[Harry Potter] The Price

The author, your writing is a bit confusing. It is a big mistake to use first person and God's perspective at the same time. Moreover, the language of the characters is also very monotonous, and there is almost no description... I suggest you study more and then revise it... Come on

That's right, Slytherin lacks everything except money.

What the hell is Sal doing? He's so mad.

Xiao Mi, people love you and will never leave you, okay?

La la la~ Here I come, Xiaocha, okay, I love you!

Thousands of years ago, what happened (⊙_⊙?)

I still like Lockhart's idiot look, but this Lockhart is very dark :-D

What about 21? What about 21? There are so many characters

Tangled😖

I'm dizzy+_+I can't understand