Threads of Love

Not bad, the male and female protagonists communicate with each other with eyes and guard silently. I hope there will be more interactions and some extra stories~

The whole text is plain, delicate and warm. The style is not bad, and the writing is okay, but it's a pity that it's a little too bland, and the first few chapters are wasted because they can't immediately attract readers. The house fights tend to be rich in romance but not in romance. Although the male and female protagonists have eye contact and descriptions of psychological activities, the interaction is still a bit lacking. In terms of length, there are slightly too many characters and it feels a bit scattered. This part needs to be strengthened. Keep up the good work and hope to see progress in the next article!

Hmm, I like this kind of lightness and warmth. Although there is no talk of love, I can feel the relationship between them. It is a great article. There is also some small foreshadowing of the relationship between them, which is good!

All right. Just a little casual first. I'll comment after I finish reading it. Take a hole first

Although I almost didn't finish reading Feng Shui, when I saw the title of this article, I jumped in and poked at the bird~~~Then,, Mu is so passionate about uncommon words (drop,,

The large text is really well written. . I want to be friends with you. . Roll around, scatter flowers, and seek fulfillment. . . Occasionally drop balls... Erling Temple, Erjiu, Erba Umbrella Dance. . . Come and take a guess. . .

There are too few emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists... The male protagonist has no characteristics. . Does that younger brother really dislike his older sister, or is it just a cover-up? . Looking forward to the future...

We finally met, and I still feel like I did before, with a low-key and unrestrained heroic demeanor! ! I like such a neat heroine! !

The sky and the earth are dark and yellow, the universe is vast, the sun and the moon are waxing and waning, the stars and stars are spread out, cold comes and summer goes, autumn harvests and winter hides (please pay attention to the last word)! ! ! !