The sea brought me to ancient times!! As the eldest daughter of a declining family, I can only sigh as my upright, old-fashioned father is constantly deceived by his unscrupulous brother-in-law. I've seen enough of these relatives looking down on the poor and sucking up to the rich. I've decided to hold this family together myself! But a woman is still a woman, so for my parents' sake, I've decided to take an orphan as my husband!!
This young woman is so unusual. She was different even as a child... Now she's grown up, and I hear she's looking for an orphan to marry?! How intriguing. Let's see if I, the lonely king, measure up~~
Being a royal bride is no easy task. Power struggles and schemes are beginning to unfold~
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In fact, I found that the author is a bit unstable. The article is actually quite good, but maybe the author doesn't like to read the article he has written. In fact, there are some contradictions in many places. Of course, it does not affect the overall situation, but it still seems to have some minor flaws, especially the extra chapters. I feel that this way of writing is superfluous. Of course, this does not affect my liking for this article. I like the heroine in it, and I also like the various characters around her~~~~especially those cute little girls, each one is more arrogant than the other, haha. Of course, to be honest, the main article is good, especially the second half, but the extras do not necessarily have to be so straightforward. The article In fact, everyone in the house has realized it. We can write about the mentality of the Cui family girl in every move. After all, she has been described a lot before, but there is very little description of her inner activities. In fact, we can use the description of her heart to show that the male protagonist is dedicated to the female protagonist. This way the MS will be more exciting~~~~Quack quack
I've finished reading it. It's very well written. I'm going to read a lot of other works. Let's take a look and spread some flowers.
It looks so hard for me. The overall structural framework of the article is okay, the writing style is also good, and I like the story and the characters of the male and female protagonists. However, it is really hard to read. Many places feel very abrupt and completely disconnected. It's like a long article with a few selected paragraphs put together. The preface and follow-up are inconsistent, and some plots are confusing and inexplicable. In fact, it can be seen that the author wrote it very carefully and hard, but there are many shortcomings. If it can be revised and revised, it will definitely be a good article.
Actually, I quite like this kid Qingmu. . .
Occasionally it's a little hollow and ominous, but overall it's good-looking.
Talk. . . I finally finished reading it. . . . . . . Worn out. . . So long. . . Next go see Enchanting. . .
Reading it from beginning to end, I feel that sometimes there are some things that I can't understand. Sometimes I might rather be able to understand what I want to express, but for us readers, it might be confusing. . . Dabao has already given many examples, so I won't go into details. . . The heroine is a bit too strong. . . Personally, I don't like overly strong female protagonists. . . And Yu Wu sometimes became inexplicably entangled, unable to determine her position, or her mood changed too suddenly. What I can remember is that when Yu Wu told the emperor that she was going to pick up the orb from a certain temple but was rejected, although she did not approve of her behavior, seeing her and the emperor in a stalemate, she suddenly said that she was just acting coquettishly. . . . . . I was really chilled when I saw it. . . . . . Is this emotional change a little too unnatural? The big eyes that were still childish and the small eyes suddenly became very calm again. . . Moreover, does this behavior count as coquettishness? . . Also, I felt that the article was a little delayed. Maybe Ning wanted to describe too many things, and the heroine was a little too strong and had a hand in everything. . . I don't know if Ning takes love as the main line, but I feel that there is too little emotional description of Yu Wu in the article, especially her feelings for the emperor. I always feel that it is not logical enough for her to fall in love with the emperor. . . Some details are not described in detail enough, and the ending feels a bit rushed, as if I want to finish the article quickly, and the pace suddenly speeds up.
Ning also said that this is his first work, and there will inevitably be some dissatisfaction. It is indeed not easy to write such a long work, and it can be seen from many details that Ning put a lot of thought into it (I personally pay more attention to certain small details, as well as logical coherence...), Such as rituals, descriptions of characters' clothing, palace struggles, etc. (Although I don't really understand what Prime Minister You is doing, and then... Orz... So I've finally read it.
The next story about twins, Ning, keep it up
DaDa must make the heroine happy. We will always support you. However, DaDa is indeed a bit reserved. We also hope that DaDa's new works can be updated more frequently. The current update speed is really too slow and we can't get enough of it. Please keep up the good work and update.
Reading articles at home during the holidays, being lazy and enjoying myself~ Author's reply:
It's great~~I'm exhausted after New Year's Day…
In fact, I found that the author is a bit unstable. The article is actually quite good, but maybe the author doesn't like to read the article he has written. In fact, there are some contradictions in many places. Of course, it does not affect the overall situation, but it still seems to have some minor flaws, especially the extra chapters. I feel that this way of writing is superfluous. Of course, this does not affect my liking for this article. I like the heroine in it, and I also like the various characters around her~~~~especially those cute little girls, each one is more arrogant than the other, haha. Of course, to be honest, the main article is good, especially the second half, but the extras do not necessarily have to be so straightforward. The article In fact, everyone in the house has realized it. We can write about the mentality of the Cui family girl in every move. After all, she has been described a lot before, but there is very little description of her inner activities. In fact, we can use the description of her heart to show that the male protagonist is dedicated to the female protagonist. This way the MS will be more exciting~~~~Quack quack
I've finished reading it. It's very well written. I'm going to read a lot of other works. Let's take a look and spread some flowers.
It looks so hard for me. The overall structural framework of the article is okay, the writing style is also good, and I like the story and the characters of the male and female protagonists. However, it is really hard to read. Many places feel very abrupt and completely disconnected. It's like a long article with a few selected paragraphs put together. The preface and follow-up are inconsistent, and some plots are confusing and inexplicable. In fact, it can be seen that the author wrote it very carefully and hard, but there are many shortcomings. If it can be revised and revised, it will definitely be a good article.
Actually, I quite like this kid Qingmu. . .
Occasionally it's a little hollow and ominous, but overall it's good-looking.
Talk. . . I finally finished reading it. . . . . . . Worn out. . . So long. . . Next go see Enchanting. . . Reading it from beginning to end, I feel that sometimes there are some things that I can't understand. Sometimes I might rather be able to understand what I want to express, but for us readers, it might be confusing. . . Dabao has already given many examples, so I won't go into details. . . The heroine is a bit too strong. . . Personally, I don't like overly strong female protagonists. . . And Yu Wu sometimes became inexplicably entangled, unable to determine her position, or her mood changed too suddenly. What I can remember is that when Yu Wu told the emperor that she was going to pick up the orb from a certain temple but was rejected, although she did not approve of her behavior, seeing her and the emperor in a stalemate, she suddenly said that she was just acting coquettishly. . . . . . I was really chilled when I saw it. . . . . . Is this emotional change a little too unnatural? The big eyes that were still childish and the small eyes suddenly became very calm again. . . Moreover, does this behavior count as coquettishness? . . Also, I felt that the article was a little delayed. Maybe Ning wanted to describe too many things, and the heroine was a little too strong and had a hand in everything. . . I don't know if Ning takes love as the main line, but I feel that there is too little emotional description of Yu Wu in the article, especially her feelings for the emperor. I always feel that it is not logical enough for her to fall in love with the emperor. . . Some details are not described in detail enough, and the ending feels a bit rushed, as if I want to finish the article quickly, and the pace suddenly speeds up. Ning also said that this is his first work, and there will inevitably be some dissatisfaction. It is indeed not easy to write such a long work, and it can be seen from many details that Ning put a lot of thought into it (I personally pay more attention to certain small details, as well as logical coherence...), Such as rituals, descriptions of characters' clothing, palace struggles, etc. (Although I don't really understand what Prime Minister You is doing, and then... Orz... So I've finally read it. The next story about twins, Ning, keep it up
DaDa must make the heroine happy. We will always support you. However, DaDa is indeed a bit reserved. We also hope that DaDa's new works can be updated more frequently. The current update speed is really too slow and we can't get enough of it. Please keep up the good work and update.
Reading articles at home during the holidays, being lazy and enjoying myself~ Author's reply: It's great~~I'm exhausted after New Year's Day…
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