I feel that the plot is a bit weak and the description is not enough.
The relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, the author, you haven't polished it enough_(:3J∠)_. For me, this relationship came too suddenly.
Well, what I mean is that you can add some plot appropriately to let readers enter the state of this article.
This ending feels too fast, I haven't reacted yet, and it ended without me reacting QAQ!
But I was really moved by the last part.
I don't know if I expressed it clearly QAQ, ah. Maybe I'm too cruel?
I hope the author writes better and better (…something).
What I'm thinking of is the lyrics of "Maybe in" "In the future, everyone I love will be like you"
Hey, I'm sad again~~It's beautiful!!!
As expected, I am illiterate... I don't know the word. Embarrassed and ran away~
I feel that the plot is a bit weak and the description is not enough. The relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, the author, you haven't polished it enough_(:3J∠)_. For me, this relationship came too suddenly. Well, what I mean is that you can add some plot appropriately to let readers enter the state of this article. This ending feels too fast, I haven't reacted yet, and it ended without me reacting QAQ! But I was really moved by the last part. I don't know if I expressed it clearly QAQ, ah. Maybe I'm too cruel? I hope the author writes better and better (…something).
What I'm thinking of is the lyrics of "Maybe in" "In the future, everyone I love will be like you"
Hey, I'm sad again~~It's beautiful!!!
As expected, I am illiterate... I don't know the word. Embarrassed and ran away~