[The Storm Riders Fanfiction / Yunfeng] If You Can't Wake Him

Recently I fell in love with Yunfeng again and found this rare and well-written article. I must leave a paw print! The author has a very good command of classical Chinese. It is a pleasure to read the text, and the character creation is also quite good, which just makes up for the shortcomings of Fengyun 3 [First of all, I thank the original author and his team for creating Fengyun, but I still want to scold some of the shortcomings of Fengyun 1 comics, and it will collapse from 2 Junior Brother Feng, 3 is so miserable that it makes people want to scold the author of the original work for being mentally retarded. If you don't like a character so much, why did you create it in the first place? Since you created it, you should be responsible instead of doing whatever you want. Even if you don't want to be worthy of yourself, you should be worthy of the readers! The story has also been bad since 1. From 2 onwards, the main cast of characters has been indistinguishable, and the importance has not been distinguished. As a comic that is not united or group drama, it has begun to fail. 3 Has become even worse. The basic writing logic collapsed, the characters are inexplicable, and the plot is just for the sake of the plot. It is just a waste of money. However, there are still a group of NC fans who still don't know how to scold the author and still use their strength. He Feng is so angry and so mentally retarded] Ahem, I complained so much, but I actually wanted to express that the author is so great. This article simply comforted my hurt heart. As a person who adheres to the theory of "the original author of the text is dead", I will never acknowledge the original work of Fengyun 3 and turn a blind eye to it. This article of the author can completely replace the so-called original work 3 in my heart.

I recently started reading Fengyun fan fiction, and the author's writing is so good. Among them, Yi Feng's hidden father-control attribute, Bu Tian's twenty-four filial piety and good son attributes, and the relationship between Bu Jingyun and Nie Feng are all portrayed so well. I felt regretful when I read the comic. I always felt that the deaths of Yi Feng and Bu Tian were sad. Perfection is found in the author's writing. I liked Butian when I was a kid, but I actually liked Yi Feng when I grew up. Of course, the official couple is still Nie Feng and Bu Jingyun. They will last forever and will be together for life. As for their respective wives and children, they are actually additional. Love this happy ending. Of course, the original Nie Feng still had Tianya to make up for it. Without Nie Feng's character, he would always be missing a piece of his heart. In Bu Jingyun's eyes, there was only Nie Feng in his heart. In the later stage, it basically feels like it is an official match. Where there are clouds, there must be wind, and the wind and cloud will always be together. When time passes, what will be left is the wind and cloud accompanying each other for thousands of years.

The sentence "Daddy will protect you" almost made me cry Q^Q

Like! The only long-running Fengyun fanfic that has been completed. Compared to the original. The author gave me a big golden finger, haha. The original work of Fengyun 3 is really heartbreaking to watch. In terms of character portrayal, my style was heavily criticized by the author. I was picked on and picked around all day long. My character was no longer as cool, cheerful and gentle as in the first part. I was as calm and graceful as the wind in the second part. I was stereotyped into a common benevolent person. The plot arrangement is protracted and lengthy, repeated over and over again, fighting for the sake of fighting, with no climax. The expression of thoughts does not reflect the spirit of martial arts, and there will no longer be any thoughts on life such as "the overwhelming force is overwhelming" like the first part. What about your original intention? From an honest perspective, the two protagonists did their job well, but the whole family died (except Tianya), which is really evil. In short, compared with Fengyun 1, which is thoughtful, descriptive, psychological and compact, Fengyun 3 is simply too unfinished. Fortunately, you, the author, have this long healing feature. Although it is a CP fanfic, I can feel the author's strong love for the three protagonists. It's not just about making jokes or making a fake HE, but you can feel the emotion of "hope they get better" between the lines. The psychological description is very detailed. Maybe because of the CP novel, Junior Brother Feng appears a little sentimental, but overall he has a heroic spirit. Senior Brother Yun appears to be more "internally warm" and has richer emotions than in the original work. Xiao Feng is a tsundere in capital letters. All in all, I think the characters are pretty good. The most important thing is, HE haha!

Xiaofeng is so strangely gentle~

If you don't make a sound when you fall asleep, it's a default. Hahaha, so cute!

I got it from the shrimp balls~ It's great that there are still authors producing Yunfeng!

Are the last words the Evil King said to Qilin actually making a wish to Qilin? I hope it can rain for a few more days, so that I can stay with his dad for a few more days? Sure enough, he should take his father's words to heart, "If you make a deep wish with him in person, your big wish will come true." The Evil King is so thoughtful, it reminds me of the lyrics, "You can't get close to each other if you're on a blind date." So how does the Evil King feel about his father? Author girl, tell me now!

It's really annoying to have a family to take care of. 2333 How many more days will it take? 2333 Did Yi Feng finally go back to the room to rejoice? 2333 By the way, Senior Brother Yun doesn't mind Huo Qilin calling Junior Brother Feng Feng?

The evil king is simply magnificent...(Kneel down