Curling Smoke from the Hearth

The ending here is pretty good, I believe they will all live a happier life.

The ending is too sudden. It's a heart-warming article. I look forward to more good articles from the author.

After reading it, let me tell you my thoughts after reading it (I hope everyone has the patience to read it): To be honest, this article has a lot of flaws. Most of them, I couldn't read it from Chapter 1 to Chapter 22. I didn't read it intermittently. I was defeated by the description in the article many times. Then I gave up and didn't read it for a month. I re-read the article because I have read other high-quality novels before. As you all know, high-quality will always affect my mood. In order to adjust, I happened to have it in my uncategorized, so So I continued reading. To be honest, after reading more than 30 chapters, I was still full of flaws. Later, I found out that a few chapters after this article were even included in V. I really realized that any kind of article can be included in V to make money. I once again wanted to give up and stop reading. I felt deeply that the author was really humiliated. Who gave him the courage to think that his scumbag article could be included in V? Editor? If it is really the editor, then I have nothing to say. For the first 40 chapters, the writing style is childish, there are a lot of typos, the character description is confusing, and the personality changes are really messy. If such a article can be included in V, I really feel like it is a waste of my jj coins. I originally wanted to give up after seeing this, but I read the comments and it said that the attack was changed later, and then the comments said that the attack was changed. I was very curious about what happened, so I read it again. After about 50 chapters, to be honest, I started to feel that I couldn't continue reading. Those who have read the full text should know that the author's writing style will gradually get better. , What started as a sloppy article slowly turned into a sloppy article, and finally, the writing style began to smoothly become "literary". Not to mention anything else, except for a few typos, the article was readable. In the early morning, I read the chapter into V in an hour. I really want to encourage the author here. Compared with the previous chapters, the article into V The chapters are really much better, especially the change of attack mentioned later. I express my personal opinion here, but it doesn't actually count as a change. Yu'er and He Zhengping had a good impression of each other at the beginning, and nothing was confirmed. It's just that later on, He Zhengping alienated the relationship for unknown reasons. No matter what the reason, the author must have his own reasons for this arrangement, and And Lao Wang is not bad. Although the characters in the author's works are messy, it is normal for a silly and sweet article. Moreover, Yu'er and Lao Wang are very good together. At least they don't have to be stepmothers. Lao Wang is also good to Yu'er. Everyone should remember that all the author's arrangements are to make Yu'er happy. As long as Yu'er is happy, that's fine. In addition, although I still think that the writing style of this article is a waste of jj coins, but to be honest, the following articles can be read, and they are also completed smoothly. Although I feel it is a bit unfinished, but overall it is very good that the full text can be completed without any mistakes. Buying the genuine article and supporting the author, I think it is also encouraging the author. After all, there are really not many aboriginal farming articles, and I hope he can write better and better.

Is there something wrong with Yuanyuan's age? I remember that Baoer was conceived after Yuanyuan was born. Logically speaking, Yuanyuan is the youngest at one year old, right?

Finally made up the points! The younger brother is a perfect couple, and the older brother is very resentful. I hope you will write more good articles~~ spread flowers, spread flowers

Supplementary points YOYOYO

I really feel that He Zhengping can be expanded upon and written about, and there must be quite a story.

To make up the points, I want He Zhengping x brother

It's enough to make up points. It's enough for young people in their twenties to make up points like crazy here!

People are drifting in the world, how can they not make up points... Orz is not very coherent