[Harry Potter + Avengers (Iron Man Focus)] A Stark-Style Ravenclaw

Let's avoid this for future readers! But I also want to thank my wife for generating electricity for love~ I ignored some small bugs in the early stage of this article, and it can be read as a cool article that combines technology and magic. However, after the fourth-year Goblet of Fire faked her death, the logic of the heroine's behavior was very messy. I don't understand why, but she suddenly became wise~ The problem with the left hand in the early stage has been prepared for so long, and finally it was solved in one sentence... How was it solved... It feels like I just watched the movie and didn't think much about the background knowledge. For example, how could Tony Stark, who was born in the 1970s, have a daughter the same age as Harry Potter? Give birth to a child at the age of ten?

The character of Cedric is not three-dimensional at all. The title is a Stark-like Ravenclaw, but there is no Ravenclaw demeanor at all. Vianstar can easily panic when things happen, and there is no calm demeanor of Ravenclaw. The first part is still the main line of Harry Potter, and the second part becomes the main line of the Avengers. It is completely unclear whether this article is about Harry Potter or the Avengers.

After reading it, I just... Feel like it would be better if there was no cp. As a whole, I feel that the story is a little bit here, a little bit there, a little east, a little west. I feel that the author wanted to write a lot but failed to integrate it well. It is barely readable when the writing is simply lacking.

After the fourth grade, I was confused and the ending was terrible. Ugh

Such a handsome male protagonist is treated like an accessory, not even an accessory. The emotional drama was average. It's a pity that it was so hard to find Cedric as the male protagonist.

Qian Daban was very good until I was in the fourth grade. It can be said that I stayed up all night watching it, and I felt a little depressed afterward.

Anticlimactic. I completely accepted the relationship between the heroine and Tony at the beginning and thought the description was delicate and wonderful. When Tony was a playboy, he was like a naughty boy, but later he was kidnapped. After he learned the responsibility, a series of changes were just right and natural. However, the content after the heroine was cursed by the people in Knockturn Alley and became intelligent seemed to be written by two people. The author said that this was a foreshadowing. But what I can't understand is, what is the foreshadowing about, and what is the original intention of writing this foreshadowing? About the invisibility cloak? But in the end, DaDa did not explain why the person gave the curse to the heroine because of the invisibility cloak. Secondly, this foreshadowing takes up nearly two-thirds of this article. When the heroine returns to Knockturn Alley and asks someone to break the curse, it ends within a few chapters, which is very sudden. What I dislike the most is the series of actions the heroine made when Cedric was about to die. I was really speechless. She yelled at Tony, believed in Loki, and attacked the earth together as a helper (although she failed and explained that she trusted the wrong person, but it was really annoying. Especially later, it seems particularly easy to just describe a chapter where the heroine is lifted from the curse. It makes me wonder why the heroine didn't solve this matter earlier. It's like the heroine deliberately delayed solving it until the end when she had no choice. To the viewer, it looks like the author has laid out an outline, but during the writing process, the outline is gone, and the author begins to play freely, until he finds that the circle cannot be returned, and then ends it hastily.

The writing of this article is very strange, the logic is unclear and the meaning is somewhat inexplicable, and the emotional description is even more inexplicable. Open high and go low

That is to say, it is a very incomprehensible article. It has a good idea, but the author's writing skills are not strong enough.

After watching it in one sitting, what impressed me most was that the heroine kept being knocked unconscious...