Daiyu was almost terrified. What was going on? She had clearly died, so why had she suddenly returned to her childhood? More importantly...
What was with all these concubine-born older sisters and brothers, stepmothers, secondary wives, and concubines? Who were Prince Beijingshui XX and Fourth Prince X Zhen?! Uncle She, why have you suddenly become so imposing and powerful, with your charisma blazing?!...
That was the blurb when I first started writing. Now that the story is complete, I can responsibly say that as it developed, it may have become less lighthearted. But I'm glad this story wasn't lighthearted all the way through.
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This article is quite good.
The only thing I didn't like was that the author wrote Daiyu's ending as Wangfushi.
According to my opinion, Jiangzhu came to earth not for the extra fairy dew, but for Shenying's love. So, after realizing that he is just a passerby in Shenying's life, will he still be attached to him?
And Shen Ying, who no longer ascends to heaven without looking at the fairy grass, is just a scum who spreads nectar everywhere.
How should I put it? There are many points in this article that I agree with, but there are also some that I don't agree with. I agree that everyone has shortcomings and his own choices, which creates a side that people in Red Mansions both love and hate.
But I don't agree that Baoyu is Daiyu's best partner. "Daiyu is too sober. If she is given another person who is deep, calm and sober, will the two of them still have love for the world? - But Baoyu sees the world as beautiful. That's why Baoyu can comfort her." I don't agree with this sentence at all. Daiyu's sobriety is not a problem. Her problem is that she grew up in a very bad environment. If she were in her own home and had her parents' care, her sobriety would make her a very good person and love the world.
But she was in a wolf den. Even if Jia Mu and Jia Baoyu were good to her, the most common thing they did was dig a hole to bury her. In this environment, her sobriety and her female identity were the root of the tragedy in her character. She could see it too clearly. , Her family property was taken away, her reputation was ruined, and the person who spoke the most intimate and thoughtful words to her was the one who dug a hole and buried her. These unreasonable actions caused her to die in the Jia family, achieving the tragedy of the Dream of Red Mansions, which led her to hate the world in the end.
If the Jia family today were a family with rules, conscience and morals, then Lin Daiyu would not have any entanglement with Jia Baoyu. Even if she wanted to get married when she grew up, Jia Baoyu would not be on her fiancé list. In ancient times, there was a tradition of blood and blood. Unless forced, Jia Baoyu and Lin Daiyu would never get together again, let alone the difference in status between the two.
I'm wrong. In fact, it would be bad if there was another deep, calm and sober person around Lin Daiyu. It's hard for me to say. Everyone has a peer effect and will subconsciously learn from the object of envy. I don't think a calm and deep Lin Daiyu will be so messed up that she will drive herself to death. When she can change, she will definitely find other ways out. I think so.
Of course, if there is an optimistic and cheerful person to accompany Daiyu, that is actually better and can help her to be happy, but being optimistic and cheerful does not mean innocence. Jia Baoyu is so naive that it is cruel, a kind of innocence that shrinks in a turtle shell. In fact, for Daiyu, it is a soft knife slowly cutting his flesh and blood, tearing her soul apart. Even if such innocence makes her live a safe life, I don't think it is a good thing.
God, reading this article feels like eating hotpot and maocai, all mixed together, the ingredients are repeated but not repeated, and it is the kind that leaves you unfinished until the end. Author, when are you going to write a HE ending for your sister...
She doesn't love Baoyu, but Daiyu still loves Shenying.
Shenying has seen through and let go of Jiangzhucao, but Jiangzhucao still can't let go of Shenying - the one who suffers is always the one who lets go.
Silly Jiangzhu!
The author's article is very interesting, but I don't agree that Baoyu is a good match for Daiyu.
What I hate the most in The Red Mansion is Jia Baoyu, Shi Xiangyun and Xue Baochai. Jia Baoyu has always been considered an innocent person, but I personally thought that he was a ghost. In Jia Baoyu's view, men are made of mud, women are made of water, and women who have lost their beauty and youth after getting married are like fish-eyed pearls. They are typical of those who talk based on their faces. Jia Baoyu is not only impure, but also has nothing to do with marriage, and has no responsibility. Otherwise, he would not have said a word when something happened to Jin Chuan. Please see Chapter 30 for details. Chapter 2: "He tells his heart that he is infatuated with Baoyu, and he dies of gold with shame. More importantly, he puts the blame on Sister Lin, that is, the Ou Guan burning paper incident. Specifically, it is Chapter 58. Xingzi pretends to be a phoenix and weeps as a phoenix, while Qian's real love behind the screen window is foolish. It's not like Jia Baoyu doesn't know Sister Lin's situation, so what a good match!
I finally understood that the purpose of this article was to torture Sister Lin a thousand times. . .
The author writes very well. I saw many comments below criticizing the author for being weird. To be honest, I can't understand it. This article is one of the rare fanfics that neither denigrates nor whitewashes the characters of Red Mansion. The evaluation of the characters may not be accurate, but it is very pertinent.
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Although Baoyu has many shortcomings, there is only one thing. He sincerely respects women and treats Daiyu sincerely. For this reason, I don't think he is hopeless, not to mention that he has indeed grown up slowly in many things.
Br/
There is also Jia Mu. I don't admit that the Jia Mu in the forty chapters of Gao E's continuation is the original Jia Mu. Gao E is so disgusting. I don't know how many people in Red Mansions were fooled by him.
Br/
Instead of blackmailing Mrs. Wang, it is better to see what Wang Xifeng has done, killing people, lending usury, and not knowing anything about Jia Rui. Of course Mrs. Wang is not a good person, she forced Jin Chuan'er to death, but compared to the evil-hearted Wang Xifeng, she is not as evil as ever. As for many people saying that she deliberately sought money and killed Daiyu to death, there was never any hint of this in the original work, and I don't think it was true. Even if she did swallow up Daiyu's property for the Grand View Garden, this was something Daiyu didn't know about. She couldn't possibly kill Daiyu for something that Daiyu didn't necessarily know.
Br/
Of course, the original work implicitly mentions that the Jia family did swallow up two million of the Lin family's wealth, so there should be no doubt about this.
Br/
As for not agreeing with Wood and Stone Frontier, I certainly don't agree either. It's not that Bao Dai is not a good match, it's that they are descended from the earth, and they should die as soon as Daiyu returns her tears. Otherwise, if Mu Shi gets married and Shenying and Jiang Cao have a causal relationship, it will be a bit of a cheat.
Br/
By the way, one more thing, about the fact that many people call Baoyu a broken stone... The piece of jade he carried in his womb was the Sky-Mending Stone. It had nothing to do with Shenying in the first place, okay? It was just a monk who put the sky-mending stone into Baoyu's mouth... Even if he wanted to scold Baoyu, breaking the stone was too far-fetched.
It's not a question of whether the writing is good or not, it's like this rnm
I would like to add a happy birthday (although it is much late)! It couldn't be more beautiful to see the fans of Red Mansion who have an appetite for it. Thank you, the author~
Although it's late, I still want to say: Happy birthday! I wish you good luck every year and every year.
The article is very good, well written and very comfortable to read. The writing is smooth and there is no awkward feeling. If there is another new article, I will follow it.
Thank you for the joy and enjoyment of reading.
This article is quite good. The only thing I didn't like was that the author wrote Daiyu's ending as Wangfushi. According to my opinion, Jiangzhu came to earth not for the extra fairy dew, but for Shenying's love. So, after realizing that he is just a passerby in Shenying's life, will he still be attached to him? And Shen Ying, who no longer ascends to heaven without looking at the fairy grass, is just a scum who spreads nectar everywhere.
How should I put it? There are many points in this article that I agree with, but there are also some that I don't agree with. I agree that everyone has shortcomings and his own choices, which creates a side that people in Red Mansions both love and hate. But I don't agree that Baoyu is Daiyu's best partner. "Daiyu is too sober. If she is given another person who is deep, calm and sober, will the two of them still have love for the world? - But Baoyu sees the world as beautiful. That's why Baoyu can comfort her." I don't agree with this sentence at all. Daiyu's sobriety is not a problem. Her problem is that she grew up in a very bad environment. If she were in her own home and had her parents' care, her sobriety would make her a very good person and love the world. But she was in a wolf den. Even if Jia Mu and Jia Baoyu were good to her, the most common thing they did was dig a hole to bury her. In this environment, her sobriety and her female identity were the root of the tragedy in her character. She could see it too clearly. , Her family property was taken away, her reputation was ruined, and the person who spoke the most intimate and thoughtful words to her was the one who dug a hole and buried her. These unreasonable actions caused her to die in the Jia family, achieving the tragedy of the Dream of Red Mansions, which led her to hate the world in the end. If the Jia family today were a family with rules, conscience and morals, then Lin Daiyu would not have any entanglement with Jia Baoyu. Even if she wanted to get married when she grew up, Jia Baoyu would not be on her fiancé list. In ancient times, there was a tradition of blood and blood. Unless forced, Jia Baoyu and Lin Daiyu would never get together again, let alone the difference in status between the two. I'm wrong. In fact, it would be bad if there was another deep, calm and sober person around Lin Daiyu. It's hard for me to say. Everyone has a peer effect and will subconsciously learn from the object of envy. I don't think a calm and deep Lin Daiyu will be so messed up that she will drive herself to death. When she can change, she will definitely find other ways out. I think so. Of course, if there is an optimistic and cheerful person to accompany Daiyu, that is actually better and can help her to be happy, but being optimistic and cheerful does not mean innocence. Jia Baoyu is so naive that it is cruel, a kind of innocence that shrinks in a turtle shell. In fact, for Daiyu, it is a soft knife slowly cutting his flesh and blood, tearing her soul apart. Even if such innocence makes her live a safe life, I don't think it is a good thing.
God, reading this article feels like eating hotpot and maocai, all mixed together, the ingredients are repeated but not repeated, and it is the kind that leaves you unfinished until the end. Author, when are you going to write a HE ending for your sister...
She doesn't love Baoyu, but Daiyu still loves Shenying. Shenying has seen through and let go of Jiangzhucao, but Jiangzhucao still can't let go of Shenying - the one who suffers is always the one who lets go. Silly Jiangzhu!
The author's article is very interesting, but I don't agree that Baoyu is a good match for Daiyu. What I hate the most in The Red Mansion is Jia Baoyu, Shi Xiangyun and Xue Baochai. Jia Baoyu has always been considered an innocent person, but I personally thought that he was a ghost. In Jia Baoyu's view, men are made of mud, women are made of water, and women who have lost their beauty and youth after getting married are like fish-eyed pearls. They are typical of those who talk based on their faces. Jia Baoyu is not only impure, but also has nothing to do with marriage, and has no responsibility. Otherwise, he would not have said a word when something happened to Jin Chuan. Please see Chapter 30 for details. Chapter 2: "He tells his heart that he is infatuated with Baoyu, and he dies of gold with shame. More importantly, he puts the blame on Sister Lin, that is, the Ou Guan burning paper incident. Specifically, it is Chapter 58. Xingzi pretends to be a phoenix and weeps as a phoenix, while Qian's real love behind the screen window is foolish. It's not like Jia Baoyu doesn't know Sister Lin's situation, so what a good match!
I finally understood that the purpose of this article was to torture Sister Lin a thousand times. . .
The author writes very well. I saw many comments below criticizing the author for being weird. To be honest, I can't understand it. This article is one of the rare fanfics that neither denigrates nor whitewashes the characters of Red Mansion. The evaluation of the characters may not be accurate, but it is very pertinent. Br/ Although Baoyu has many shortcomings, there is only one thing. He sincerely respects women and treats Daiyu sincerely. For this reason, I don't think he is hopeless, not to mention that he has indeed grown up slowly in many things. Br/ There is also Jia Mu. I don't admit that the Jia Mu in the forty chapters of Gao E's continuation is the original Jia Mu. Gao E is so disgusting. I don't know how many people in Red Mansions were fooled by him. Br/ Instead of blackmailing Mrs. Wang, it is better to see what Wang Xifeng has done, killing people, lending usury, and not knowing anything about Jia Rui. Of course Mrs. Wang is not a good person, she forced Jin Chuan'er to death, but compared to the evil-hearted Wang Xifeng, she is not as evil as ever. As for many people saying that she deliberately sought money and killed Daiyu to death, there was never any hint of this in the original work, and I don't think it was true. Even if she did swallow up Daiyu's property for the Grand View Garden, this was something Daiyu didn't know about. She couldn't possibly kill Daiyu for something that Daiyu didn't necessarily know. Br/ Of course, the original work implicitly mentions that the Jia family did swallow up two million of the Lin family's wealth, so there should be no doubt about this. Br/ As for not agreeing with Wood and Stone Frontier, I certainly don't agree either. It's not that Bao Dai is not a good match, it's that they are descended from the earth, and they should die as soon as Daiyu returns her tears. Otherwise, if Mu Shi gets married and Shenying and Jiang Cao have a causal relationship, it will be a bit of a cheat. Br/ By the way, one more thing, about the fact that many people call Baoyu a broken stone... The piece of jade he carried in his womb was the Sky-Mending Stone. It had nothing to do with Shenying in the first place, okay? It was just a monk who put the sky-mending stone into Baoyu's mouth... Even if he wanted to scold Baoyu, breaking the stone was too far-fetched.
It's not a question of whether the writing is good or not, it's like this rnm
I would like to add a happy birthday (although it is much late)! It couldn't be more beautiful to see the fans of Red Mansion who have an appetite for it. Thank you, the author~
Although it's late, I still want to say: Happy birthday! I wish you good luck every year and every year. The article is very good, well written and very comfortable to read. The writing is smooth and there is no awkward feeling. If there is another new article, I will follow it. Thank you for the joy and enjoyment of reading.