The unlucky fat girl Su Marie died on the operating table of the plastic surgery hospital in order to survive.
By chance, she got a chance to be reborn and returned with a system called Heartthrob.
Under the personal guidance of the cool, noble and arrogant heartthrob system, her life was reopened.
In her last life, she was a fat bun that everyone hated.
In this life, she wants to be a heartthrob who is loved by everyone, has flowers blooming, and has flat tires on her car.
[Instructions for entering the pit]:
① Some of the experiences of the heroine are relatively smooth, and may even make you feel unrealistic. If you feel uncomfortable, please give me a thumbs up.
② The author is seeking death and likes to spread blood, so the blood is still there. Readers who hate it, please be careful.
③ This article is definitely a good one. The heroine has everything going smoothly, except for a little bit of abuse at the beginning, which makes her happy (*^__^*).
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Intention:
A slightly better and gentler boy can win the heroine. The heroine is the kind of person who falls deeper and deeper in love and then loses herself. No matter how hard I change, I still can't get rid of the cowardice in my bones. I hope authors can write more heroines with independent personalities and wisdom. Even if she is not beautiful, she will be more attractive.
I have been busy with my own affairs at home recently, and I have no time and no network to update. I am sorry for making readers and friends wait. Haha, I will continue to update, but something unexpected happened and it was cumbersome. It was only yesterday that I was completely busy. I hope everyone will forgive me.
Is this anti-theft or something? At least tell me
Dear author, I bought the wrong product, can I return it? 189 Points. They were all saved with my points. I ordered them wrong.
Hey, did the heroine sell herself?
Since the summer vacation, I have rarely read new stories. I clicked on the limited-free version and suddenly came across this article. After reading it, I wanted to share my thoughts with the author.
On the whole, it is indeed a wonderful article as the text says. With the golden finger and the heartthrob system, the heroine can be turned around in an instant, which makes people unable to adapt. In his previous life, he was obviously a cowardly bun, but he only experienced the blows from the best and the golden finger's instant counterattack. This is different from many counterattack novels. The counterattack only took a few chapters to end, and then began to abuse the heroine who did not like the people she liked. Tsk, I don't know if this is the first time that the author writes about rebirth, and I have to say that it seems a little mishandled here.
There are a few things to criticize about the writing, but it can still be said to be good. Although the progress is a bit fast, it is still acceptable.
The copywriting states that there is a lot of bloodshed, and Dingdian looked at the author's other works and found that most of them contain bloodshed. I have to say that although the plot is cliche, it also has some new ideas within the cliche, so it is still worth watching.
From reading this point, it can be seen that the author wants to write that the heroine changes for the better and better, but to be honest, the writing style of cheating but not completely cheating makes Nailida very confused. How does the author really want the heroine to transform? Did he go through a lot of setbacks as a man, or did it really go smoothly as the text said, and the author became a mother and became a phoenix?
Okay, so at this point, there are some small questions about the relationship between the male and female protagonists.
First, although Boss Min has not revealed his identity yet, judging from Boss Min's current performance, how could he not know that he likes the heroine?
Secondly, are the heroine's character and the hero's character both a little too superficial? He always flaunts who he is, but forgets what he said, just be yourself.
Third, the author doesn't want to be a black Virgo, okay, okay, okay? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Along the way, Ding Ding saw that perfectionists are Virgos. Are Boss Min and Allen like this? Is it really okay to accept it? Not all Virgos are perfectionists, okay? For example, Nail is a Virgo who has no perfectionism complex.
Fourth, the transition seems a bit stiff, and the demonstrative pronouns do not make it clear who is who. It is easy to get confused when there are too many characters.
Finally, and most importantly, I personally think that the heroine loses her temper unscrupulously towards people around her, becomes polite to strangers, is jealous, has low self-esteem, cannot see her own shortcomings and only sees the faults of others, and even rarely loses her temper when being helped by friends. In fact, it is understandable for a cowardly woman to have such a response, but can this be said to be hypocritical? And the author loves this kind of character too much. I always feel that Boss Min is a bit broken. Instead of being domineering at the beginning, he has taken the same pretentious route as the heroine.
Generally speaking, I believe that many girls who read the article will not give up, but the author can use less nonsense and add more realistic factors to make the heroine not so pretentious. If she wants to transform, she must really become a perfect new person. Even if the golden finger is turned on, she is still called Sumari!
I present my first long review and hope that the author will be full of thoughts and write better and better.
Let me go, why don't you do this? I would rather write about Yang You at the beginning than see the two people's identities reversed. Isn't it a bad taste? What about three views? It's disgusting if you have to be so bloody?
A little abuse is not enough, is it just pleasure? Show, show, show, you need more abuse to be satisfied (*^__^*) Hee hee...
A slightly better and gentler boy can win the heroine. The heroine is the kind of person who falls deeper and deeper in love and then loses herself. No matter how hard I change, I still can't get rid of the cowardice in my bones. I hope authors can write more heroines with independent personalities and wisdom. Even if she is not beautiful, she will be more attractive.
I have been busy with my own affairs at home recently, and I have no time and no network to update. I am sorry for making readers and friends wait. Haha, I will continue to update, but something unexpected happened and it was cumbersome. It was only yesterday that I was completely busy. I hope everyone will forgive me.
Is this anti-theft or something? At least tell me
Dear author, I bought the wrong product, can I return it? 189 Points. They were all saved with my points. I ordered them wrong.
Hey, did the heroine sell herself?
Since the summer vacation, I have rarely read new stories. I clicked on the limited-free version and suddenly came across this article. After reading it, I wanted to share my thoughts with the author. On the whole, it is indeed a wonderful article as the text says. With the golden finger and the heartthrob system, the heroine can be turned around in an instant, which makes people unable to adapt. In his previous life, he was obviously a cowardly bun, but he only experienced the blows from the best and the golden finger's instant counterattack. This is different from many counterattack novels. The counterattack only took a few chapters to end, and then began to abuse the heroine who did not like the people she liked. Tsk, I don't know if this is the first time that the author writes about rebirth, and I have to say that it seems a little mishandled here. There are a few things to criticize about the writing, but it can still be said to be good. Although the progress is a bit fast, it is still acceptable. The copywriting states that there is a lot of bloodshed, and Dingdian looked at the author's other works and found that most of them contain bloodshed. I have to say that although the plot is cliche, it also has some new ideas within the cliche, so it is still worth watching. From reading this point, it can be seen that the author wants to write that the heroine changes for the better and better, but to be honest, the writing style of cheating but not completely cheating makes Nailida very confused. How does the author really want the heroine to transform? Did he go through a lot of setbacks as a man, or did it really go smoothly as the text said, and the author became a mother and became a phoenix? Okay, so at this point, there are some small questions about the relationship between the male and female protagonists. First, although Boss Min has not revealed his identity yet, judging from Boss Min's current performance, how could he not know that he likes the heroine? Secondly, are the heroine's character and the hero's character both a little too superficial? He always flaunts who he is, but forgets what he said, just be yourself. Third, the author doesn't want to be a black Virgo, okay, okay, okay? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Along the way, Ding Ding saw that perfectionists are Virgos. Are Boss Min and Allen like this? Is it really okay to accept it? Not all Virgos are perfectionists, okay? For example, Nail is a Virgo who has no perfectionism complex. Fourth, the transition seems a bit stiff, and the demonstrative pronouns do not make it clear who is who. It is easy to get confused when there are too many characters. Finally, and most importantly, I personally think that the heroine loses her temper unscrupulously towards people around her, becomes polite to strangers, is jealous, has low self-esteem, cannot see her own shortcomings and only sees the faults of others, and even rarely loses her temper when being helped by friends. In fact, it is understandable for a cowardly woman to have such a response, but can this be said to be hypocritical? And the author loves this kind of character too much. I always feel that Boss Min is a bit broken. Instead of being domineering at the beginning, he has taken the same pretentious route as the heroine. Generally speaking, I believe that many girls who read the article will not give up, but the author can use less nonsense and add more realistic factors to make the heroine not so pretentious. If she wants to transform, she must really become a perfect new person. Even if the golden finger is turned on, she is still called Sumari! I present my first long review and hope that the author will be full of thoughts and write better and better.
Let me go, why don't you do this? I would rather write about Yang You at the beginning than see the two people's identities reversed. Isn't it a bad taste? What about three views? It's disgusting if you have to be so bloody?
A little abuse is not enough, is it just pleasure? Show, show, show, you need more abuse to be satisfied (*^__^*) Hee hee...
Looking for more sweet moments.
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