Reborn in the Apocalypse: Peachwood

Hmmmm, how should I put it, it feels like the writing is a bit messy, some parts are written in great detail, and then a lot of content is skipped over at once. . It's too big a leap. I have an inexplicable feeling,,, I don't know what the author wants to express.

I would like to think about the rationality of bringing thousands of people so far and back just to let Xiao Shou join the dragon group. Would a normal person just climb mountains and wading through rivers to find some dragon group without knowing anything, and then show up at the end and say that they are just soy sauce? Wang Xiaopang is really unreasonable, isn't he? He's out of breath even when he goes upstairs, so he can still follow those people? And doing it well? At the same time, why would the human-dragon team recruit you? What if you don't say anything to the selector and just let people find the camp on their own? Where did the news come from? Only 5 or 6 people out of 3,000 college students knew the news, and they all passed? Where has the logic gone? It has completely collapsed since the beginning of military training... ORZ

Age is a bit confusing! The previous article said that he had a 26-year-old soul, which means that he was 26 years old when he died. This chapter also says that he heard about the apocalypse ten years after the apocalypse, which means that he has lived for at least ten years in the apocalypse. It also says that he worked on Taobao for four years in college, which means that the apocalypse has not yet begun when he graduated from college. So how old did he go to school?

I always feel like I missed something. . . It feels like there is nothing excessive at any point. . . . .

. . Mo Yan returned to human society, worked hard, became a cowherd, then started writing novels, and then accidentally won a Nobel Prize. . . .

The overall setting of the article is still very good. The initial writing is very good, but once the length increases, the writing begins to be messy, stiff and forced, which is painful to read, like a child wearing adult clothes, awkward and weird.

Correction, what university did you go to?

Alas, I don't know what to say. Although I think it's a bit bad to compromise like this, the dead are dead (although Wu Xiaotao may not be dead), and the living must continue to live...

Why does Mao Wu Si keep targeting Tao Xia because of jealousy? But in this life, Yang Zhazha and Xiao Taozi have no relationship at all! So Wu Si probably suspected that Xiao Taozi was also reborn, and planned to take advantage of him first and get rid of him, right? !

No matter how talented Wu Si is, he is just a dodder. As long as his ambition is exposed, it is easy to destroy him. The reason why he can succeed now is because no one else takes this kind of pet seriously.