The Great Medicine Takes Shape

It's not easy to make a living in Chengcheng, support!

Why the male protagonist found the female protagonist so late is beyond comprehension! ! ! I don't believe that the male protagonist really can't find the female protagonist! ! ! There is no hidden secret, it's very frustrating to watch! ! ! Isn't it dangerous for the heroine to carry the child alone outside? Moreover, the child was not born when the child left. In ancient times, the medical level was rudimentary. As the so-called doctors did not heal themselves and could not deliver their own babies, the heroine was likely to die after giving birth to the child. It's better now. The child has grown up and has passed the most difficult period. The hero has come to get the ready-made product. No matter how uncomfortable it looks! In ancient times, there was a household registration system. It was impossible for the government not to know that there was an extra person in a certain place, and it was a woman who opened a medical clinic. It's obvious that the male protagonist didn't really look for it. Let a woman give birth to a child and take care of the child alone without anyone around her. Not happy!

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I have been following Qingcheng MM's great medicine Tiancheng. His writing style is fresh, his language is witty and humorous, and his writing style is great! Especially when describing the environment and objects, the antique flavor and strong ancient style make people immersed in the scene. The little wooden horse in the first chapter foreshadows the future life of the heroine and the emperor. To be honest, I am very much looking forward to seeing the interaction between the hero and heroine. According to an imperial decree, the heroine married into the palace, but who knew that she would see an acquaintance instead. As an emperor who is plagued by poison, it is indeed quite pitiful. It is a good idea to find a woman with medical skills to be the queen. Emperor, emperor, is this your original thought? Or maybe you were tempted the night you gave the little wooden horse to you? The female protagonist has an out-of-the-box personality and is very cute, while the male protagonist is awkward and arrogant. It feels like the two of them are very loving when they interact. From the beginning when they don't understand each other to the two of them falling in love at the end, they stumble and test each other along the way. I was scratching my head and head anxiously. Especially on the wedding night, there was no sex scene! ! ! Qingchengda, is this really okay for you? Don't you know how hard it was for us to wait for the meaty scenes? There doesn't seem to be any special foreshadowing. The emperor takes careful care of the heroine and occasionally teases her. It feels like the two of them are a pair. However, the heroine is a bit naive at first and doesn't understand the emperor's thoughts at all. Such a beautiful man has money and power at his side, but the heroine is not tempted at first. Is this really good? The heroine's medical skills are really great. When the epidemic broke out, she turned the tide and showed her superb medical skills. At this time, Fang became a bit like a queen. At the beginning, the heroine was too soft and not domineering at all. It gets more and more powerful from now on, thanks to the emperor's wise eyes and discernment, he took the heroine into his arms early, otherwise Qi Mengbai would have taken action. I feel like there is a touch of melancholy in Qi Mengbai. This temperament is so charming. If I hadn't known that the emperor was the male protagonist from the beginning, I would have tilted the balance of my heart towards Xiaobai. What a good man, but why is he not the male protagonist? Also, is Canglangju a dog, a wolf, or a pony? When I see these three words, I can't help but think of a horse that looks like a wolf, or a wolf that looks like a horse? Qingchengdada, is this a new species you created? "Shen Zhishu groped for a while in the long mane under Canglangju's neck, took out two oranges and handed them to Shen Wei." I was stunned by this sentence. Canglangju actually has its own storage room. Can you bring delicious food? ? ? The interaction between Shen Zhishu and Chen Gillian is also very endearing. Can I say that this lively pair has successfully stolen my attention? The love between childhood sweethearts and childhood sweethearts is so cute. Qingcheng Da Da set up a big mystery for us at the beginning. Is the Queen Mother good or bad, right or wrong? Could the illness of the arrogant emperor be the work of the Queen Mother? Only later did I realize that everyone has their own difficulties. No one in the world can escape from desire or suffering. The Queen Mother, being so aloof, sounds so glorious. She is the emperor with one hand and the inner palace with one hand, covering the sky with one hand and turning the clouds and rain. But in the end, she is just a poor person. She did not get her love, and her lover died in her own hands. The long nights, the sound of uterine leakage, and when she dreamed back at midnight, all she had with her was boundless loneliness. In Da Yao, I like many people, but the one I will never forget the most is the Queen Mother. I will never lose my love and my freedom. Living one more day is just another day of suffering. In the long river of time, everyone is a loser, only the love that is sung will last forever~

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Spread flowers, the host is great

Let's press the claws first. Isn't the prototype of Empress Dowager Qi the bitch Cixi? Bitch is just hypocritical. Wenwen is quite cute, and the character design is very good, but compared to the male and female protagonists, I think some of the supporting characters are better. This is truly the book with the strongest sense of familiarity that the supporting characters crush the protagonist among the novels I have ever read.

Hello author, I haven't read the second half of the update due to joining V, but some of the comments I want to make can be made in the previous parts. In view of the "publishing aspects" required by the author, I probably can't do it, but I can guarantee that the comments will be pertinent. First of all, after reading the first twenty chapters, the outline of the story is that the heroine marries a puppet emperor and helps him defeat his mother and take over the world. How can I put it, this setting itself somewhat weakens the feeling of the male protagonist. Most readers nowadays like the male protagonist to be domineering and cool, so first of all, this is not very advantageous. By the way, let's talk about the character of the male protagonist. The author's own definition is: mean, venomous, and irritable. But in my opinion, these characteristics are not actually shown. It is said over and over again in the article that the male protagonist is smart. Except for a side description of his violent murder, there is no plot to express. I can only feel the inexplicable and petty attitude of the male protagonist in the text. Although he is a puppet emperor and is even sick, what I can't understand is why he doesn't even have a little bit of the majesty of an emperor. This is specifically reflected in his initial interactions with the heroine after marrying her and the scene where he first meets Gillian. I won't go into details here. Personal suggestion, in fact, when describing the violent elite king, you should pay more attention to the description of his aura. At least it can make people feel the emotion of "this man is too scary to mess with." Even if it is like this in front of other people, it is OK to pretend to be weak in front of the mother, but the current male protagonist's whole person shows a feeling of "I know I am just a puppet emperor, and you can bully him no matter how you want." Secondly, sincerely speaking, there is a big disconnect between the writing style and the grasp of the characters in the first few chapters of this article and the rest of the article. Especially the heroine's sentence "Now that we know the names, we are friends!" This kind of sentence... Which probably only appears in girls' novels... And the heroine's behavior in the first few chapters really cannot withstand scrutiny. Regardless of the article, if a girl meets a stranger alone in the mountains, will she exchange names? Will it be sincere? Will you make a promise of "holding the wooden horse and I will help you treat your illness"? Judging from the speed and content of the words, is it really okay for the two of them to have such a heart-to-heart talk for less than three minutes? Next, when the heroine escapes from marriage, I really don't understand why there is a logic of "because his relatives are not good people, so he is not a good bird either", and the heroine and her brother are both stupid together, and if the other party is a person who "doesn't want to marry the heroine because he thinks the heroine is ugly (by the way, there is no logical relationship between the three)", then it really tarnishes the slightly wiser image in the later part. Later, when the male protagonist was a little angry because the female protagonist had saved the Crown Prince of Liang, I read it carefully. The male protagonist never said how he knew about it from beginning to end. As an emperor, if he wants to investigate something, he has countless ways (even if not, the author said there are!), So how did the female protagonist get the logic of "it turned out that he was the one who saved me when I was in a coma"? Wasn't her first reaction "How did he know!?"...? In fact, the relationship between the male and female protagonists from the beginning made me feel a bit strange. Is the female protagonist really stupid or pretending to be stupid? After all, she is an emperor. Why don't you have a little bit of awe when you marry into the royal family and get along with the emperor? No matter what happens, I feel anxious at first... The logical problems are basically concentrated in the first five chapters. As for the plague in the later period, there are only a few ways to spread the plague, water, livestock, and food. Why is it that only the heroine discovers it? Don't other people have common sense? This is really a very conspicuous BUG. And... In fact, if you insist on examining it, there are many problems in the article. Not to mention that the male protagonist does not have the majesty of an emperor, and even the female protagonist does not have the slightest majesty of a queen. It's just a plague. Does it really require the queen to go to the disaster area to express condolences in person? Do you really need to come in person to test the medicine? To put it mildly, even if she tested it with animals first, the heroine really did not put herself in the position of a queen. So from the whole article, it seems that the author's problem is not in the writing style, but in the plot arrangement and character description. It is really very problematic. This is no longer a flaw that can be dismissed as "silly and sweet"... If it is published, the early part needs to be revised to show the freshness and refinement of the heroine (what the hell!). In fact, there are many ways, and there are also some very small tone details, for example, but this may be my fault. If the author thinks there is no problem, you can ignore it. In Chapter 9, the heroine said: "This is the Qing Dynasty made by my mother." Lotus glutinous rice is made from the green lotus petals that just bloomed in the morning and the morning dew collected at Yinshi. It is fragrant and fragrant. Do you want to try it?" This point can be changed to "This is the green lotus glutinous rice made by my mother using the green lotus petals that just bloomed in the morning and the morning dew collected at Yinshi. It is fragrant and fragrant. Would you like to try it?" ← Will it be more comfortable to read this way? There are also some small sentences and details, most of which are small flaws that can be discovered by the author after reading it carefully. If the author wants to publish it, he must read it carefully. In short, that's all. The whole long review is illogical, so don't worry about writing whatever comes to mind... The last thing I want to say is that it can actually be seen that the author's article has gradually been on the right track, but the early stage has hindered the subsequent article. I wish the author good data and smooth publication! ——West Wall★Illegal gathering | Changpingpu

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