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I haven't been reading Danmeiwen for a long time. On my fingers, it's been eight years. Except for the large amount of absorption in the first two or three years due to curiosity, nymphomaniacs and hunger, in recent years, I have watched less and less. Just occasionally when I feel tired, I turn on my computer, listen to music, and read articles.
Follow "I love your sister!" At the beginning, I wanted to see another hole that Carrot dug before. So at the beginning, I didn't have much expectations for the article "Loving...". After all, another pit has arisen before it has been leveled. For me, who is impatient and impatient, it is a challenge in itself. Therefore, this review contains quite a bit of emotion.
In fact, from every story of Luobo, we can see that he wants to present the tough, optimistic, and sunny side of life to everyone through the people and things in the story. His desire to make everyone happy after reading the story is not concealed at all. "I love your sister!" The article is no exception.
It is precisely with this original intention that Luo Bao's writing style has always been cheerful. Among the secrets to staying cheerful, there is a common technique: using a lot of Internet buzzwords. This habit has always been there, but it was further reflected in "Love...". But after reading the whole article, I always feel that there is something missing and something more than the previous articles. So I found a friend who is my age and asked her to read the article and give her some opinions on how she felt about the text. The answer she got was pretty much what I thought. This kind of interesting vocabulary that is widely popular in a certain range will feel fresh when one or two appear from time to time. If it is used throughout the entire text, it will be a bit difficult for aunt-level readers like us. Like ACG? Or is it AGC? I was embarrassed when I saw it. But this is really not a problem. Just like when I see a boy with bunny ears, I want to run away but many people will crowd around him. It's just a matter of personal preference. However, external embellishments are always only part of the story, not all of it. When there are too many witticisms that cover up the backbone of the story, isn't the story itself weaker before it has time to become stronger? However, a truly powerful author is one who can make people read his story word for word even though his way of speaking may not appeal to people. For example, Jin Da's "Eat Grapes Without Spitting Out Grape Skins" was written in a straightforward manner without any passion. It made me complain and enjoy watching it all the way through. After reading it, I still lingered there looking forward to the sequel with a mean look on my face.
Back to "Loving...", The handsome men in the article are better than each other, how can you appreciate them. A beautiful man stands in front of you, where should you look at him first? Eye? Mouth? Neck? Waist? …No matter what other people's habits are, I like to look at their strips first, which is the overall sense of coordination from head to toe. If your profile is straight, red lips, white teeth, and creamy skin will be the icing on the cake. But if your profile is not straight enough, even if you have the face of Pan An, it will not be pleasing to the eye with a chicken breast, barrel chest, or anything like that. Reading an article is the same as looking at a beautiful man. Fortunately, the article "Love..." So far has not been formed or incomplete. When the causes and consequences of the story are straightened out, the bones will take shape. It's just that Luo Bao's writing has always been detailed and understated, not hurried or slow. To put it bluntly, it's a bit procrastinating. I really don't know how long it will take to get the clue.
There is also the grudges and sorrows in the story. Everyone has their own opinions on this. There is not much to say, but I still want to say a few words. There is a section in the article that left a particularly deep impression on me: Ye Hui calmly said that even though Xiaofan saw him sleeping with someone, he still asked him if he could start over. At that moment, he felt that Ye Hui was not an ordinary scumbag, and he didn't like the word, but other than scumbag, he couldn't think of any other word to describe him. But I don't sympathize with Xiaofan either. In anything, if the old doesn't go away, the new doesn't come.
Finally, a little nonsense. The reason why a good article becomes a good article is because it is complete. Even if there will still be complaints from readers from all walks of life after it is completed, it is just some nagging due to unsatisfied selfish desires. Therefore, although I feel that the big pitfalls of the previous article "Ten Years of Hardship" are more attractive to me, if "Love..." Can be successfully completed, then it will be transcendent.
I originally said that I would write a 100,000-word long review, but I waited and waited. I couldn't wait for that day, so I posted it first. Anyway, those who write reviews are generally not here to read the article seriously. People who really want to read the article and are happy with it will not interfere with others' reading by chirping while reading, like me now. Therefore, carrying forward the "Kan Bawang" article and carrying Bawang to the end will definitely become the direction of future efforts! Make a fist and work hard!
It's rare to meet Gundam Seed fans, come on! ! !
恭喜~~~
虽然很舍不得,还是请先保重身体和BB~~~~~
悲剧吗？那不看了
That waiter was so pitiful, but it was a pity that he had found the wrong person. . . . .
It looked good, but it ended too quickly.
Come on...
Update what you wrote well
If you want to occupy the magpie's nest, you can't boast about the fighting ability of the beasts.
I think~ Jiang Naoshu from the original work should be allowed to pass through and experience it!
Hey, please come back and update soon! !
So break your fingers
6·23ah 6·23= =
Why is it the peak period for final review?
So this is another tall, handsome, rich and disabled person? Younger than Su~~~~~
Jiu Niuniu, honestly!
Isn't this when you were a kid?
Don't abuse Si'er QAQ, touch the big one
写得很好。我很喜欢。大大加油。
Today, all international gestures have come out. .
千~ 加油写。还不错啦。
期待后文,冒个泡泡~~~
These kids are so funny~~~
Nani? I was confused, who is Xu Jingxian?
Where have the good people gone?
Hey, this is the consequence of not reading the above carefully...
By the way, I went shopping on Danmei's sub-channels today, and I actually saw some scumbags in Ji Dao Qian Fei!
I was so excited at that time!
Then I saw... It was really yours...
Help, I burst out laughing. 233333 Is so annoying with everyone's online names! ! And it's been a long time since I saw Hongji, he is the best god in the world. The captain almost cried hhhhhhhhhhhhh
Did he ask him to find Garsha?
I just hope that Merlin won't be in the same group as Sean.
I agree with what you said above! ! I want H, I want H! ! ! ! In order not to abuse the author, I must give another score! !
I'm here, I'm here, meow!
After reading this article, I suddenly thought of a certain episode of the comic "Pink Lady"~
When you see the category is Danmei, you should have thought of it.
Mr. Choi Choi ~ Soy Sauce discovered a shocking secret ~
Nimei = Nimei~~~
Meow hahahaha~~Yes~~
I haven't been reading Danmeiwen for a long time. On my fingers, it's been eight years. Except for the large amount of absorption in the first two or three years due to curiosity, nymphomaniacs and hunger, in recent years, I have watched less and less. Just occasionally when I feel tired, I turn on my computer, listen to music, and read articles. Follow "I love your sister!" At the beginning, I wanted to see another hole that Carrot dug before. So at the beginning, I didn't have much expectations for the article "Loving...". After all, another pit has arisen before it has been leveled. For me, who is impatient and impatient, it is a challenge in itself. Therefore, this review contains quite a bit of emotion. In fact, from every story of Luobo, we can see that he wants to present the tough, optimistic, and sunny side of life to everyone through the people and things in the story. His desire to make everyone happy after reading the story is not concealed at all. "I love your sister!" The article is no exception. It is precisely with this original intention that Luo Bao's writing style has always been cheerful. Among the secrets to staying cheerful, there is a common technique: using a lot of Internet buzzwords. This habit has always been there, but it was further reflected in "Love...". But after reading the whole article, I always feel that there is something missing and something more than the previous articles. So I found a friend who is my age and asked her to read the article and give her some opinions on how she felt about the text. The answer she got was pretty much what I thought. This kind of interesting vocabulary that is widely popular in a certain range will feel fresh when one or two appear from time to time. If it is used throughout the entire text, it will be a bit difficult for aunt-level readers like us. Like ACG? Or is it AGC? I was embarrassed when I saw it. But this is really not a problem. Just like when I see a boy with bunny ears, I want to run away but many people will crowd around him. It's just a matter of personal preference. However, external embellishments are always only part of the story, not all of it. When there are too many witticisms that cover up the backbone of the story, isn't the story itself weaker before it has time to become stronger? However, a truly powerful author is one who can make people read his story word for word even though his way of speaking may not appeal to people. For example, Jin Da's "Eat Grapes Without Spitting Out Grape Skins" was written in a straightforward manner without any passion. It made me complain and enjoy watching it all the way through. After reading it, I still lingered there looking forward to the sequel with a mean look on my face. Back to "Loving...", The handsome men in the article are better than each other, how can you appreciate them. A beautiful man stands in front of you, where should you look at him first? Eye? Mouth? Neck? Waist? …No matter what other people's habits are, I like to look at their strips first, which is the overall sense of coordination from head to toe. If your profile is straight, red lips, white teeth, and creamy skin will be the icing on the cake. But if your profile is not straight enough, even if you have the face of Pan An, it will not be pleasing to the eye with a chicken breast, barrel chest, or anything like that. Reading an article is the same as looking at a beautiful man. Fortunately, the article "Love..." So far has not been formed or incomplete. When the causes and consequences of the story are straightened out, the bones will take shape. It's just that Luo Bao's writing has always been detailed and understated, not hurried or slow. To put it bluntly, it's a bit procrastinating. I really don't know how long it will take to get the clue. There is also the grudges and sorrows in the story. Everyone has their own opinions on this. There is not much to say, but I still want to say a few words. There is a section in the article that left a particularly deep impression on me: Ye Hui calmly said that even though Xiaofan saw him sleeping with someone, he still asked him if he could start over. At that moment, he felt that Ye Hui was not an ordinary scumbag, and he didn't like the word, but other than scumbag, he couldn't think of any other word to describe him. But I don't sympathize with Xiaofan either. In anything, if the old doesn't go away, the new doesn't come. Finally, a little nonsense. The reason why a good article becomes a good article is because it is complete. Even if there will still be complaints from readers from all walks of life after it is completed, it is just some nagging due to unsatisfied selfish desires. Therefore, although I feel that the big pitfalls of the previous article "Ten Years of Hardship" are more attractive to me, if "Love..." Can be successfully completed, then it will be transcendent. I originally said that I would write a 100,000-word long review, but I waited and waited. I couldn't wait for that day, so I posted it first. Anyway, those who write reviews are generally not here to read the article seriously. People who really want to read the article and are happy with it will not interfere with others' reading by chirping while reading, like me now. Therefore, carrying forward the "Kan Bawang" article and carrying Bawang to the end will definitely become the direction of future efforts! Make a fist and work hard!
It's rare to meet Gundam Seed fans, come on! ! !
恭喜~~~ 虽然很舍不得,还是请先保重身体和BB~~~~~
悲剧吗？那不看了
That waiter was so pitiful, but it was a pity that he had found the wrong person. . . . .
It looked good, but it ended too quickly.
Come on... Update what you wrote well
If you want to occupy the magpie's nest, you can't boast about the fighting ability of the beasts.
I think~ Jiang Naoshu from the original work should be allowed to pass through and experience it!
Hey, please come back and update soon! !
So break your fingers 6·23ah 6·23= = Why is it the peak period for final review?
So this is another tall, handsome, rich and disabled person? Younger than Su~~~~~
Jiu Niuniu, honestly! Isn't this when you were a kid?
Don't abuse Si'er QAQ, touch the big one
写得很好。我很喜欢。大大加油。
Today, all international gestures have come out. .
千~ 加油写。还不错啦。
期待后文,冒个泡泡~~~
These kids are so funny~~~
Nani? I was confused, who is Xu Jingxian? Where have the good people gone? Hey, this is the consequence of not reading the above carefully... By the way, I went shopping on Danmei's sub-channels today, and I actually saw some scumbags in Ji Dao Qian Fei! I was so excited at that time! Then I saw... It was really yours...
Help, I burst out laughing. 233333 Is so annoying with everyone's online names! ! And it's been a long time since I saw Hongji, he is the best god in the world. The captain almost cried hhhhhhhhhhhhh
Did he ask him to find Garsha?
I just hope that Merlin won't be in the same group as Sean.
I agree with what you said above! ! I want H, I want H! ! ! ! In order not to abuse the author, I must give another score! !
I'm here, I'm here, meow!
After reading this article, I suddenly thought of a certain episode of the comic "Pink Lady"~
When you see the category is Danmei, you should have thought of it.
Mr. Choi Choi ~ Soy Sauce discovered a shocking secret ~ Nimei = Nimei~~~ Meow hahahaha~~Yes~~