentality of meeting his lover again after facing the disaster, but after so many years of guilt, worry, longing, and fear in the disaster, his feelings should be more entangled or more explosive, instead of suddenly turning into a mature and gentle person to pursue Xiao Shou; as for Lin Yiran, I feel that his former The rejection above is a bit illogical. After all, he should have a clear understanding of his own feelings. Of course, Xiao Gong's sudden change in attitude may also make him feel uneasy or entangled, but it seems that there is no good portrayal and foreshadowing in the front, as if he has been waiting for the plot of the mudslide to break out. Of course, the above is only my personal opinion. If there is any inconvenience, please forgive me.