(HP Sherlock) The Heir and the Prophet

So the heroine's short name might be... Siri?

I feel like Xiaolong is a little broken.

There was a time when I read too many Jinjiang fandoms and became a Snake Yard Party member. Those articles were always written by Black Lions. Then when I reviewed the original work again, I suddenly felt that those black people were really disgusting. The lions in the original work were cute, and the little snakes were bad but they still looked like naughty children. Before the war, there were not many fan fictions where all the characters were strategists←_← Anyway, after reading it again, I thought it was pretty good. So I love the original the most~

Come on, thank you for your hard work. In order not to provoke hatred, I won't tell you how many days we have been away, but we were already drunk as soon as school started. I've always wanted to follow spn but I'm afraid I won't be able to finish it, so I plan to wait until the college entrance examination is over. Speaking of which, if you watch too many dramas, you will have more ideas, and your dreams will be all kinds of dramas.

It has been updated~~↖(^ω^)↗

The senior high school dog really understands that even if he writes until 2 o'clock every day, he still can't finish his homework...

Draco cp, how about platinum daddy Lucius~Happy start of school

Sigetsang, please give me some advice~ These days, BG-oriented fan fiction has gradually become a rare species. Although I am a newbie, I have read a lot of hp articles. When I scanned the name of your article by Sigerte, I guessed that I had probably found the article that I liked, so I typed it. First of all, although I have never seen the TV version of Shen Xia, I felt that the description of Shen Xia was really great from the beginning (//w//)/! To think that even a person who has never interacted with it has fallen in love with it, this is really an absolute success as a fan. Starting with the first ray of morning light in London, the strict, slightly arrogant Sherlock and the gentle, maternal John began a lovely and heartwarming interaction, which completely aroused the rotten girl's soul in me who has a correct outlook on life. It is actually a big killer weapon to bend human beings [What is this? Then from the beginning of reading the article, I noticed that the author is a very delicate person. The description of the character's expression and behavior, such as "blinking his eyes" and "raising his eyelids", well outlines and fleshes out the character of a character. Moreover, a character will be written using different words. John used the words "doctor" and "young veteran doctor" so that people will not feel visual fatigue ~ Looking further down, little Celeste has grown up, met Harry, gained magic, and welcomed the first magic teacher in her life after being adopted. The two worlds of HP and Shenxia are cleverly and perfectly integrated (Sherlock's analysis is so cool). I rarely read such a novel, and I think it is very good. Well, the plot's dark and bright lines are also well controlled, which makes me very eager to read on. The good boy Celeste, the arrogant Sherlock who loves his family, John who takes care of everyone tenderly, Harry who is cunning and self-aware unlike the original, Hermione who is stinky and self-reflective, Ron who is cute, innocent and has a clear distinction between love and hate, and Slater, who is smart and proud Lin... After the main missions happily appeared one after another, a sunny story born from the collision of all warm factors slowly unfolded. I believe that in the many dangers in the future, they will also work together to overcome all difficulties and make the world full of love~=w=+ However, just as good and evil exist, there are also shortcomings. 0-0 I hope my suggestions can help Sigetsang. First, the English language is too sincere and a bit abrupt, which always feels weird. My personal guess is that the author has been thinking too much recently in order to write for TV series, and his mind is full of mellow English, which makes his staff unconsciously brush up on English. 030 I have read many fan stories, like well E r, what, in fact, many of them can be substituted in Chinese~ Although as someone who has studied it, I can understand it and I like your writing very much, but um, how should I put it, it still makes me feel a little disgusted for some reason (?) Ahem, in any case, it still depends on what you like, Sigurt. Second, there are too few female protagonist perspectives, which is quite important. John's, Sherlock's, Harry's, Draco's, are all lifelike and endearing, which further accentuates the lack of fullness of the protagonist's personality and makes the whole story somewhat hollow (in fact, it's obviously very good and not hollow...) To be more specific, the world "in Celeste's eyes", um, I'm very curious. How was it when I first met Harry? Are you inexplicably familiar with the magical world or are you completely new to it? What are her specific views and evaluations of each college and her future attitude? ... Emma... I have to say that after watching it for a long time, I still didn't understand the specific character of the heroine. Everyone has their own character~ For example, it's so natural to be sinister. It would be great if Sigurt had a position for Celeste~ That's it. Overall, it's a story that I love very much~ I've picked up OwO. I hope Sigurt will keep up the good work and update it very quickly. 030 Above. Illegal gathering | Changpingpu-Yujun

Touch your head, come on senior year, come on Wen Ye, O(∩_∩)O

Touch, then I will check in again during the holidays qwq I wish you good luck in the college entrance examination qwq