
Returning Alone (Prince of Tennis, 82 / Yagyuu Niou Fanfiction)
独自归还(网王82/柳生仁同人)
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 206k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 11y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
62Chapters
577Favorites
9.1Score
67Nutrient gifts
1.8kClicks per chapter
82Comments
In booklists 2
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I actually read this article half a year late. I have some regrets, but I'm really happy that I didn't miss such a good article again. The setting of FATE+Net King is simply great. Although I really want to complain about the white-furred fox's hidden strength, it really took a lot of effort, but in the end it really surprised me. This foreshadowing is so deep, I want to learn from the coach! (Gun As a big fan with a tendency to be obsessed with all things, Jirou's "Because Atobe has been my big hero since the first grade" and Syaoran's "You protect the Hyo-Empire, and I will do my best to protect you." Are simply not me! Must like! There are actually quite a few places in the whole story that tortured me. Personally, I feel that basically as long as you are in the right state to play the game and being beaten to death by your opponent's moves bit by bit, it is already a very bad way to die. It would be better to let Xiao 2 shoot the head with a shot, which is simple, rough and clean. Therefore, I still find some places that may not have been designed by you, my wife, to be abusive. When reading other articles, I usually pay attention to the interaction and emotional scenes between the CPs, but in this article, I am more looking forward to the plot than the emotional scenes. I can't wait to follow the wife's plot. I am quite surprised. The plot is really great! It's totally okay to be a little abusive! Anyway, I'm a sweet and sadistic take-it-all type of person (hey I feel that this is not messy at all. This must be praised. Many netizens who have all members and multiple CPs will be a bit messy. Speaking of which, I also want to write an online game setting for all members. Little 2 must be a fox demon. At this time, little 8 will have to hide the profession of demon slayer/onmyoji! However, I am a plot addict. I really want to dream about plot points like my wife. I have guessed it in several places, such as Echizen's Noble Phantasm is the "Protagonist Aura", and the uncle will go into battle in person, and Xiaojin probably also has the protagonist effect, and the moon-gazing notebook can be used for questions and answers, and it is the apocalypse, but Echizen really Even with the main character halo turned on and knowing that Xiao Ben was going to watch the moon and the cathedral, I was still decisively overwhelmed by the flaws. However, I was tortured by Xiao 8's death. It was simply a bad taste. (Crossed out) Madam, do you dare to say you didn't do it on purpose (crossed out). In fact, I like the "sick" character very much, so I quite like Xiao 2's character who is on the verge of madness. Can I tell you? The laughter is well integrated into the story, and it does not ruin the overall tragic atmosphere. The development is very natural. I really should confess to my wife. In addition... I also want to ask for a copy, but after half a year, I feel that I am so heartbroken that I will still have one...
Really well written QWQ
Although I finished reading it a long time ago, I just thought of commenting now. My wife's writing is really beautiful, the plot is very complete, and the setting is also very good. Although my wife may have gone out of my way, I still really want to read new stories. Speaking of which, the national version of the new Prince of Tennis game is about to be tested.
"Speed is the speed of a bullet. If you are prepared, you can completely avoid it." It is indeed one of the schools that debuted on the old network the latest!
Great writing! Wwwwwww, the character completes a lot www, it's so fun to watch wwww If I hadn't searched for 82 on a whim, I would have missed it www
I would like to ask if there is anyone who likes to return children's shoes alone as much as I do, and hopes to have a notebook of children's shoes returned alone as a souvenir.
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Since the last time I left a message, Jinjiang has been so busy that I can't leave a message or post a message_(:з)∠)_I don't know if my wife will be able to read it this time. Anyway, this article is great! If 36 is not closed, the popularity will definitely not be low (after all, it is not that easy to find good and unpopular articles in Jinjiang). It is not easy for the Kyushu duo to be sweet until now. However, they all guessed that Gensokyo is at Yukimura's place, which makes me feel that it is not his place. After all, although there are not many people in Rikkai, But looking at the remaining stronger ones, Hyokui can definitely be counted as two people, Seigaku is about to become the commander-in-chief, Shitenhoji Temple only has two servants left, and Tatekai also has an advantage in terms of basic ability. If Gensokyo is added, the only thing we can deal with is the Holy Grail (or the church), right?
Even Rikkai Ouchi, the legendary Yukimura the Great Demon King, did not expect that the shared vision could not be turned off and he almost had to watch the love affair between the deputy minister and the Hyotei minister from the first-person perspective, hhhhh
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