[Crossover] Stealing the Protagonist's Halo

In a small world where the plot is not ruined, is it self-inflicted? Haha😄

Suddenly I felt a little dizzy, Feng Mo = Feng, and the mysterious light group = Feng Mo, so, the mysterious light group = Feng? So, how do they exist at the same time?

It took me two days to finish reading Halo, so I wanted to post a long comment about my views on this article and the author's writing skills. In fact, I have read this article before, but I only saw the second world. Like many people who have abandoned the article, I feel that the scumbag shou has no charm. It is no different from many fast-travelers in Jinjiang. The only thing that attracts me is the darkened original shou (forgive me for my life of unrestrained love and enemies turning into lovers, and the bloody plot of the darkening) But at that time, there were so many articles about it that I stopped reading. These two days of literature shortage, I took it out and patiently read a dozen chapters, and then... Holy shit! The painting style has changed suddenly, don't look too good at the back! I became interested in this article from the fourth world, definitely not because I like One Body and Two Souls. The plot is exciting, and the writing is not as immature as the previous two worlds, and it starts to become more vivid. Then when I saw the ancient world next, I could only say... Oh no! Why don't you write about Gudan! This world can be said to be the world where your writing is the best. Although it is a bit cruel, your writing skills are so good that you can become a qualified ancient writer! Seeing this, I simply doubt that the first world and the ancient Jianghu world were written by two people. Anyway, the painting style has become mature and beautiful. I strongly recommend that comrades who want to give up the article after reading the first few chapters jump to Bai Xiao Shi Shi Han and read it. I strongly recommend that comrades who want to give up the article after reading the first few chapters jump to Bai Xiao Shi Shi Han and read it. I strongly recommend that comrades who want to give up the article after reading the first few chapters jump to Bai Xiao Shi Shi Han and read it. Say important things three times, definitely not trying to make up the word count! Then I continued reading in a happy mood. In the following world of vampires, the writing style maintained the beauty of the previous world. I will not comment much on the plot. Everyone has their own preferences. The last world is cultivating immortals, which greatly explains the back of the system and the previous mysteries. In fact, I am still a little confused about what the system Baituanzi is and what the master is. Maybe it's because I didn't look carefully, definitely not because I'm stupid! Cio, I almost forgot to see a ghost! Hell is my second favorite world. The writing style maintains the beauty of the Jianghu world, and the sense of supernaturalism is also strong. In other words, if you practice some practice, you can write supernatural stories. Probably because I am brave, I don't find the plot in The Ghost to be scary. Anyway, the ups and downs are very exciting. After talking about the plot, let me briefly talk about the three main characters of the story, Mo Qi, the original Gong and the original Shou. To be honest, Mo Qi's image was very thin at the beginning, with no personality charm, but her image gradually became fuller later on. Although it is not particularly attractive, it is worthy of your subsequent plot and writing style. Then there's the original attack, well, it's also the protagonist attack. I have nothing to say about him... Next is the original Shou that I have long admired. The darkened original Shou is really charming. If it's not finished yet, he should really be given the upper hand! Become the protagonist! The first three worlds of the original novels are just fine, but the later original novels become darker and more handsome. Especially Wei Fangze in the ancient world is so vivid that people want to torture him to death! (Actually, I don't hate him at all) After talking about the characters, let me talk about the author. Let's talk about the shortcomings first, they are huge and even more intolerable! Although I watched it after it was finished, I saw the comments below urging me to update! It seems like you often get interrupted when updating this article? Secondly... Well, there seems to be no shortcomings to mention, that is, you should practice your writing skills and increase your knowledge. There is no end to learning. If you like to keep reading, you should read more! (Sorry, I've brought it up again) You can save the manuscript next time before starting another pit, but it's a good boy before it's finished. Touch it greatly. Then let me talk about the advantages, big, you have great potential, great potential, great potential. Except for the first and second worlds, the other plots are very compact, the rhythm is tight and loose, and it looks very smooth. Starting from the King of Heaven, the level has been raised to a higher level (is it the result of retreat practice?) Uh... That's it. I hope the author can see my sincere review. (⊙ω⊙)

… Congratulations on finishing the first book

No author has anything to say in this chapter? It's not scientific, I want to see what the author has to say!

I was so shocked that my face brightened (covering my blushing face and hiding under the quilt)

Well done, why can't you give a synopsis ending? Kiss, hug and lift high 333

= =. . Forgot to score, make up for it!

Haha, it's been so long, am I reviewing for the final exam?

Have you passed Level 4? Update if you pass! No, forget the sadness and anger and continue updating! Waiting for you waving a little handkerchief!