
[Reborn!] A Velvet Kiss
[家教]轻吻丝绒
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After all, the article written seven years ago feels very contemporary when read. The heroine really doesn't want to be an adult woman in her 20s. Both the psychological description and the actions she performs seem to be underage (there is no derogatory fact). It would be smoother if the background was changed to a 10+ background. To be honest, the setting of that time when someone was deeply hurt and turned dark and strong seems quite contemporary. Although I don't think that three months of non-stop reading can be worth more than 20 years of study to suddenly become so powerful. It is also quite embarrassing. Faced with such an obvious attitude of the male and female protagonists and the behavior of the male protagonist, it is really heart-wrenching. I would like to thank my wife for finishing this novel. Whether it was seven years ago or now, the popularity of Tutoring is quite average. Compared with all the cool Guardians 27, it is really inconspicuous. I saw several locked chapters and I also searched other websites to complete them. Thank you, my wife, for choosing 270 among so many stories and characters and giving me a better ending.
In fact, when I saw this, I really felt unworthy of Luna. Why did she forgive Tsuna so easily? She should have tortured Tsuna and let Tsuna chase her for five or six years. Luna had paid so much for Tsuna in the past ten years, but Tsuna used Luna to love and like herself and do whatever he wanted. I was arrogant and didn't consider Luna's feelings. Just because I thought you would understand me, I left Luna and took Kyoko away. I only said "Wait for me" to Luna. What I blurted out at that time was the word "scumbag". Why can Tsuna treat Luna like this? Why! Why! Is it just because Luna likes you? Love you? Why! Why! And there is the boy DeWitt. I just think this boy is really good. He really loves Luna very much. If Luna didn't know Tsunayoshi at the beginning, and if Dufa's Arashi Mamoru didn't do that, could DeWitt be his childhood sweetheart and childhood sweetheart with Luna? Can Luna achieve her own happiness without having to suffer so much? These are my personal feelings~~ I hope the author doesn't mind if my ideas are a bit extreme, and the writing style is great.
The article written seven years ago made me burst into tears. Well done to the Renaissance!
Although the plot does have some configurations that were popular among fans many years ago, the emotional details of the relationship are still touching.
It's so painful. I feel so depressed and uncomfortable watching it. I thought the ending would be kinder to Luna. It's amazing. How come Tsuna is written like this?
Although I know that 270 really loves Luna, I still feel that it's not worth it for Luna. Everyone says that 270 has difficulties and has grown up. But from another perspective, Luna has sacrificed too much. I really think that the best ending is for them not to be together. It is better to forget each other than to stay together. However, the author's literary conception is good. This is just my little opinion.
From watching it before, I feel that Tsunayoshi is not worthy of such love. Regardless of regret or not, or whether the damage has been done by loving so deeply, I feel so scumbag.
Please let me apologize for this late review. . . . Kneel down and lick Ah Piao! ! ! (Have Piao forgotten me~) I forget when I clicked on this article, but I still remember the cute girl Luna I saw for the first time. Purple hair, round eyes, warm smile, silly softness, a little clever, unlike Kyoko, she is very real. Goddess Kyoko is gentle and considerate and has excellent healing skills. She is a girl who should be taken good care of. But in comparison, I still love Luna more. Luna, who has a bit of a temper, likes someone stupidly, doesn't know how to hide it, and can be affected by the person in her heart. She took pictures of those cute girls in reality, which really prevented me from having the idea of "this person is not like a human being". Doesn't the so-called fandom mean that we want to be in contact with the characters we love deeply? Because we can't touch them, we have to fantasize; because we love them deeply, we hope those characters can live in the world in their original form. Sorry, the QAQ is wrong. . . Luna isn't perfect, that's why she's like "us" right? For every little angel who loves Sawada Tsunayoshi, Miss Luna is here to help you realize your dreams. (Piaopiao Kuai come and tell me you think so too!!) That's why Tsuna wouldn't confuse Kyoko and Luna! Luna, don't worry. "Now, what is reflected in it is the girl I like. She has a name as cute as the moon. Her name is Mizuhara Luna." Sawada Tsunayoshi said with a smile. To this night, all Luna's likes finally had the best response. How lucky you are that the person you like also happens to like you. This time, Miss Alice succeeded again. It turned out to be sweet and turned violent again after three chapters (...). Ah Piao's foreshadowing began to unravel bit by bit. I still remember how in computer class I was scrambling to read the article with tears in my eyes. I couldn't help but sigh: The school computers are so annoying! What's next!! I watched Luna lying helplessly in the ice coffin, leaving alone with despair, so sad and unwilling. Now, Luna, at that moment, you probably really gave up, right? But you still love that gentle brown-haired young man deeply. Although Tsunayoshi was tortured quite a bit later on. . . Fortunately, this deep love is so long-lasting and meticulous, even supernatural powers cannot erase its existence. Luna is still with 270. I saw a lot of loving beings in Piao Piao's writings: Baozi, the cute little nugget, the cute May, the cold-faced Skylark, the sister-control leader Roland, the affectionate DeWitt, Mr. Norman who has the style of a mastermind behind the scenes, and the handsome and lovely knights. . . . . . This is probably the best ending, right? Luna, you are so happy. [Now, I have never been so lucky that the existence of "time back" allows me to spend seven times as much time with you] All the beautiful gatherings in this world are measured in seconds. But even if we are separated in the end, I will smile and live in the future because of your worries. Like the eternity of the moon, the rise of the sun, the longevity of Nanshan Mountain, it never rises or collapses. PS: When I was typing this long review, I was playing the cute song written by Ah Piao, and I was determined to write a silly and sweet long review to give to Ah Piao as my reward for several months of diving. . . . . Ah Piao, I, I, I, I am going to cry. Finally, congratulations to you Piaopiao, it's over~\\(≧▽≦)/~ La la la. (It seems too late...) I also really want to have a good (tan) and (qing) communication (shuo) (ai) with you, Ah Piao! ! ! 180You, you, you, don't lift the crutches!
Piaopiao, here I come! ! Knock you down! ! By the way... Jiaxuan Little Rabbit is a bit too dark! ! He has learned several of his father's tricks at such a young age. He knows how to threaten people at such a young age. He is still not sure how to "bully" Mi Yue in the future. However, this chapter unexpectedly felt that 180 was a bit cute. As a gold medal daughter control... How can I put this feeling... There is a subtle feeling that 180 has finally grown up [What kind of psychological QAQ is this], and I also feel sad for Miss May. I broke off the petals and counted them. Kyouya, do you love May more, or do you love Miyue more... No, in summary, I should love Piao Piao more [Looking at you cutely]
Thank you for your hard work. Great writing! So I like 27 whether he is weak or handsome who works hard for his family. Indeed, as a boss, the love in his heart cannot be the same. The love in our imagination should be that we only have each other in our eyes and hearts. But in reality this is not possible. Well, I feel that I want to express my thoughts that "not just everyone can like 27". I just feel sorry for him even more! Grow from a loser to a trustworthy boss.