HP: Adagio

Please keep reading! It was quite difficult to read it at first because it mentioned too many names of original characters and I can't remember them all. But the author's wife's background and setting of the story are amazing. It involves Norse mythology and other medium-to-high-level magic content, which enriches the wizarding world. Especially the description of Durmstrang's campus life is so realistic that it feels like you have actually read there!

This is my third brush. I was still young when I played the first and second brushes, so I looked at it perfunctorily because there were too many names and a huge world view. I can't remember it clearly. I only vaguely remember that it is Bai Yueguang, one of the HP fans from another magic school and magic world. Now I'm back on my 3rd page and want to express my personal opinions. The author really wants to highlight the step-by-step growth of the cowardly and overprotected heroine into a "princess", but it's really hard for me to see the details. Just like that damn man Wolf who was always looking for trouble, Lola had always chosen to tolerate it for various reasons and factors. It wasn't until he almost killed Lola that she thought about helping his parents teach him a lesson. Who knows why he lost his memory, and then the heroine inexplicably gave up on holding him accountable? . ? If it were me, I really wouldn't be able to accept it. It's a miracle that the heroine, who has been bullied at school for a long time, doesn't grow crooked. My fists were hardened when I saw her. I was about to see the heroine take revenge, but suddenly she didn't hold her accountable. I was like a deflated balloon. . . Author, are you too lazy to please him? Doge Another issue is the characters. First of all, there are too many names, really too many. I tried 3 times and still can only roughly remember which name corresponds to which event. . . Moreover, the presence of the male protagonist is also very weak. I even think that my cousin has more scenes than him hahaha. Because the male protagonist is like him. . . A tool who grows up with the heroine? I feel that the subsequent plot is torture for the sake of torture. The male protagonist must have more and better ways. He proposed to break up and "joined" the Death Eaters without saying goodbye. I personally think there must be a better solution, such as leaving some clues to hint to the female protagonist about his current status. Of course, it's okay for the author to write this way, but when I read it, I felt like it was torture for the sake of torture. In terms of character, the heroine is really cowardly most of the time. She was already in fourth grade, and facing someone like Wolfe who didn't take classes seriously and relied on water for magic, the heroine still couldn't control her emotions and was so excited that she rioted again and transformed into a "Typhoon Girl". But the heroine is a person with both good character and academics who joins the black magic society. Shouldn't she be able to freely control her emotions when studying black magic? Facing an opponent with a bucket of water in his belly, no, a little bastard, the heroine still felt humiliated and angry. It was inevitably a bit far-fetched to rely on the uncontrollable burst of magic hereditary to deal with a "defenseless" bastard with an empty mind. Of course, there are many reasons why this book serves as my white moonlight. I am very interested in the daily life of other magic schools (the author is a doge of Beauxbatons Academy life) The author's description, writing, and creative abilities are really strong. This time I was more mature and played 3 more times. When I saw the description of Lola's first entrance into Durmstrang, I had that scene in my mind! I can even imagine the scene from inside the school where I can see the lake reflecting the tranquil and majestic snow-capped mountains outside. The majestic and majestic scenery of the heaven and earth, which is in line with the strict school ethos of Durmstrang, has a sense of majesty and solemnity with the vicissitudes of history. It is not too much to print on a postcard (I have even made up a doge in my mind. Some of Lola's inner descriptions are also spot on. I had a quarrel with Anos, and I couldn't help but speak harshly, exacerbating the conflict, I couldn't help but apologize, give in, and have a cold war. This periodic table is also my daily routine, so it is a very real little detail of life, haha. Of course, when I read this article, I was looking forward to seeing the plot of Lola's visit to Hogwarts. The author did not disappoint me. He grasped the right balance and was involved in the plot without being too involved in the plot. What does "not participate in the plot" mean? I am very happy that the author did not give Lola the position of warrior because she is the heroine. Firstly, Lola in the third grade is indeed immature and in a young age. Secondly, the benefits of the original party can be retained (I am not one of them, but I still like most of them that follow the plot. But my Cedric is still dead. You have no heart, the author!!! Later, Lola went to Hogwarts to help everyone deal with the Death Eaters on the grounds of being worried about Sally Ann. It was really surprising. The heroine who has been accompanying us has finally become successful. My daughter has just grown up. I feel that I have done my best to help Harry and the others fight against the noseless snakes. It is really burning~~ This is really just my humble opinion, I just want to communicate with the author. Don't say "you can do it, you can do it" or anything like that. I don't have time to write and I'm not as good as one percent qaq Ps. About bl I only looked at the cover and thought it was pure BG, but it turned out that a pair of sub-CPs were BL. Although the bl party is ecstatic, but some of them don't like it and don't accept it. It's really not good if the bl party doesn't explain it. For example, although I mainly watch BG interactions, I still feel a little uncomfortable (please don't tell me that times have changed, BL is normal, you don't accept accusations of thoughts such as your illness, etc. You have the right to like BL, and others also have the right to dislike BL, okay? Don't some people just think that those people are inferior to others without watching BL, and are not open-minded and tolerant at all? (Crazy stacking buff. Jpg Just like if you make a nutrition table for a snack for everyone's reference, you can't just label some nutrients and not label another nutrition. Maybe the nutrition you don't label is toxic to a small group of consumers? Right.

Also, the Barodis family, the ancient and great Barodis family, the heir is the heroine's cousin, that guy (I don't remember the meaning of the report), I feel that he is an ordinary fool. He himself has never been to Durmstrang, and his descendants may not go. After all, the secret study of the Ba family is still unknown... (Unfortunately) The heroine is proud of the blood and ability of the Barodis. , Spent the first half of his life, and then the Ba family seemed to be declining in a very ordinary way... This is such a pity, right? (Crazy) How did he train his cousin, the heir? Durmstrang picked an heir who was better than him, how could the old man of the Ba family allow the heir to be like this... This is the real trend of decline and decline (the regret is gradually rising like an index) Also, is the heroine's obsessive uncle still obsessive? (Grieved face) Woo woo woo, the power of the Ba family is too difficult to control... And if power control is related to hair during childhood, the original Ba family father and the heroine's father also received guidance from Rady. Even if they are not blond and blue-eyed, haven't they learned some theories from their ancestors or listened to some rumors? She didn't have enough understanding of her family and its abilities, which resulted in a miserable start for the heroine (slight resentment). The Barodis family is really going to decline! ! ! ! ! No injustice, no loss, this education is really inferior to every generation (akimbo) In addition, the heroine's hair should have been originally golden, but she later experienced some magical accident and turned into silver (I understood it at the time, I read it for several days, but now I have forgotten it), and then it returned to golden from which chapter, but the ends of the hair are silver. I don't understand this part. I remember what big event happened in the middle, but the author didn't seem to say it clearly? (Slight amnesia) Anyway, it turned into gold again... I secretly feel sorry for Radi, because I personally think silver hair is very handsome. In short, I am very grateful to the author for bringing you a new world! ! After all, the Durmstrang perspective is something I have never seen before after reading dozens of hp fanfics. I have long been tired of seeing all kinds of British gentlemen (I don't mean to say anything bad about British gentlemen). It is also interesting to see German guys (? Laughs) and straightforward fur bears this time. I really appreciate that the author can clearly understand the relationship between those in-laws... Regarding the strange directions of several emotional lines and the Weixi line, I can only say that my own tolerance has become higher. This article seems to be a bit old (I will re-examine the year it was originally published later). Some of the dialogues between the characters, especially the several quarrels and conflicts between the male and female protagonists, made me feel like I was in another world. The atmosphere of ancient romance came to me. The characters in it find it difficult to speak well when facing each other. When Shichang makes assumptions or knows some possible facts, they will madly accuse each other and attack each other. Instead of analyzing the facts, their emotional concepts are more black and white, and they seem to be unable to imagine that other people may also have entanglements and difficulties. The male protagonist of this article is the one I have read countless novels so far. He may be the first person who completely cannot accept that the heroine has her own difficulties and secrets when faced with her secrets. Of course, this does not rule out the influence of the heroine of this article who did not speak well at the time. It's also possible that they are too young (thinking). They seem to be unable to remain skeptical at all, but are willing to listen to the other person's words first. Correspondingly, when they reconciled, they would not apologize in detail for the last time they criticized each other. It was clear that each other's unscrupulous remarks were already so excessive (helpless) The same goes for Weixi. He can tell the heroine that Alexei will have his own difficulties and may find it difficult to marry her, thus reminding the heroine to pay more attention to getting out as soon as possible, but he also starts to criticize Mao Xiong crazily in black and white, saying that Mao Xiong is a "liar who plays with emotions." First of all, Weixi is not blind or stupid. He should know how Alexei got into the dilemma at that time. This kind of label cannot be dismissed. Moreover, if his words are too outrageous, how can the heroine believe him? Could this person be a lobbyist? (Akimbo) (Vichy is still Vichy, please forgive me... (Poor)) Everything is too confusing, everyone has a hard time talking, often angry, often irritated. I can only read this as a drama, appreciate the author's arrangement and conception, and the huge ocean of imagination (praise), but correspondingly, it is difficult for me to like specific characters such as Anos and Lola. Overall thank you very much! I also admire you for being able to persist in writing so many chapters and finally come to a happy ending (touched) Good luck!

Damn it, such a good-looking article has so few clicks. Except for the fact that the plot happens a little too fast, it is good-looking. Many plots are too sketchy. This can be written as a long epic. The things the heroine does are so amazing. I think she is not inferior to the savior. She is really amazing. I hope she can keep writing! It's really beautiful! ! And this is actually an article from a few years ago, I hope it becomes popular soon!

Ula! ! ! ! ! I like Alexei! ! ! He is the little angel! ! The sports department is so sweet and awesome! ! ! !

I must leave a name for my favorite senior Heinrich! I love him ahhhhh! It's really great to have a side story with him

Nowadays, there are a lot of interesting articles, a lot of writing on various subjects, a lot of reading, people's minds are impetuous, and logic, details, and characters can all be said in one sentence... It is understandable that readers feel frustrated after reading. But for the heroine, this is her life experience. The aura of the magical world has never been with her (on the side of the golden boy). She is just a little witch. Although she has an unusual family background and excellent black magic talent, in the end she chose to be an ordinary person. Why? Because she has no ambitions and doesn't have so much hard work, it makes her a great heroine. She is a pampered flower, a bird in the dark and cold magical world, and finally lives free. She has her own life trajectory. Although the process is not perfect and has flaws, who's adolescence is not like this? Although it is not so cool, so exciting, and sometimes frustrating, incompetent, and cumbersome, I enjoy the writing process, which is why I did not join V. I wrote it for myself, and cannot meet the expectations of more readers, because I am more about describing another part of the magical world through her perspective. This is the main reason why I write. As the first completed fan novel, this book does have many shortcomings, and I will continue to work hard on it in the future.

Should I be glad that this Tosit is fake, otherwise I would have to collect the body for Alexei... Suddenly I feel that the heroine is like a disaster-prone body~

Anos, lucky guy (at least when it comes to love)

It's very nice, but it's a pity Alexei, but I'm very interested in pre-collection, I don't know when it will be launched