I Can't Live Without You

The male protagonist will definitely die early, and the female protagonist will have to be sad again.

Comments on "I Have to Rely on" This is an extremely delicate article, and the context of the story is not complicated, so the focus of the author's description falls on the creation of the characters, allowing readers to intuitively feel the joy, anger, sorrow, and joy of the characters in the story. This is the author's advantage. Ding Yi's love is not surprising to me at all. I thought that once the fire in a girl like her is ignited, it will burn all over her body, just like her love for Yang Xiao. Of course Yang Xiao also loves her, but due to his personality and the external influence of his family, he finally achieves good things after going round and round. A clear love story, I quite like it. In this story, there are two things that the author has created best. One is the emotional interaction between the protagonists. I say it is good because I think the author has grasped the key points of the changes between the two people. From the secret emotions at the beginning, to the deep love, to the heartfelt devotion to him, and finally to the sadness, a series of Ding Yi's psychological changes have been written; and Yang Xiao, who was occasionally tempted in the early stage, then felt separated, and finally lost, he also had a lot of inner entanglements. Among this series of emotional changes, I think the second half is the best written. From the moment they were about to get married, I had expectations, and then I went all the way with the expectation of torturing the male protagonist, and finally finished reading the whole story while struggling to change the male protagonist. The reason why I use the word entangled is because based on the personalities of Ding Yi and Yang Xiao, I knew that they would not let go and would eventually get back together; but based on my personal personality, I must have viciously persuaded Ding Yi to switch to Xiangdong's arms. Haha So in comparison, the beginning part seems much weaker. Compared with the later stages, the storyline in the early stages is thinner, and most of the author's descriptions focus on inner activities. Especially the heroine Ding Yi, the author's description has always been very delicate, trying to cut the heroine open so that readers can see clearly, and everything is displayed neatly. Many times, it made me feel like superfluous information was added. I think sometimes hiding it may be more effective, not to mention mentioning the same thing over and over again will become verbose. For example, the author never forgets to mention the quiet temperament of Ding Yi's lady in every stroke. Maybe I was surprised when I read it the first time, and liked it the second time, but after watching it continuously, I could only twitch my eyebrows to show that I was tired of it. If you look back at the first few chapters, you will find that the author's writing on Ding Yi and Yang Xiao is tedious and repetitive. In addition, another author who has shaped it well is Xiangdong. I don't want to say how endearing Xiangdong's character is, nor how sincere and mature Xiangdong is in his feelings. Too many people have told the author this. But has the author ever thought about why he is so lovable? Is it possible that Zhang Ningyuan is not outstanding in comparison? Xu Yan's love isn't deep enough? They are all poor supporting characters who appear in the wrong place at the wrong time and meet the wrong people. Why are the other two so dim that no one notices them? In fact, in my eyes, these three poor cannon fodder male supporting characters each have their own functions, but the author spent different thoughts on them. Every appearance and every action of Xiangdong can be imprinted into the advancement of the entire story, but Zhang Ningyuan and Xu Yan have not. It seems that Zhang Ningyuan and Xu Yan have done a lot, but they are just floating on the surface, floating outside Ding Yi's love and the entire story. In fact, I have thought that maybe it is because of this that the early plot seems thin. The supporting characters only push the plot forward, and the protagonist is just immersed in his own world and thinking about things. The author's story does not have a descriptive focus, which reduces the two important supporting characters in the early stage to just a symbol, and the story seems particularly bland. In addition, there are three points I would like to briefly mention: 1. The heroine's love for the hero is somewhat inexplicable at first. For a long time after reading the article, I was thinking why Ding Yi suddenly fell in love with Yang Xiao so much, so much that he never looked back. Finally, towards the end, I guessed that it was because she used to live too well. In her heart, when she first saw Yang Xiao, she was like a bird struggling to fly out of the birdcage. What she fell in love with was the free, unfettered, and wanton man. At the beginning, although most of the author's pen and ink was spent on Ding Yi's inner confession, I felt that the point of why love was not shown enough. She seemed to suddenly fall in love without any reason, which detracted from the beginning of the story. 2. Yang Xiao's stomach problem makes me powerless: Stomach pain is very painful, but Yang Xiao's stomach trouble always makes me feel uncomfortable. According to my understanding, Yang Xiao's pain was probably due to gastric perforation, but there was no such thing. When I read it, I felt that the author had exaggerated a bit and seemed awkward; second, why was Yang Xiao unwilling to go to the hospital? Is it because I didn't take the medicine properly? I just took it once when it hurts and stopped taking it when it didn't hurt? What's the inner meaning behind his actions? I have been waiting for the author to give me an explanation, but it seems that it has no other purpose except to serve as a contrast to Ding Yi's endless love for him. I always thought there would be a deeper story, but I was a bit disappointed. Even compared to Ding Yilai, for a long time in the early stage, Yang Xiao was just a name, and it was only in the later stage that he gradually became flesh and blood. 3. A plot that makes me feel particularly inconsistent: I don't remember exactly where he was. Ding Yi sent Yang Xiao home because he had a stomach problem, and then he broke out in a sweat and went to take a shower and change Yang Xiao's clothes, and... Let his brother see him. The elder brother left when he was angry... Just left... I think this angry brother is really rough. I always thought that he must either beat up Yang Xiao or drag his sister away regardless of the situation... Anyway, this plot was a thorn in my heart when I read the article. So I dropped my phone, and it took me 2 days to start reading again... Embarrassing Well, I've been talking about it for a long time. Overall, the author's later writing is very good. It's really getting better and better, and it also makes me feel itchy (I am Xiangdong, thank you~). In fact, I have thought about what would happen if the heroine wanted to get along with Xiangdong, haha XD Finally, thank you to the author for bringing me such a simple and beautiful love story. Although it has so many thorns, I really like this story. Keep up the good work! Illegal party long review shop | bean sprouts | produced

I jumped out again when I saw some comments saying that I don't like Xiangdong. I want to say that if someone recruits you and messes with you, why will they become a scumbag? He didn't disturb Ding Yi and Yang Jian's marriage, right? He didn't do anything that bothered Ding Yi before Ding Yi's divorce, right? You are so unwelcome when you are so honest? Some people say that Yang Jian is ignorant, but he just doesn't understand his own mind. I feel like he is so grown up, where else can he be stupid? Why should Ding Yi be injured at the cost of his maturity? I have only heard that a daughter-in-law has to give birth to children and take care of the elderly. I have not heard that a daughter-in-law has to support her husband. Note that it is "support"! Two people can have conflicts and disputes when they are together, but as an adult, Yang Jian has no awareness of taking responsibility - why did he marry Ding Yi in the first place? When he married Ding Yi, didn't he think about the pressure he might face in the future? Yang Jian is really too old to rely on others for what he does. When my son was three years old, I taught him to be a man who tries not to make mistakes but must correct them if he does! You can't make everyone satisfied with you, but you must not disappoint those who care. I think Yang Jian once made Ding Yi despair of him. Yang Jian denied all Ding Yi's efforts. Sometimes once some damage occurs, no matter how you make up for it, you will still have regrets. All I can say is that Ding Yi still forgives Yang Jian, this woman is so good!!! I hope my son can meet such a goddess in the future. She is simply a role model, model and benchmark for her daughter-in-law in the eyes of her mother-in-law!!! ——The general idea is that even if my son is Tuo Xiang, you must love him without regrets Then there is Xiang Dong. Xiang Dong only took action after Ding Yi divorced. I just want to say, girls, if you meet such a loyal dog when you are single or after a breakup, are you prepared to be made to cry every day??? Stop being evil to Xiangdong, what a wonderful person he is. If I hadn't gotten married, I would have wanted to get married. He has a house and a car, but he is still devoted, and he still doesn't think Ding Yi is a second-hand commodity. You should give him a thumbs up for this.

Author, you write very well, but I really can't stand it anymore. First of all, I am sure that you write very well. I just feel that this is not a romance novel, but an inspirational family ethics drama. Single mother Ding Yi is not raising her husband, she is raising her son. This is the way I treat my son. He gives him whatever he wants. If he bumps into me, he will coax him like a baby. Except when he does something wrong, he doesn't hit him. These two are like a couple! Yang Xiao is like the lousy son raised by Ding Yi. The son was rebellious at first but was no longer a thing. Later, the mother used her deep love to bring the little bastard back to the right path. The son finally understood his mother and knew that he was nothing but a toy and sorry for his mother. . . . . . Then the two understood each other and were considerate of each other, and the feud was resolved. But author, can you change the ending? He changed his name to a son and later changed his ways and studied hard and made progress every day and finally became a god of academics. After the college entrance examination, Peking University, Tsinghua University and Hong Kong University all offered scholarships to him. My mother was so happy. At the same time, my mother ushered in her second spring. !! Just like that, let your son do 1V1 or NP or stir up whatever he likes. He is so grateful that he won't hang around in front of his mother anymore. I really despise this bitch Yang Xiao. You said that your wife is raising you like a son and you still don't even know what your last name is. Well, luckily I don't have a daughter. If I had a daughter and had a son-in-law like Yang Xiao, I guess my husband and I would be able to become monks and go to the temple to atone for our sins - what sin did we both commit in our previous lives to let such an ancestor harm us?!!! Author, please give Xiang Dong the upper hand. Can you bear to let such a loving, stupid and cute dog squat in the corner and cry? All this is my personal complaint. I once again emphasize that the author's writing is very good. If it were not good, I would not buy it. Even though I bought it, I gave up after seeing this, because the author did not intend to change the CP. But I still thank the author for his hard work

Ding Yi is a woman with a lot of maternal love. In fact, it was okay to be childish when she was a student, but after experiencing so many children pursuing her in such a childish way and tone, it was so awkward. Either Ding Yi liked being a mother. Well, I don't really like Yang Xiao's character. Xiang Dong is so reliable, but it's a pity that Ding Yi doesn't like him.

Hello, Silent Girl, this is Xiaobei. I'm really sorry that the order has been delayed for so long. This was the first time Xiaobei received an order, but at that time he had a little more orders. But after reading the first chapter of the girl, I still decisively accepted it. The following are some of Xiaobei's humble opinions. If there are any wrong things, please forgive me. After reading it, the first thing I want to say is the layout of the girl. To be honest, the girl's article made Xiaobei a little dizzy. My suggestion is that each paragraph should have a blank line, as well as the length of the paragraph. Because it is serialized on the Internet, the paragraphs are too long and inconvenient to read. Therefore, I suggest that the girl can debug the paragraphs appropriately and make good use of paragraphs. This will make it look more comfortable and readers can savor her good writing. As for the wedge, it feels more like copywriting after reading it, and it does not have much effect on the topic, so it is recommended to discard it. The beginning of the article does not have the impetuousness of Xiaoyan, nor is it a straightforward "you love me, I love you". The girl's article gives people a eloquent feeling. The rhythm of the article is also well controlled, and the arrangement of each chapter is quite appropriate. If it weren't for the segmentation problem, Xiaobei would definitely insist on watching it. However, the article is not concise enough. Maybe the girl is worried that if the narration is not in place, it will appear too abrupt. But in fact, many places can be mentioned in one sentence, and repeated descriptions will be cumbersome. Of course, if it is to pave the way for later chapters, or to highlight the character's personality, you can also work harder on the details, because many places in girls' stories mostly describe appearance or clothing. Such descriptions are a little pale, like here [Etiquette] The style of the dress is simple and elegant. When worn on Ding Yi, it does not have the feeling of being cute or well-behaved that ordinary little girls usually like. Instead, it looks calm and calm. Without accessories, it not only does not look monotonous, but also has an indescribable and refined feeling. This can actually be omitted, because in the first chapter, the girl has already said that the heroine is beautiful wearing bedsheets. The beauty of the heroine has been described from the front. If you want to deepen the impression later, it is better to highlight it from the side. If these descriptions were viewed through other people's eyes, wouldn't they be even more amazing? Although if the characters in it are not named, it may be misleading. But Xiaobei wants to say that the names of girls appear too frequently. For example, here [Ding Yi couldn't help but grinned and his eyes were crooked. Although Ding Yi often laughs, in fact, Ding Yi in the following can be called "she", because this paragraph is all about Ding Yi. In a paragraph, if there is only one person, or only one man and one woman, would it be better to use he or she instead? Otherwise, although the names of those few people are repeated throughout the article, it will give people a repetitive and long-winded feeling. Xiaobei prefers to analyze characters. Ding Yi in the girl novel begins to have a different feeling because of his unknown love, which also makes the character no longer monotonous. The superposition of each chapter makes Ding Yi's image clearer and clearer. She was well-educated and sensible at the beginning, but when she met Yang Xiao for the first time, she was jokingly called "ruining a good painting" by the other party, or even her brother Ding Ao noticed the difference in her, as if there was a chemical reaction. But will Ding Yi's image change too quickly? When dealing with other people and even her parents, she behaves like a lady, well-informed and sensible. But from the first meeting, the heroine Ding Yi has subverted her image, showing an expression that she has never seen before. Although the relationship between the two is the main line and the supporting context of the article, there needs to be a transition here instead of it happening overnight. The heroine's transformation is too fast and seems a bit sudden. Emotions need experience and precipitation. Ding Yi's series of reactions to Yang Xiao always felt like they were not something a heroine would do with her temperament. Even if it is to highlight the specialness of the male protagonist, it still requires a process. Another point, regarding using a meme twice, the girl may want to highlight the name Ding Yi and deepen the impression on readers, but it is not recommended to do so. After all, it was a surprise the first time, but not the second time. Although the article also contains a lot of dialogue, it still feels more like a narrative article. There are too many introductions, and because of the layout, it looks more and more dizzy. So the question is still the same. I hope the girl will pay attention to the conciseness of the article. Instead of writing a long paragraph about the background, it is better to write a scene in detail to increase the sense of the picture and streamline it appropriately. There is also the subtle change when two people get along, although it may be just a look or an expression, but it is much better than a long description. Since we focus on describing the key points, we still need to make some choices in plot arrangement. Don't write everything that comes to mind. Sometimes, it is better to give people a feeling of unfinished thoughts than to spread out everything. Ding Yi rejected the pursuit of others, which made Xiaobei think of a sentence, "Because he is not that person, everyone else has become a general, but I don't want to be a general." This woman has her own strength and persistence. Although she has not seen the end, she also believes that Ding Yi, who has such a strong character, has her own bravery and will stick to the final choice in her heart. Finally, congratulations to Silent Girl for finishing. The girl's article has her own unique style, and the comfort between the lines is expressed by being well-ironed. I hope that the girl's writing will become better and better as she writes. Unreliable long review shop: Yours sincerely, Xiaobei

This is a better ending! Thank you author

I hate Xiangdong, □. He fell in love with Zai Yi when he was still a good friend's wife. Do you have such a friend? Xiao is already considered stupid. If it were another man, he would be wary before marriage, and even warned her husband to ignore your business. Later, he was confused by the author as the protagonist. I don't understand why some people like him. Think about it from his perspective. If there is such a person around you, you will like it. If your friend divorces, he will follow. Have you ever asked your friend's heart? Do you really understand your friend? Anyway, I can't understand such a person, nor can I. I will make friends with Xiangdong. There is nothing wrong with liking people, but there is indeed a problem with his character. Those who like Xiangdong should think more about it. He is really good to Yiyi, but he is too selfish. No matter how much the author and his friends like him, in reality, he definitely has a bad reputation. I hope everyone will think about it. As for Xiao and Yi, if they still have feelings for each other, why can't Mao get back together? Xiao has not made any principled mistakes. He has also discovered his sincerity and has been working hard. Why not give them a chance? I don't understand. In fact, if you have experienced it, you will understand that if you have given sincerely, you will not take it back easily, unless you just really like yourself at the time and don't really like Xiao that much. I hope the author will not be contradictory everywhere.

Okay, am I the only one who found this chapter interesting? Yiyi should be able to take care of Yang Xiao, but only when the two get back together will they understand that nothing can go back.

It's too far-fetched\'Just to return to Yang Xiao for Yiyi\'I have been chasing the article\'I don't want to read this chapter anymore\'Yang Xiao is too selfish\'Doesn't deserve Yiyi\'Is Yiyi a fool\'Xiangdong came to you when he was most helpless\'Yang Xiao saw Yiyi and It was only when Xiangdong was together that he began to realize his feelings again. "It's like a child grabbing a toy." And "If he really loves Yiyi," shouldn't he let her go after Yiyi finds happiness? "Why is he still so willful about Yiyi, making things difficult for her?"