[Writer] Reborn: A Pillow, a Startling Dream

I read this article in one sitting and was deeply moved, especially the part where the two male protagonists are not together yet. We once had a similar mental journey, but unlike the two protagonists, our result was ultimately BE. Now that I have finished reading this article, I feel like I have walked through the journey of a few years ago again. Looking back, it feels like a dream, and I realize that now, compared to the days when we first separated, I feel less sad, but more emotional, and I can't help but feel sorry for what I missed... The article is very immersive, and I hope you can write better articles.

Very cute article, well-written! What, it feels so good when I take off my vest! O(∩_∩)OAlthough the time span is not very natural, and we don't see much interaction between Gong and Shou, the friendship between Xiao Shou and her best friend is very touching! By the way, aren't the number of fans ╮(╯▽╰)╭ a bit exaggerated? Wow haha. . . ~\(≧▽≦)/~

Because the review of Jiangjiang Niangniang has been postponed until now orz, I'm sorry... I'll comment now. In fact, for this novella, I think that overall it is pretty good among online essays. It doesn't have the nonsense of a novice novel, nor the heavy depressiveness of a deep novel. My son and I have discussed the reasons why your article is not popular. After all, the click-through rate of the previous chapters is still considerable. Later, I felt that it should be Mu Tang's perfection. After rebirth, even if he could learn to repent and rehabilitate, he would not instantly transform from a young master whom everyone hates to a humble and gentle young man who is loved by everyone. The reason for this would be too far-fetched. Not only that, but to portray him so flawlessly is a bit much. No one is perfect, but he did it. After that, the article became suspicious of Su Hua. People can grow overnight, but it takes a process and time. Ignoring this process will have an important impact on the entire article. It can be said that it is equivalent to the left and right arms, and the ten fingers are connected to the heart. Once it is cut off, some of the things that this article wants to express may become unclear. Since this article has been completed, I can't criticize any more, but I just want to ask: In your eyes, is Mu Tang a character created by the tip of the pen, or is he a living person who can cry, laugh, and lose his temper? How did you feel when creating the character? Of course, everyone has different views, opinions and angles. I can't force anything. People must do and modify it according to what I say. I just put forward some suggestions. I hope you can understand my venomous tongue this time. ​In fact, throughout the whole article, I prefer Lu Jiaying. If there really is such a person in the world, she will be my belief. Because I also started writing essays in the sixth grade, and it has been exactly two years now. However, this goddess-like figure also has a flaw, which is that she is as omnipotent as Mu Tang. I have only been in love a few times. Although the first love may have been too painful, who's first love is not like this? Love that is too simple and beautiful, and is destined to not last long based solely on youth and frivolousness. Lu Jiaying is a perfect best friend, but how could such a person appear in our life? In fact, I understand the author's mood very well. Everything he gives to his "sons and daughters" must be the most perfect. But think about it from another perspective, no one is perfect. Recent readers are too picky, and the emergence of the anti-Mary Sue and Tom Sue parties has affected most people's opinions, so this literary coldness is inevitable. It is recommended that the author re-examine this article from the perspective of a pure reader and rethink the definition of the original article. This will also help improve his reading ability and writing level. In fact, there are some good points, such as the coming out plot and Liang Keyi's emotional portrayal and transformation. These are all great plots and lines in the article. But in terms of relationships, Mu Tang still needs to improve. Well, judging from the column, this seems to be the author's debut? She is more than twice as good as an ordinary Mary Sue, but there is still room for improvement and development. Because I personally like this article quite a bit, so I won't complain. If I were serious, I would cry and faint in the toilet! I am so hot and cute! ! And Goddess Yinlin's rock sugar snow pear is also delicious and sweet [cough, you have to get used to the abbreviation -v-] In short, come on! Young Master said that all authors have a glassy heart, so I think I remade it? Guomei QAQ BY Shicheng Studio-Luo Xia PS: Actually... What was discussed at the time was that the writing was pretty good... It was my personal opinion that refuted QAQ, but the young master is the one who is so hot in your head that it is guaranteed to be fake! Mumada was praised so much that I felt so happy/// Because I saw that in my previous life, I liked racing cars and so on. I subconsciously mistook him for the eldest young master orz. It's my fault... But which channel are you on? Let's check it out some other time -v- Finally, thank you for your support! Please don't be careless! Come on!

I realized that I had forgotten who Mo Han was, so I went to look it up. PS: The most exciting thing to watch is falling! Horse! First! 2333333

I like this pure feeling, very clean, very warm and very touching.

Congratulations on the completion and flowers. I didn't expect that it would be over after a while, I'm feeling sad about the time←

This is the first time I read an article in one go, it's really good! ! ! It can be said that it almost fulfilled all my fantasies! ! ! Although there is no meat, my spirit is satisfied! ! ! Really touched! ! ! Love you! ! ! 23333333

After watching it, I feel cute⊙▽⊙Come on~\(≧▽≦)/~

When I first read this article, I thought it was my favorite~~~~~~~ Many things in the article really made me cry~~~~The plot is not very sad, but it is inexplicably sad~~~~I just want to say that it is very good

Congratulations on the ending, I hope there will be a sequel o(∩_∩)o