Gathering Moonlight (Saiunkoku Fan Fiction)

A destined love cannot be held back by time or space. So Yue is spectacularly tossed into the Colorful Clouds Kingdom, where she clings to the heroine, Shuurei, by any means necessary, sweet talk or force alike. Shuurei’s safety matters to her more than anyone else’s. So Seiran raises layer upon layer of defenses, guarding against Yue, who arrived uninvited, with open hostility. But what happens when their hostility unwittingly goes astray, when the other’s past unwittingly touches the softest place in their heart? How will he and she bring this story to a happy ending and turn their love into a fairy tale? And if it’s all just a fairy tale, how can we tell the bitter from the sweet? Well, I’ve revised the blurb again. Personally, I’m more inclined to just shout, “Yue is a woman!” and then mute myself... But never mind. Since I’ve already revised it once, I might as well make it thorough... That’s how it is, everyone passing by. If you like it, leave a mark; if you don’t, point out what needs fixing. It’s my first time writing, after all... A very embarrassing P.S. After my dear Guang pointed out a whole pile of problems, I, N, magnificently and earnestly made my first-ever revision. Apparently, it fixed a lot of issues, but not the point-of-view problem... because... I honestly don’t know how to fix it... It seems the point of view gets all over the place as I write. Uh... everyone, just pretend I’m God while writing, but a God who knows how to see things from the protagonists’ perspective... (Voice from above: Just say you don’t know how to keep the point of view consistent. “A God who knows how to see things from the protagonists’ perspective,” seriously? Piao!) A little while later, N, back from a trip around the universe, bows humbly to the camera. “I’m sorry. I don’t know how to keep the point of view consistent. I get carried away because I think it’s fun, and then it gets all mixed up... I was wrong...” Anyway, I’ll work hard to learn how to keep the point of view consistent... Then, once I’ve learned, I’ll revise it again... For now, everyone, just bear with it... Uh... can someone lend me some sand so I can bury my head in it... I will never abandon this story! Woohoo! Premise: