I Once Saw Chang'an

It's been more than a month...

It's been more than a month...

I think it's quite interesting to write and the technique is interesting.

Is the author offline? QwQ

Jiujiu is good, Gu Yue here, I am very happy to write a long review for Jiujiu. Gu Yue read Jiujiu's article and found that there are no bad or annoying points, so I will mainly talk about my feelings and some shortcomings. Seeing the four words "I've seen Chang'an", Gu Yue thought of Hetu's "Not Seeing Chang'an", so she thought that this should be a story about a talented man and a beautiful woman in Chang'an city, but she didn't expect that it had another meaning. Now let's peel off an onion and analyze Jiujiu's writing. First, the title of the book. "Once Upon a Time in Chang'an" is a decent title, neither literary nor cheerful, but it has a hint of melancholy. The first impression is that it is a sadistic novel. But... When I opened it, wow, it was so joyful. I wonder if the ending is sad or not? Gu Yue thinks that the title of this book should make people understand its attributes clearly at a glance. Secondly, I have seen many books with titles like xx and xx Chang'an, which can easily be "lost to everyone" in the Jinjiang River. Of course, Gu Yue personally thinks that the title of this book is acceptable, but from the perspective of increasing data, it is still recommended to modify it after careful consideration, for example: the prime minister's wife is a lolita, the prime minister is having trouble... (Gu Yue is used to being unruly, here is just an example~) Second, copywriting. To be honest, the first few sentences of Jiujiu's copywriting are good, but the next few sentences start to repeat themselves, and I don't know what to express. "No... No..." What are these sentences talking about? And why use so much pen and ink? Very cumbersome. The first few sentences mention the marriage by name, and the heroine cannot escape nor does she want to escape. What about their lives later? But those few sentences are really too general and not cute. There shouldn't be too much copy, but the cute points should be put out concisely. There are two styles of copywriting: either cruel to the heart, or cute to the heart. Obviously, Jinjiang is dominated by the second type, which is also suitable for the drinking and drinking style. You can write a few lines of loving dialogue, add some introductions like this, or just be happy with it all. For example: the emperor wanted her to marry Zuo Xiang, but Chang An didn't have the guts to run away. Even threats and threats failed to make Zuo Xiang resist the decree and marry Bai Lianhua, so she had no choice but to marry him obediently. Just marry as soon as you get married. What does it mean if a fox pretends to be a tiger or a tiger has power, is domineering, or is a misguided minister? Come and pinch your legs and slap your back! (Again, forgive Lone Yue for being so imaginative). One more thing to say here, the reason Gu Yue spends so much time talking about book title copywriting is because they are the packaging of the article and are very important to newcomers! If the copy of the book title is not attractive, how can readers read it? Third, the most important thing is content. Plot, this is one of the most important aspects of any novel. If the plot is not good, there is no need to discuss it! The story concept of Jiujiu is good, but the plot structure, character behavior, and psychological handling are a bit poor. In the first few chapters, some places are described too hastily. For example, when the male and female protagonists are alone together, this requires a lot of ink to emphasize and express emotions! But why are there only a few positive descriptions and so much space on people peeking at them? This is a mispricing. After drinking, you should pay attention to it. Be detailed when it is necessary and be brief when it is necessary. The writing style, Huan Tuo, has nothing to say, it's very good, and many people like this tune. There's nothing to say about the writing style, I just think it's good. The problem comes back to the plot again. Jiujiu doesn't write much now, and this problem has not arisen yet. I would like to remind you that the article must have ups and downs. You must write hard at the climax, otherwise the climax will not be high and the low will not be low. The rhythm of the plot must be grasped well. Fourth, some minor issues. Let's talk about some minor issues. First, Jiujiu needs to decorate the text and get some font colors and so on. Secondly, Jiujiu's name is not easy to pronounce and difficult to pronounce. That's basically it, as I said before, let's encourage you together, come on! ==Di Ge Que Branch——Chang Ping Hall Gu Yue Comment==

Jiujiu is good, Gu Yue here, I am very happy to write a long review for Jiujiu. Gu Yue read Jiujiu's article and found that there are no bad or annoying points, so I will mainly talk about my feelings and some shortcomings. Seeing the four words "I've seen Chang'an", Gu Yue thought of Hetu's "Not Seeing Chang'an", so she thought that this should be a story about a talented man and a beautiful woman in Chang'an city, but she didn't expect that it had another meaning. Now let's peel off an onion and analyze Jiujiu's writing. First, the title of the book. "Once Upon a Time in Chang'an" is a decent title, neither literary nor cheerful, but it has a hint of melancholy. The first impression is that it is a sadistic novel. But... When I opened it, wow, it was so joyful. I wonder if the ending is sad or not? Gu Yue thinks that the title of this book should make people understand its attributes clearly at a glance. Secondly, I have seen many books with titles like xx and xx Chang'an, which can easily be "lost to everyone" in the Jinjiang River. Of course, Gu Yue personally thinks that the title of this book is acceptable, but from the perspective of increasing data, it is still recommended to modify it after careful consideration, for example: the prime minister's wife is a lolita, the prime minister is having trouble... (Gu Yue is used to being unruly, here is just an example~) Second, copywriting. To be honest, the first few sentences of Jiujiu's copywriting are good, but the next few sentences start to repeat themselves, and I don't know what to express. "No... No..." What are these sentences talking about? And why use so much pen and ink? Very cumbersome. The first few sentences mention the marriage by name, and the heroine cannot escape nor does she want to escape. What about their lives later? But those few sentences are really too general and not cute. There shouldn't be too much copy, but the cute points should be put out concisely. There are two styles of copywriting: either cruel to the heart, or cute to the heart. Obviously, Jinjiang is dominated by the second type, which is also suitable for the drinking and drinking style. You can write a few lines of loving dialogue, add some introductions like this, or just be happy with it all. For example: the emperor wanted her to marry Zuo Xiang, but Chang An didn't have the guts to run away. Even threats and threats failed to make Zuo Xiang resist the decree and marry Bai Lianhua, so she had no choice but to marry him obediently. Just marry as soon as you get married. What does it mean if a fox pretends to be a tiger or a tiger has power, is domineering, or is a misguided minister? Come and pinch your legs and slap your back! (Again, forgive Lone Yue for being so imaginative). One more thing to say here, the reason Gu Yue spends so much time talking about book title copywriting is because they are the packaging of the article and are very important to newcomers! If the copy of the book title is not attractive, how can readers read it? Third, the most important thing is content. Plot, this is one of the most important aspects of any novel. If the plot is not good, there is no need to discuss it! The story concept of Jiujiu is good, but the plot structure, character behavior, and psychological handling are a bit poor. In the first few chapters, some places are described too hastily. For example, when the male and female protagonists are alone together, this requires a lot of ink to emphasize and express emotions! But why are there only a few positive descriptions and so much space on people peeking at them? This is a mispricing. After drinking, you should pay attention to it. Be detailed when it is necessary and be brief when it is necessary. The writing style, Huan Tuo, has nothing to say, it's very good, and many people like this tune. There's nothing to say about the writing style, I just think it's good. The problem comes back to the plot again. Jiujiu doesn't write much now, and this problem has not arisen yet. I would like to remind you that the article must have ups and downs. You must write hard at the climax, otherwise the climax will not be high and the low will not be low. The rhythm of the plot must be grasped well. Fourth, some minor issues. Let's talk about some minor issues. First, Jiujiu needs to decorate the text and get some font colors and so on. Secondly, Jiujiu's name is not easy to pronounce and difficult to pronounce. That's basically it, as I said before, let's encourage you together, come on! ==Di Ge Que Branch——Chang Ping Hall Gu Yue Comment==

I can't stop being cute while feeling sad... The author is really good at chess [Squatting]

O(∩_∩)O haha~well written

Not bad, not bad, hahahahahahahahahaha

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