Auspicious Dragon and Phoenix
龙凤呈祥
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 32k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 19y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
19Chapters
6Favorites
364Clicks per chapter
5Comments
Reader comments 5
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龙凤呈祥
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The beginning of the story felt good, but now it feels like the jump is a bit too big. No matter how you look at it, it always feels a bit unclear. I'm not criticizing you for not writing well, it's just a bit of a connection. . . . I believe you will write better.
Thumbs up! Thumbs up! Thumbs up! Very nice... Support...
"The stories that happened in this city are something that Long will never forget!" It feels like it would be better if this sentence did not appear. It always feels weird.
Where's the phoenix? Have we become brothers in need?
It still feels very interesting.