With a chubby little dog in her arms, Chen Xi chased after him, shouting in exasperation, "Veterinarian Gu, stop right there!"
Gu Wang stopped and turned around, staring at her expressionlessly.
She stopped and immediately flashed him a flattering smile. "Our Er Niu has been listless and off his food for the past few days. Doctor Gu, please take a look."
"Off his food? Hmm?"
"His diet failed, and now he's depressed! So hurry up and treat him!" Chen Xi said earnestly.
"It's incurable. He's a lost cause!"
"Doctor Gu, please don't give up on him. He's still so young!" Chen Xi pleaded mournfully. He took out his car keys, and she obediently opened the passenger door and climbed in, as if to say, If you won't save him, I'll follow you for the rest of my life.
Actually, this is a sad story. Ah P narrowed his eyes and said to Chen Xi, "He studied for his master's and doctorate at that school, and even graduated without ever getting to see you... Gu Wang's putting on such a show, I can't even stand watching."
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1. Updated daily. From now on, updates will be around 11:00 p.m.
2. There will be a transition through the school-life portion, and later the story will lean more toward city life. It's a veterinarian's story, with a little melodrama thrown in. Happy ending.
3. This is the author's first story, so please be gentle~~
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Are the only animals in people's eyes are dogs and cats? How can TT bear to eat chickens, sheep, cows, pigs and fish that have flesh and blood?
This article sucks! ! You can obviously keep writing! ! ! I really want to see the back
(*^ _ ^*) It's August 20th... Waiting for your new story!
This is the end... Is it too rushed... I have to make up for it with an extra episode...
Well, thank you for your hard work... Writing articles is not easy... Come on, it's also a good thing for me to be a half-grown magic horse.
Forgot to rate... T^T
The words are just gone? In the copywriting, did I miss the scene where Chen Xi asked Gu Wang to heal Er Niu or I just didn't see it...
And... When Mr. Xi called Daddy for help during the tragedy... That couple... Author, did you originally want to write about Daddy and Mr. Zeng?
There will be a next article~.~
Hello, author, this is A Ruo. Before I start commenting, I must emphasize that everyone has their own preferences when reading articles, so it is inevitable that they will read an article with strong subjectivity. I am the same. For this article, I skipped some parts to read it. If there is something wrong with what is said, or something that makes the author uncomfortable, please do not take it too seriously.
First, let's talk about the plot of this article.
To put it simply, the female protagonist and the male protagonist originally met each other on campus. Later, the female protagonist encountered some bad things in her family, so she fell ill and left in the hospital. Two years later, she saw that the male protagonist had already left her lover sadly. They had no contact for eight years. The male protagonist was heartbroken and waited for the female protagonist for ten years. Finally, the female protagonist came back. She still looks aloof and plays with everyone, even with the male protagonist. When the truth is revealed, the female protagonist feels guilty and is smoothed over. She can deal with the numb mistress and the boyfriend's cheating girlfriend with peace of mind. Then Daddy is cleansed, saying that Daddy is actually a good man. She had no choice but to split the family. I guess the subsequent plot is almost done with the mistress and the fake girlfriend confessing to each other and getting married, and then the couple can return the family home. It is not outstanding enough, but it is also in line with the popular plot of reunion after breaking up. As long as it is enjoyable to watch, it is enough.
I have always felt that the heroine has neglected things in some places. The heroine is like the white lotus heroine in those sadomasochistic love stories. She has a lot of friends around her, and all of her friends point their arrows at the male protagonist who actually did nothing wrong. In fact, I think the male protagonist was wronged a bit. From an objective point of view, he actually did nothing wrong. Moreover, he waited for ten years without knowing anything. For ten years, he waited willingly. Even if he got another girlfriend, so what.
In the end, the truth finally came out, it was all a misunderstanding and just a misunderstanding. But the heroine is still very awkward at this time. From a personal perspective, I have always felt that love is reciprocal. With such an unfair love, I can't help but sigh: Male protagonist... There are so many good women in the world, why are you holding on to the female protagonist so much... But this kind of plot is also cute from another perspective. The male protagonist clings to the female protagonist affectionately and will not let go. No matter if the female protagonist leaves him for ten or twenty years, he will remain loyal and silently wait for the female protagonist... It depends on the beholder.
In the episode about Dad's cleansing, the heroine's daddy is Mr. Chen, a well-known entrepreneur in City X. He has troubles but can't explain it to his beloved wife. In the end, he slaps his lover in the face, which makes her face swollen. When her daughter asks him for help, she is having fun with other women, which ultimately leads to her daughter's schizophrenia... It seems weird, right? Actually, I think so too.
Because the author ignored a detail here. I would like to ask the author QwQ, have you ever thought about it? As an elite person with IQ and EQ, Mr. Chen has a relationship with his wife, why would he and his wife not see each other for three years? Why does the black face in the main text make me feel that this daddy is really not a human being, but it is completely whitewashed in the extra chapter? It is too inconsistent. This kind of explanation cannot explain the plot line of the final breakup. Has the author considered whether it is not appropriate to let Mr. Chen go? Let me tell you, if you want to be dark, just go as dark as possible. Keep it dark and never look back. It's better not to wash it off than to wash it off. The more I wash it, the darker it becomes. It's so dark that it's even green [laughs].
Then let's talk about the overall structure of the article.
No matter how you say it, the plot goes relatively smoothly, everything is handled reasonably and quite cutely. But the author, you, personally feel that the plot of the previous part of the school and the second part of the present is a bit confusing, so you should continue to think about it. When I read Chapter 20, I have been secretly worried about what will happen to the male and female protagonists in the end, what misunderstandings are there, what misunderstandings will lead to ten years of not seeing each other, etc. - But the author, you gave me so many chapters while I was worrying about what is going on on campus!
To be honest, I don't particularly want to know about their happiness on campus. At this time, I feel like I just want to know the plot behind it, I want to know about the misunderstanding!
Moreover, author, can you tell me, the campus in chapters 17-23 that is suddenly inserted in the middle... What is their meaning? Is it foreshadowing? Is it foreshadowing? Or what? Since it's nothing but memories, I think it's best for the author not to suddenly insert a campus scene during a key plot moment... This can easily cause many readers to become annoyed and not read the plot that you worked so hard to write.
Also, by the way, I vomited some terrible things in the first two chapters while reading them. I think the author must be racking his brains while writing, thinking about what is on his campus? The flowers over there, the trees over there... The hillside over there, what wonderful memories... But! Are we writing urban articles or literary and artistic stories? Why do you mention so many things?
From the environment to the memory part? This is not bad, but you must also grasp the issue of proportion... To be honest, what are the characteristics of Jinjiang's online articles? They are fast to the topic, smooth plot, interesting points, and contradictory points. The first chapter should have cute and interesting points so that readers can follow it. If possible, it is best to point out the center of your article and what you want to write around. In fact, this is similar to the way of writing an argumentative essay... I seem to have digressed, sorry...
In general, the question about the structure is: insert the campus and the city together, or else write the entire campus first and then the city, or else insert bits and pieces of the campus into the city that are related to the urban scene at that time. It is not recommended to directly put the campus part into the city in a row. Moreover, when the reader is secretly waiting for the contradiction, a sudden visit to campus can easily lead to aesthetic fatigue, and the reader's emotional transformation cannot be in place. After seeing the passive and dull heroine first, the painting style suddenly became lively and cute... The drama was instantly criticized_(:з∠)_.
Then there are too many side branches and too complicated. There are too many small stories that have nothing to do with the main plot in the article. It is recommended that the small stories be slightly changed to serve as a small foreshadowing or back-and-forth for the following. The main emotional line is not clear enough, and the male protagonist's role does not seem to have a female partner and a male counterweight...
Finally, let's talk about the issue of writing.
Speaking of writing style, give the author a thumbs up. The author's writing style is very good. In some places, the words and sentences used are very impressive, which is particularly impressive. And whether it is the description of family, love or friendship, the heart is in place. The text gives people a very elegant feeling. It will be very happy when it is time to be happy, and the atmosphere created is very good. It will be very sad when it is time to be sad. In other words, the author's writing style is quite good. As long as the structure and the tendency to talk nonsense can be changed, I think the author will definitely be able to write a better article!
Produced by Changchang Changchang Pingpu Aruo
As I expected, it is really not easy for men...
It's not easy for anyone, no matter whether they are men or women, no matter what they do. We are always particularly considerate of the difficulties faced by people of the same sex
Are the only animals in people's eyes are dogs and cats? How can TT bear to eat chickens, sheep, cows, pigs and fish that have flesh and blood?
This article sucks! ! You can obviously keep writing! ! ! I really want to see the back
(*^ _ ^*) It's August 20th... Waiting for your new story!
This is the end... Is it too rushed... I have to make up for it with an extra episode... Well, thank you for your hard work... Writing articles is not easy... Come on, it's also a good thing for me to be a half-grown magic horse.
Forgot to rate... T^T
The words are just gone? In the copywriting, did I miss the scene where Chen Xi asked Gu Wang to heal Er Niu or I just didn't see it... And... When Mr. Xi called Daddy for help during the tragedy... That couple... Author, did you originally want to write about Daddy and Mr. Zeng?
There will be a next article~.~
Hello, author, this is A Ruo. Before I start commenting, I must emphasize that everyone has their own preferences when reading articles, so it is inevitable that they will read an article with strong subjectivity. I am the same. For this article, I skipped some parts to read it. If there is something wrong with what is said, or something that makes the author uncomfortable, please do not take it too seriously. First, let's talk about the plot of this article. To put it simply, the female protagonist and the male protagonist originally met each other on campus. Later, the female protagonist encountered some bad things in her family, so she fell ill and left in the hospital. Two years later, she saw that the male protagonist had already left her lover sadly. They had no contact for eight years. The male protagonist was heartbroken and waited for the female protagonist for ten years. Finally, the female protagonist came back. She still looks aloof and plays with everyone, even with the male protagonist. When the truth is revealed, the female protagonist feels guilty and is smoothed over. She can deal with the numb mistress and the boyfriend's cheating girlfriend with peace of mind. Then Daddy is cleansed, saying that Daddy is actually a good man. She had no choice but to split the family. I guess the subsequent plot is almost done with the mistress and the fake girlfriend confessing to each other and getting married, and then the couple can return the family home. It is not outstanding enough, but it is also in line with the popular plot of reunion after breaking up. As long as it is enjoyable to watch, it is enough. I have always felt that the heroine has neglected things in some places. The heroine is like the white lotus heroine in those sadomasochistic love stories. She has a lot of friends around her, and all of her friends point their arrows at the male protagonist who actually did nothing wrong. In fact, I think the male protagonist was wronged a bit. From an objective point of view, he actually did nothing wrong. Moreover, he waited for ten years without knowing anything. For ten years, he waited willingly. Even if he got another girlfriend, so what. In the end, the truth finally came out, it was all a misunderstanding and just a misunderstanding. But the heroine is still very awkward at this time. From a personal perspective, I have always felt that love is reciprocal. With such an unfair love, I can't help but sigh: Male protagonist... There are so many good women in the world, why are you holding on to the female protagonist so much... But this kind of plot is also cute from another perspective. The male protagonist clings to the female protagonist affectionately and will not let go. No matter if the female protagonist leaves him for ten or twenty years, he will remain loyal and silently wait for the female protagonist... It depends on the beholder. In the episode about Dad's cleansing, the heroine's daddy is Mr. Chen, a well-known entrepreneur in City X. He has troubles but can't explain it to his beloved wife. In the end, he slaps his lover in the face, which makes her face swollen. When her daughter asks him for help, she is having fun with other women, which ultimately leads to her daughter's schizophrenia... It seems weird, right? Actually, I think so too. Because the author ignored a detail here. I would like to ask the author QwQ, have you ever thought about it? As an elite person with IQ and EQ, Mr. Chen has a relationship with his wife, why would he and his wife not see each other for three years? Why does the black face in the main text make me feel that this daddy is really not a human being, but it is completely whitewashed in the extra chapter? It is too inconsistent. This kind of explanation cannot explain the plot line of the final breakup. Has the author considered whether it is not appropriate to let Mr. Chen go? Let me tell you, if you want to be dark, just go as dark as possible. Keep it dark and never look back. It's better not to wash it off than to wash it off. The more I wash it, the darker it becomes. It's so dark that it's even green [laughs]. Then let's talk about the overall structure of the article. No matter how you say it, the plot goes relatively smoothly, everything is handled reasonably and quite cutely. But the author, you, personally feel that the plot of the previous part of the school and the second part of the present is a bit confusing, so you should continue to think about it. When I read Chapter 20, I have been secretly worried about what will happen to the male and female protagonists in the end, what misunderstandings are there, what misunderstandings will lead to ten years of not seeing each other, etc. - But the author, you gave me so many chapters while I was worrying about what is going on on campus! To be honest, I don't particularly want to know about their happiness on campus. At this time, I feel like I just want to know the plot behind it, I want to know about the misunderstanding! Moreover, author, can you tell me, the campus in chapters 17-23 that is suddenly inserted in the middle... What is their meaning? Is it foreshadowing? Is it foreshadowing? Or what? Since it's nothing but memories, I think it's best for the author not to suddenly insert a campus scene during a key plot moment... This can easily cause many readers to become annoyed and not read the plot that you worked so hard to write. Also, by the way, I vomited some terrible things in the first two chapters while reading them. I think the author must be racking his brains while writing, thinking about what is on his campus? The flowers over there, the trees over there... The hillside over there, what wonderful memories... But! Are we writing urban articles or literary and artistic stories? Why do you mention so many things? From the environment to the memory part? This is not bad, but you must also grasp the issue of proportion... To be honest, what are the characteristics of Jinjiang's online articles? They are fast to the topic, smooth plot, interesting points, and contradictory points. The first chapter should have cute and interesting points so that readers can follow it. If possible, it is best to point out the center of your article and what you want to write around. In fact, this is similar to the way of writing an argumentative essay... I seem to have digressed, sorry... In general, the question about the structure is: insert the campus and the city together, or else write the entire campus first and then the city, or else insert bits and pieces of the campus into the city that are related to the urban scene at that time. It is not recommended to directly put the campus part into the city in a row. Moreover, when the reader is secretly waiting for the contradiction, a sudden visit to campus can easily lead to aesthetic fatigue, and the reader's emotional transformation cannot be in place. After seeing the passive and dull heroine first, the painting style suddenly became lively and cute... The drama was instantly criticized_(:з∠)_. Then there are too many side branches and too complicated. There are too many small stories that have nothing to do with the main plot in the article. It is recommended that the small stories be slightly changed to serve as a small foreshadowing or back-and-forth for the following. The main emotional line is not clear enough, and the male protagonist's role does not seem to have a female partner and a male counterweight... Finally, let's talk about the issue of writing. Speaking of writing style, give the author a thumbs up. The author's writing style is very good. In some places, the words and sentences used are very impressive, which is particularly impressive. And whether it is the description of family, love or friendship, the heart is in place. The text gives people a very elegant feeling. It will be very happy when it is time to be happy, and the atmosphere created is very good. It will be very sad when it is time to be sad. In other words, the author's writing style is quite good. As long as the structure and the tendency to talk nonsense can be changed, I think the author will definitely be able to write a better article! Produced by Changchang Changchang Pingpu Aruo
As I expected, it is really not easy for men...
It's not easy for anyone, no matter whether they are men or women, no matter what they do. We are always particularly considerate of the difficulties faced by people of the same sex