Hmm...? There are very few comments. Maybe it's because Long Ya's bg friendship is too cold. The writing of the article is okay, but it actually has little to do with King of Nets. After all, the character Long Ya only appears a little in the extras and New King of Nets, so there is quite a lot of room for development in terms of character. The heroine is more important than Long Ya herself, so I think the title is okay, it's really just a bit [Long Ya related]. Looking at the articles alone, considering that it was a few years ago and he was the king of the Internet... The writing level can be considered above average.
To be honest, among the light-hearted short stories I have read, this article can definitely be ranked in the top three, or even the first. It has a heart-warming feeling and is full of positive energy.
But first of all, please allow me to despise why the author, who clearly has such a writing style, was unwilling to come up with a stunning title, but instead came up with the title "Long Ya Related" so perfunctorily - although I admit that this title is very clear and to the point. In fact, there is a sentence that appears many times in the article - he is different from others - so if you think of a title around this sentence, I think it is quite appropriate, such as "unique", or just "seeing the future from the beginning" is not a bad idea. Of course, since I am also a bad name maker, you can ignore my suggestions.
Because it is a friendship-oriented film, there is no need to spend special time writing emotional scenes. Long Ya's own personality and characteristics can be expressed more clearly, including the interaction with Mu Ge. This is also highlighted. Although the narrative perspective is in the first person of Muge, the center of attraction is always Long Ya. Whether it is his refreshing appearance at the airport, his rescue intentionally or unintentionally three years ago, even if he loses his moral integrity from time to time, is lazy and has no motivation and is unwilling to learn Korean, he is always extremely handsome when he needs it most.
"I have a tennis racket, and the world is in my hands."
He doesn't seem to stop for anyone, he just keeps moving forward for a big dream. This is probably where the charm of Echizen Ryuya lies. But he is not the only one in the world, so when he sees the lovelorn Mo Ge in a convenience store, he asks her to take him back to U-17; now three years later, he makes jokes to guide Mo Ge out of the shadow of the breakup and invites her to go to Japan with him. Mu Ge was very similar to him, at least he longed for a life like Long Ya's without many bonds, and only on this basis could they get to know each other in a short period of time.
The rhythm of the writing is very comfortable and relaxed. The introduction of Mu Ge's own situation and the love dispute with Qin Huan were explained clearly in a few strokes, without overshadowing the subject. The interlude about the memories from three years ago is just right, and Long Ya's role at that moment and its significance to Mu Ge are also kept in a suspenseful way until later. It can be said that Long Ya is not only such a free and uninhibited person, he also has a charm that makes people around him throw away their baggage and stride forward like him.
The author's writing style is even more outstanding, whether it is the floor-to-ceiling style Echizen Ryuya, the Echizen Ryuya whose eyes are full of light, the imageless Kitajima Muge chewing chicken legs, the Kitajima Muge grinning with tiger teeth, or the dreamy color of love a few years ago, which is gentle and poetic enough to drown people but extremely short-lived. Not deliberate, not pretentious.
Originally, the image of Ryuya Echizen that stayed in my memory was probably just that "big orange", but now I can happily describe him with two phrases.
A man like the wind, a man like a mystery.
[Actually, this is just something I found the last hundred words to be hard to squeeze out, so I forced myself to say it?
In short, I really like the Long Ya shown to me here, and I also like Mu Ge who cheered up and gradually became a wind-like woman with Long Ya's encouragement [beat
Well, finally I want to say that Long Ya should be about 20 centimeters taller than Ryoma... Even according to the setting of 168cm of the new network king Ryoma = =|||
Great and rare article, keep it up?*??(^?^*)??*?
Hmm...? There are very few comments. Maybe it's because Long Ya's bg friendship is too cold. The writing of the article is okay, but it actually has little to do with King of Nets. After all, the character Long Ya only appears a little in the extras and New King of Nets, so there is quite a lot of room for development in terms of character. The heroine is more important than Long Ya herself, so I think the title is okay, it's really just a bit [Long Ya related]. Looking at the articles alone, considering that it was a few years ago and he was the king of the Internet... The writing level can be considered above average.
To be honest, among the light-hearted short stories I have read, this article can definitely be ranked in the top three, or even the first. It has a heart-warming feeling and is full of positive energy. But first of all, please allow me to despise why the author, who clearly has such a writing style, was unwilling to come up with a stunning title, but instead came up with the title "Long Ya Related" so perfunctorily - although I admit that this title is very clear and to the point. In fact, there is a sentence that appears many times in the article - he is different from others - so if you think of a title around this sentence, I think it is quite appropriate, such as "unique", or just "seeing the future from the beginning" is not a bad idea. Of course, since I am also a bad name maker, you can ignore my suggestions. Because it is a friendship-oriented film, there is no need to spend special time writing emotional scenes. Long Ya's own personality and characteristics can be expressed more clearly, including the interaction with Mu Ge. This is also highlighted. Although the narrative perspective is in the first person of Muge, the center of attraction is always Long Ya. Whether it is his refreshing appearance at the airport, his rescue intentionally or unintentionally three years ago, even if he loses his moral integrity from time to time, is lazy and has no motivation and is unwilling to learn Korean, he is always extremely handsome when he needs it most. "I have a tennis racket, and the world is in my hands." He doesn't seem to stop for anyone, he just keeps moving forward for a big dream. This is probably where the charm of Echizen Ryuya lies. But he is not the only one in the world, so when he sees the lovelorn Mo Ge in a convenience store, he asks her to take him back to U-17; now three years later, he makes jokes to guide Mo Ge out of the shadow of the breakup and invites her to go to Japan with him. Mu Ge was very similar to him, at least he longed for a life like Long Ya's without many bonds, and only on this basis could they get to know each other in a short period of time. The rhythm of the writing is very comfortable and relaxed. The introduction of Mu Ge's own situation and the love dispute with Qin Huan were explained clearly in a few strokes, without overshadowing the subject. The interlude about the memories from three years ago is just right, and Long Ya's role at that moment and its significance to Mu Ge are also kept in a suspenseful way until later. It can be said that Long Ya is not only such a free and uninhibited person, he also has a charm that makes people around him throw away their baggage and stride forward like him. The author's writing style is even more outstanding, whether it is the floor-to-ceiling style Echizen Ryuya, the Echizen Ryuya whose eyes are full of light, the imageless Kitajima Muge chewing chicken legs, the Kitajima Muge grinning with tiger teeth, or the dreamy color of love a few years ago, which is gentle and poetic enough to drown people but extremely short-lived. Not deliberate, not pretentious. Originally, the image of Ryuya Echizen that stayed in my memory was probably just that "big orange", but now I can happily describe him with two phrases. A man like the wind, a man like a mystery. [Actually, this is just something I found the last hundred words to be hard to squeeze out, so I forced myself to say it? In short, I really like the Long Ya shown to me here, and I also like Mu Ge who cheered up and gradually became a wind-like woman with Long Ya's encouragement [beat Well, finally I want to say that Long Ya should be about 20 centimeters taller than Ryoma... Even according to the setting of 168cm of the new network king Ryoma = =|||