[Sui-Tang Romance / Luo Qin] The Tong Pass Oath

Luo Cheng can no longer guard his cousin [silently covering his heart]

Read it ten times. It was obviously a good article about Qing Mian Yi Tong, but it was deleted again! It's really heart-breaking and makes me unhappy if I don't read it thoroughly. I went to YCOOL again, but still couldn't find [Tongguan Jue]. I only hope that the author will be considerate and put the full text of "Tongguan Jue" properly on YCOOL, so as to satisfy my desire to read. . .

Read it ten times. It was obviously a good article about Qing Mian Yi Tong, but it was deleted again! It's really heart-breaking and makes me unhappy if I don't read it thoroughly. I went to YCOOL again, but still couldn't find [Tongguan Jue]. I only hope that the author will be considerate and put the full text of "Tongguan Jue" properly on YCOOL, so as to satisfy my desire to read. . .

I followed Luo Qinwen almost all the way. I really like this storytelling style. I remember being amazed when I first saw it. Later, I signed up as a lofter and read the large-scale Chenglou article. I liked it very much and later bought a book. "Ling Ding" is also a great article. I have been reading this series of articles for many years, but I have never left a single word. I recently read it again and felt that I should leave something to show that I have read it.

This is the last article by Luo Qin that I read in DaDa's column, and I really can't bear to click on it. It was a long time ago that I came into contact with the Romance of the Sui and Tang Dynasties. I followed it a few days ago when I was on Lehu Suchenglou, and then I read about Chang'an Dream in your article. Later I visited Jinjiang and saw this series of articles. Thanks for bringing me into the trap. I like this pair of CPs very much. But I'm really desperate. I have too little food. I'm afraid I'm going to starve to death at the bottom of the pit (crying

I have briefly read this series, and the original work was more sadistic... Hmm, but I feel that Luo Cheng's character portrayal is a little too young...?

I found this article to be finished, so give it a thumbs up. Although... I was so tortured by the plot in the middle that I stopped somewhere and didn't dare to read on for the time being... Looking forward to the author's new article.

Seeing this final poem again, I still feel all kinds of emotions and my heart is at peace. First of all, I would like to sincerely thank the author for his hard work in writing this article for the past year and a half, and for giving us Luo Qin Party members who are waiting for food a warm and lasting spring. As a reader, I can only express my love and respect for Dada with a simple "thank you" - thank you for the vivid cousins ​​in Dada's writings, thank you for the different Sui and Tang Dynasties that Dada created, and thank you for every touch that Dada brings. Then I would like to apologize profusely to the author. Although I have been following the series of articles, I have rarely written any decent comments. I understand how difficult it is to write an article, and I also know that many of you have experienced disappointment in the process of writing an article, but you still dare not comment due to various reasons. But I really like this series of storytelling fanfiction. I believe there are others like me who, although they don't say it out loud, really love it silently. I hope everyone will know our existence and forgive us for being silent. Reading this series of articles is my first time following a serial. I am very lucky to have met such a dedicated author. In the process of chasing the series, you may enjoy the happiness of picking up and dropping it every day, or you may savor and magnify every drop of the ups and downs in the slightly long wait due to anticipation, until you reluctantly welcome the end. From the first "Under the Purple Mountain" to the last "Tongguan Jue", reading all the way, I can see the continuity of style and emotion, as well as the development of story and characters. I personally think that "Under the Purple Mountain" is about asking for directions. It is short in length and has a simple plot. Compared with the content, the storytelling style restored by God is more eye-catching. Starting from "Yangzhou Hate", it revolves around the clues of the oath of three lives, thousands of miles away, and it is completely integrated. But each article has a unique focus, describing the process of emotional sublimation of the cousins ​​- from simple companionship, to the entanglement of fate in choices, to the fusion of souls in twists and turns. The small foreshadowings that swing out from time to time and are promptly closed add to the rigor and vividness. It's hard to say which one I like more, because each one is full of cuteness. From the perspective of macro layout, "Luoyang Tribulation" is the most majestic and compact. It is a hearty read, and the unclear tangles burst out in irreversible helplessness. It is impossible to relax for a moment while reading. In "Tongguan Jue", I prefer those warm details, no matter the sweetness or bitterness, they are calm. The most intense plot appears in the retelling, which is naturally less shocking, but has more aftertaste and stamina. Although the main theme of the series is sadism, I still feel it is sour and sweet after reviewing it. The cousins ​​in the article have complete trust and understanding, which is the root of the tragic ending and the greatest comfort after grief. Especially when the two of them revisited their weapons in their dreams at the end, it was really heartwarming that made people blush. There are also the cousins' oaths that appear constantly in the article. I am always moved when I read and recollect them repeatedly. Without these oaths, it would not be so painful when the tragedy is staged, but there would be no beauty and any color. Therefore, the abuse in this article is more popular than deliberately creating contradictions and misunderstandings to achieve the effect of torturing people's hearts. Only then can it achieve a state of laughter in tears that cannot be achieved by abuse. Moreover, the whole text almost follows the storytelling route, and the integration of the love between children and children does not detract from the heroic spirit of the story itself at all. On the contrary, the sharp righteousness of family and country has been softened. How can I put it, I personally think it is more reasonable and acceptable. I have so many feelings about this series of articles that I can't sort them out, and I'm not very good at explaining them. All in all, I really like this series of articles and admire and admire the author very much. Finally, let me say those very simple words again. Congratulations to the author for the successful completion of Da Da. Well... I would also like to express my expectations for Da Da Da's next works, and my gratitude to Da Da Da for contributing a wonderful voice. Thank you. (This is my first time to write a long review. I really have no experience. I don't know what to say at all. I said a lot of nonsense, which may be too subjective. Please understand my excitement. If there is anything inappropriate, please forgive me.)

That's it! I haven't seen enough... I haven't seen enough!

Finally waited for the update, but. . . . . Is it an eternal farewell? Can the fans of the original novel stop at this point?