Bridge over the Vast Sea

2024.7.9.00:00

His brother wants to take revenge on that girl?

None of this goes together? Can you bear it?

After reading the first two chapters, I felt that the opening chapter lacked highlights and tension. Keep up the great work, come on!

So it will be updated on time tonight?

Grab a couch and let me calm down!

1. The author's description is relatively detailed, but there are a few details that need attention. 1.1——The usage of [De Di De] is relatively confusing, and we often see mixed usage, which makes patients with obsessive-compulsive disorder more uncomfortable. 1.2——Although the descriptions are detailed, there are not many [useful words]. Many descriptions are too general and have no direct relationship with the plot direction or character creation. Good descriptions only focus on the key points. I suggest you read more novels about the Six Dynasties. I think that genre does a good job of conveying romance in just a few words. 2. Plot The beginning is a relatively smooth one, with no special surprises, but the conflicts are a bit too smooth. Ancient words and modern words are different. Authors of ancient words tend to be very patient, but authors of modern words have relatively high requirements for the beginning. It is recommended to create a more favorable conflict at the beginning to add tension to the article. The above is a family statement

It was obviously planned by the male protagonist.

So the male protagonist deliberately makes the female protagonist angry?

Damn it, are you about to start abusing me?