
[Naruto] Someone Like You
[火影]Someone like you
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 6k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 12y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
2Chapters
190Favorites
8.7Score
6.2kClicks per chapter
42Comments
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There is also a book called "Love Warrior Uchiha", also written by Sasa Fumi and Shiranami.
Erotic young man hahahaha
When I saw the water splashing, I thought it was a fight at first, but when I saw the author's words later, I thought it wasn't the case...
I finally saw this pair of Xipi. I had collected a book about Sasuke
It seems that this review has been delayed for a long time. I would like to say sorry to Ah Qian here QAQ. Also, I have developed antibodies against Naruto fandoms... The completely non-judgmental format is so broken! But seeing that there are so many Naruto fans in A Qian's column, I instantly felt that Yali was so big QAQ. The reviews I gave A Qian in the past seemed to be long reviews, but this time I decided to give a short review on the mascot! Because I'm really not very familiar with Naruto, and the character's personality comes entirely from the fan novels I've read before, but I can't guarantee that those fan novels don't have OOC... For this review, I hope I can succeed orz. As a personal rule, before commenting, read the copy and cover first. Because copywriting and cover are equivalent to a facade. If the copywriting is good and the cover is beautiful, readers may be attracted to read your novel seriously. So, first of all, I want to share my thoughts on your copywriting and cover =W=. Regarding the cover of Ah Qian, I can only say that it is very unique (personality), but the small print is a bit redundant, but the rest is very good. From the cover, you can see the two pig trotters I am about to review, Zuo 1 and Zuo 2 [Hey = =]. From this we can also see their characters, Mensao [Hey] and Erque [Hey! Next comes the copywriting. How should I put it? Ah Qian's copywriting is getting simpler and simpler. There is always a visual sense orz that can summarize the whole text (two people) in two sentences. But it doesn't matter, it's a short story after all, so just introduce it... [Every time I want to write a happy review, I instantly become Spartan when I think of the format. I can't afford to suffer from obsessive-compulsive disorder QUQ] Let's talk about the title (the name of the article), [Naruto] Someone like you ←Every time I see this name, it reminds me of Adele's Someone like you, so I don't think so. Is the meaning of the name Asana the same as the meaning in the song? So I read this article completely because I listened to this orz. Then let's talk about writing. Ah Qian's writing is as good as ever, so I'll just say what I said. Let's talk about the plot. This is simply the bitter history of Erzhu and Harasuke [Hide the Face]. Because I have only watched a few episodes of the anime, and all the rest of my impressions are from fan fiction, so I don't know whether Erzhu has Harasuke's side in the anime. If there is, it will definitely be very disappointing = =The whole person is not good. I looked up Dosuke, and it seems that Harasuke appears in the theatrical version, but some people are not very optimistic about Harasuke's character in the theatrical version. However, after reading A Qian's article, I still have a good impression of Harasuke in A Qian's article. It can be seen from the article that everything should have settled and the world has returned to peace (eh). Erzhuxi returned to Konoha and reconciled with his friends around him. Suddenly, I traveled through or was hit by Doraemon's random door and came to Konoha in another space (hey = =), and then unfolded the sauce in the article to cool down... Sasuke doesn't have that feeling about this world (I'm at a loss for words, and I couldn't remember what it was after thinking for a long time), so he wanted to go back, but the facts told him that he couldn't go back. It may also have a role as a Hara helper. "If Charasuke is okay... He is probably willing to start his life over in this opposite world." Sasuke began to change his impression of the world for Harasuke. It can also be said that he was accepting the world. Harasuke also took this opportunity to launch a series of attacks on the second pillar. It has to be said that any carefree person, as long as he truly falls in love with someone, will devote himself wholeheartedly to it. This sentence is not said in vain... There is also this article by A Qian, I always feel that something is missing. But I can't write it with my current skills, so I can only leave it to A Qian himself. The characters in the article are somewhat OOC. Although I haven't watched much anime, I feel that given Er Zhuzi's character, Er Zhuzi would not speak out easily about the things left behind by his tribe and the issues about Brother Weasel... In fact, I really hope that A Qian can change this article into a long one. For a standard fujoshi, the long one will be more enjoyable. Because, in just two chapters, you explained it a little hastily. For example, you didn't explain clearly when the two of them went on the mission, and you didn't explain when Erzhu's feelings for Harasuke changed. But you can't tell anything from Harasuke's injury and the short six months of getting along. What if it's the feelings of relatives? Or is it just that half-body feeling? Ah Qian didn't explain these clearly... Just like what Xiaohan said (we are in the same shop 23333, although we have no intersection). The perspective of God in the article is too obvious, which is different from A Qian's reading of the same language. It always feels a little abrupt. In fact, Ah Qian can write Danmei with the mentality of writing the same words. Danmei is actually easy to write, but don't put a girl's mentality on pig's feet. You should also pay attention to other descriptions. I'm looking forward to Ah Qian's next Danmei article. This one is very well written~ PS: A Qian's setting this time is really cute =3= [Ah, it seems like it has become a long review again =A=] #On the bitter history that every time I want to write a short review, it turns into a long review# [Shicheng Studio/Mascot] commented. Don't forget to get a review~
Hey, hey, is it really true that our pursuit has just started and it's over like this? I have taken off my pants, show me this W
Actually, I know that in the next chapter, Sasuke is raped W
To be honest, Xiaohan is a loyal comic fan. The so-called "loyal" means that he only reads the comic plots and does not read the original plots of the animation team and various theatrical versions. SO, I have always had a strange feeling in my heart when reading this short article by the author - is this really a Naruto fanfic and not a Naruto fanfic? Who is Chalashu? Why is the author so familiar with this person? Doesn't look like an original character! Being smart, I carefully observed the comments and comments, and found that the author was probably writing a fanfic of the Naruto "fanjin", but this "fanjin" was created by AB himself - the Naruto movie version. Of course, I went to watch the theater version in order to write a review. The theater version is great. Maybe it's because of preconceived ideas, but I'm afraid most of my focus is on Chalasuke. Let's put it this way, compared to Charasuke in Someone Like You, I was a little disappointed with Charasuke in Road of Ninja, who is considerate and sunny and can deal with women easily. This is probably the biggest compliment I can think of for the author of this article. Compared with the theatrical version in which Charasuke did not appear for much time, Charasuke in this article has a more extended character, and he also has a good explanation of important issues such as the genocide of his brother. The author is very imaginative, oh, no, he is very imaginative, and he only uses less than 7,000 words to flesh out the pale character of Charasuke, who has appeared so many times on his fingers. This is a person who is considerate and frank, who appears to be flirtatious but is actually dedicated. He even has a sinister attribute and knows all the facts well but entertains himself without saying a word. As for Sasuke, it can be seen from the author's setting that everything seems to have settled - Sasuke, who was regarded as a traitor, returned to Konoha, his relationship with Naruto recovered very well, and he lived a peaceful life in Konoha. Such Sasuke fell into the world of Tsukuyomi for some unknown reason and met Charasuke, who was completely opposite to him. Well, this setting is very attractive. The pairings of Sasuke and Charasuke have a strong contrast in their cuteness. What kind of sparks will arise when the paralyzed and indifferent Ersuke meets the scheming Charasuke? Oh... They started fighting as soon as they met. Just like Naruto and Menma, the opposite but similar two people had the same idea in the fight, and they understood each other completely - "Well... You, a guy who looks exactly like me, can't do anything to me, can you? I can't do anything to you either." In the process of getting to know each other, they inevitably start to compare each other, from strength to soul, and then "when they look at each other's behavior, they only feel sympathy for each other, but they don't take it for granted." Seek common ground while reserving differences. Then Sasuke lived an even worse life. He was not happy in this false world. After trying to "go home" to no avail, Sasuke, who had always been a middle-class boy, was probably like a walking zombie. He began to give up on himself and wanted to die. Of course, all this was seen by Charasuke, and his actions completely shocked Sasuke, who didn't like to cherish "the people in front of him" - a life and death separation. "If Qia Lazhu is fine... He is probably willing to start his life again in this opposite world." Sasuke changed, and Charasuke also took action. In the end, everyone was happy with HE. The short story is very cute, but it is a pity that it is not a long story and cannot present the story of the two people in a more complete manner. However, compared to other short stories, Someone Like You can be said to be a small but well-rounded novel. There are introductions, follow-up, emotional development and psychological analysis. Some unsaid stories are hidden in just 6,000 words, which is really fascinating. But there are also some shortcomings—— There is insufficient grasp of the details of the original work. For example, after the genocide, Sasuke actually lived alone in the Uchiha family. Of course, this was also an issue that countless research parties debated endlessly. Slight OOC, will the things left by the clansmen make Sasuke feel safe? I object to this. And for Charasuke's question, "Nissan is a good Nissan, isn't it from your side?", "... Yes, it always has been." Such a straightforward answer is not something Sasuke can easily reveal, even to Charasuke. There are some things in the article that people can't understand. In order to judge the signs of people coming, you press your hair under the table legs? This probably only works if the table is moved. In addition, sometimes the author's God perspective and the narrative perspective of the protagonist Sasuke are confused, making readers feel uncomfortable when reading. For example, "Charasuke will not harm him. Sasuke has this confidence inexplicably. [Contrary to Naruto and Menma's instinctive dislike of each other, Sasuke and Charasuke instinctively like each other]... It's not right to say this. It should be called instinctive mutual trust. After all, he and the other person are the same person." This paragraph in parentheses is obviously the author's narration, but it is very inappropriate to insert it into the protagonist's thinking. These are just minor problems, but if you pay a little more attention, it will be perfect XD Well, it seems that the author is trying Danmei for the first time. Xiaohan can say, don't worry about not being able to write Danmei well! Not only did this article not crash, it was also written quite well~ Certified masterpiece haha The author, please continue to work hard and write more and better articles╭(╯3╰)╮ Xiaohan 2014/7/29
Water splashes everywhere, I won't say that I'm thinking wrong! Sasuke must be affected by
Water splashes everywhere!!!!! I like this ending (wipe nosebleed