She should have enjoyed all the riches of this world, but unforeseen events shattered the life she was meant to have. With no other choice, she cast off her silken robes, took up a commander's token, and painted thick brows before the mirror. She crossed mountains and pursued rivers...
He was a prodigy of astonishing eloquence, named top scholar by the emperor himself. He had his sights set on others and the realm, yet in the end, love ensnared him. Was he lovesick, foolish, wise, or something else entirely...?
They laugh at him as mad and curse him as a court jester, but he cares nothing for what others think. When the time comes to act, when the time comes to decide, how could he hesitate over which path to take...?
He seems like a carefree immortal, yet the falling leaves bring autumn sorrow, laying bare his sour, antiquated ways. And still, he can measure the whole world, with everything within fingertip's reach. Who can wield a sword...?
In a turbulent age, whose sword will he take up, and whose beauty will he destroy? In love and enmity, who will have their hair disheveled, and whose brows will be broken?
Sorry, very sorry!!! I've been too busy lately and haven't had much time to read. My sense of self has gone beyond the route I like (just what I like), and the rigor of the language has become somewhat loose. Stopping is necessary, keep going!! Support you
The reason why the copywriting looks messy is because you haven't read it to the end. When you see it, you will find that every sentence of the copywriting is to the point. Also, sir, when Wen Yun returned to the emperor, he said that he was a little distracted just now. This is not good. He is a wise man, and the small things are more obvious. If in this place, he is asked to use other words to lead the audience, or if his words are so clever that the emperor repeats his own questions, it will be even more obvious that he is smart. Anyway~ come on
It can be seen that you are planning to write a text with more literary talent and a grand background. 8 But the feeling of the copywriting can be summed up in one word: messy. PS: If the prince returns the favor and becomes emperor, can his daughter be called princess?
Alas, you don't use the perfect version I modified for you. I'm so disappointed.
It's a good beginning, I'll continue reading first Sprinkle flowers ********* Come on big
There was a sudden power outage yesterday, so I read the article today.
The man in the middle is wearing a yellow robe and a purple jade dragon crown on his head. He is graceful and elegant yet noble. ======= The prince cannot use bright yellow before he ascends the throne. To avoid misunderstanding, it is recommended to change it to purple, which was the color of the prince's robe in the Tang Dynasty. I feel that many adjectives are used in inappropriate places. I suggest that we pay attention to this issue in future chapters.
You don't want to take revenge but you actually speak for your enemy. You are really ashamed of your ancestors. "======MS wouldn't be very good at using you on women, right?
Very well written! I'm here to support you.
To be honest, I like scholars, and they are the kind with good minds. The sinister version is the best! Never mind, I'm talking nonsense. I'm quite optimistic about Wen Yun, but it's a pity that he doesn't seem to be the protagonist. Well, Tangtang, there seem to be a lot of characters. I think the scene will be very grand. It will be difficult to control, so be careful. Please read this first and keep going! Fly away~~