Water City, Past Lives (Reborn GL)

I think this ending is quite good. After this kind of experience, I feel that this kind of ending is only logical. It's a bit luxurious to say that it will last forever. .

I've watched Undate before, and now I'm following Choice. The author's writing is really good, and the suspenseful story line is more interesting than the simple emotional line. At the beginning, such a sensitive child is so distressing. . My girlfriend said that she also suffered from depression and later recovered on her own. I don't know whether I should see a psychiatrist or where to find a suitable doctor. Btw I have never been to Venice. The author talked about his experience of walking alone until early in the morning, which made him feel very present. . The historic old city may be a bit gloomy to begin with, plus church crosses and so on. .

It seems that I have been writing this article for two years. I have been serializing it in a place where you can't see it. Then I re-wrote it and completed it for more than half a year. I finished it two days ago, like the fulfillment of a particularly big wish. Let's briefly evaluate these characters and the original setting ideas. 1. The beginning of time. At the beginning, this character was very typical of being overly sensitive. Every word or expression would be magnified in her eyes and make many associations. When I was designing the characters, I just wanted to write a story about a secret love, but as I was thinking about it, I suddenly remembered a movie I had seen before called "Depression". The opening chapter is about the heroine getting married. The whole atmosphere is very festive, including the heroine herself who has a smile on her face, but she is actually falling apart inside. Affected by the news of an asteroid hitting the earth, she becomes more and more frightened and neurotic, until the news is confirmed and everyone goes crazy, but she calms down. I think this kind of role is very charming. Under a certain environment, other people who have not experienced stress all feel the pressure of depressed patients, but the depressed patients themselves are relieved. So don't you think, everyone has the factor of depression in their heart, and when it reaches a certain limit, it will be unbearable, and the beginning is just one of the extremes. During the last serialization, people often reported that oh my god, I couldn't bear to watch this scene because I cried for half the chapter. Every time, I rushed to protect the child and said: She is sick, but she still knows how to take medicine, and it is so cruel to her to hold it in. 2. The night is cool in the season. Come on, stop saying she is my ideal type. During the prototype reference stage, I have never been able to find a character that fits the image of Ji Yeliang. She is a particularly idealistic person who can consider everything for the other person and put everything on her shoulders. I have always felt that her relationship with Shichu was something prompted by specific circumstances. Without this incident, there would never have been a chance between them. This is also the point of this story. 3. Qin Mu. You can see that my supporting role columns are arranged in order. I always felt that I could forgive Qin Mu. She had endured so much that it was difficult to live for herself in the past twenty years. Qin Mu said that the first time I met Su Luo, I felt very familiar. This was a foreshadowing. She had indeed met Su Luo when she was a child. And you see, Su Luo didn't ask who you were when he came up. He directly called out Qin Mu's name. They have known each other for a long time. The details will be written in the extra chapter. 4. Su Luo. The awkwardness Su Luo and Qin Mu had before was not just for others to see. Some of them really wanted to break up. She said that Qin Mu's heart was not on her because Qin Mu's heart was on how to take revenge. Su Luo didn't know how to make Qin Mu forget these things, take them out, and be kind to herself. For four years, she still couldn't find an effective method. But Su Luo also forgot one thing. She was not hurt too much by the past, but Qin Mu's parents died because of it. What happened to them later will be discussed in the extra chapter. 5. Zhuo Wan and Hua Qigu I just want to tell the story that the two of them are not secretly in love. They probably fell in love gradually after going abroad. As for you asking me whether they will break up in the future, I can only answer that they will not as long as they don't return to China. Finally: In fact, this article can also add a few tags, such as "Date before you die" and "Escape from the Escape Room in Venice". Escape from the Escape Room is actually what I have always wanted to write. In the second half of the article, the most proud part is my own original secret room rules, but they don't seem to be very popular. Forget it, I'll be proud of myself. I still like the memes in the next article. If I have the chance, I'll see you in the next pit. Bye.

Ah, I can't do it anymore, my heart is so tired

The feeling after reading the entire article is exactly like the last sentence of this article: loneliness comes over me like the collapse of the city. Not only "Water City", but also "Suggestion" and "No Appointment" gave me the same feeling. I feel that the author did not mean it, but why is every article filled with a sense of desolation of being unable to escape from the destined fate, and a transparent and stable pessimism about human affairs.

The author has worked hard to update the article, so here's a refresher! Nice!! I finished reading it in one go, and the ending, well, was unexpected and reasonable.

I had a lot of time to read the article during my vacation. I started searching for the finished article and then clicked in because of the introduction. After reading two or three chapters, I felt that the style of writing was a bit familiar. When I looked through the author column, I discovered that it was the author of "Buy Date" that I had read before. Both books depict foreign customs and life in a very real and appealing way. The most important thing is that they have a sense of empathy, are not blunt and obscure, and have relatively low reading difficulties ("Buy Date" is a little more difficult). It is true that the author's experience or hearing is part of the reason, and the author's writing style is also indispensable. The first five or six chapters of the article are a bit messy, not in the sense of mystery and suspense evoked by the large number of characters and foreshadowing, as well as the narrative techniques. This is the highlight and feature of this article! Em... I personally can't explain this mess, it's just a feeling. A little flaw. Nowadays, in the Baihe literary circle, there are many recommendations for mindless articles (not cool articles) and crudely written and story-telling articles. It's such a pleasure to read this high-quality book in one sitting since the afternoon! (Except for the stuck meat!)

Water City is a good article and deserves to be praised vigorously. (I write whatever comes to my mind, the content is illogical, don't be offended if you are big.) 1.1 Shuicheng The title alone is an attractive enough article. This is why I decided to read it without reading the introduction on Weibo. Under the label of modern times, few authors dare to set the full text in foreign countries, and few authors can create such a real and unique exotic style. Because this is inseparable from rich life experiences, not to mention having a heart that loves to experience life and the writing power of writing. What is admirable is that the pants are big enough to do both. There is no violation, no disconnection, As a reader, I can truly feel the Venice that is imprinted in my heart through my eyes and concentrated on my pen. After reading it in the middle of the night and closing my eyes, it felt like I could touch the fog in Venice, and the sound of the clattering train wheels had no end. Frankly speaking, this is a travelogue! But the wonderful thing about the article is that it is more than just a "travel note". 1.2 Rebirth From the title and introduction, we can easily draw a conclusion: Ji Yeliang has been reborn. For a suspenseful novel, in the terms of the cross talk world, this is definitely a big burden. Pantsai came out straight to the point before the first chapter, which made me a little worried at the time: Will doing so will damage the suspense effect. However, in fact, this design is very clever and makes it as suspenseful as possible within reason. The concept of Ji Yeliang's rebirth is like a bait, so that you will not lose interest in exploring because you know nothing without it. Reading with this concept in mind, you can feel that Ji Yeliang's various actions are reasonable, and you can also roughly guess the purpose behind these actions. But other exquisite designs make you unsure and eager for answers, Being pulled step by step by this bait, Drag to a realm dominated by sleeplessness and forgetfulness of food and sleep. 1.3 Suspense The most eye-catching label in this article is probably it. I'm ashamed to say that I usually have little experience in suspense, and I don't even have the confidence to praise it. To put it bluntly, my self-imposed standard for suspense is: it can justify itself. This article about Shuicheng can be marked with a big check mark√ The holes that Pantai dug in the front were generously filled in at the back. Although the big pants are self-effacing and say that the ending is rushed, from my perspective: everything that should be explained has been explained, and it is also a skill to use a concise length to reveal the mystery. And it leaves room for people to ponder and ponder, without losing its charm. If this is Pants' first suspense article, it is really worthy of praise. How do you say that? Awesome, my pants are big! Speaking of suspense, there are actually many details worth listing. But when I wrote this and was hungry after not eating all day, I saw the picture of Pants Dafa's chicken wings, so I irresponsibly decided to hide it. Will there be part 2? For Shuicheng, this will not be suspense.

After reading it, I found that there are still some questions that I haven't answered yet. I hope the author can try his best to answer them! However, nearly two years have passed since the completion. I don't know if the author still has an impression of some specific details. If you are in trouble, don't force it, thank you! XD 1. Did Ji Yeliang send a text message to Su Luo asking her to come to Venice? The purpose is to verify whether Qin Mu is a traitor? 2. Where did Ji Yeliang hide his spare mobile phone before entering the island? 3. Who wrote the note that imitated Su Luo's handwriting and gave it to Zhuo Wan on the first night after entering the island? 4. In the third round of voting, Ji Yeliang received the highest number of votes, 4, and Shi Chu voted for himself. Assuming that Hua Qigu still voted for Zhuo Wan, and both Su Luo and Zhuo Wan claimed to have voted for Su, who was lying? (Combined with the kidnapper's reaction later and Zhuo Wan's lack of knowledge, it's very possible that Su didn't tell the truth.) If Su Luo lied, can it be understood as protecting Qin Mu? So what is the purpose of Su and Qin voting for Ji Yeliang to get Ji a reward? 5. Ji Yeliang said something to the effect that she and Shi Chu were once so close (?). Did she have a crush on Shi Chu before she experienced the kidnapping incident? 6. Since Su Luo recognized Qin Mu in Shichu's dormitory, did she not realize that Qin had bad intentions and approached Shichu with premeditation? Why didn't she remind Shi Chu or warn Qin Mu?

However, I miraculously found your post! How did I do it! It turns out that this article, including Heavenly Punishment, is all original and revised! It turns out that the serialization in the invisible place is a fruit altar... That place is full of pits and it is impossible to play well... By the way, after reading a lot of before-and-after comparisons of character designs and plots on Tieba, I feel that the characters are more three-dimensional. ——Why do I have a lot of ideas after watching it but I don't know what to say when I see the original design... Ahem, I really can't match Shichu and the rat girl, mom Σ( ° △ °|||)