Falling Deeper with Every Step

Unable to accept the plot of the female partner being raped

I'm actually a little happy. After reading articles from more than ten years ago, I can clearly realize that those contents are inappropriate and those opinions are garbage.

Throw flowers! Speaking of which, the author's love is deep, why is it locked?

After reading this article, I am not happy with some of the comments and suggestions. -About settings The setting is novel and catchy. When I saw the copywriting, my whole heart ached. I felt like I was sorry for not reading this article~ The male protagonist and the female protagonist can be said to be incompatible with each other, right? So I just wanted to see how the author could bring two people who were so at odds with each other and even hated each other to come together. He successfully kept me here and kept me reading and watching the follow-up. -About writing style If set well, this can only mean that the reader is captured in the first dozen chapters and the reader has the patience and passion to continue reading the text, but it does not mean that the reader will stay to read the book. Rose's writing style is great in the first few chapters - especially when describing the male protagonist! It makes people blush and their heart beats. There is nothing to say about the writing style. But the description and shaping of the heroine are not so good. I feel that the writing is not strong enough. I saw the setting of the heroine's "facial paralysis" in the copywriting and thought it was cute. However, the author did not highlight this characteristic of the heroine. There is also a lack of details in other aspects, which makes the character hollow. The dialogue is also stiff. I was reading another article by the author, "Marriage", and I found that the author has a habit of ending dialogues with "ah", such as "Are you crazy?" Or "Do you want your child to be born with a black registered permanent residence?" When I saw such dialogue, I felt a bit outrageous. Of course, this is the author's habit, but the dialogue highlights To show the character of the character, if the little loli talks like this, that's fine, but if it's Zhou Cheng who says: "Do you want your child to be born with a black registered permanent residence?" It feels like coquettishness... Anyway, I'm shocked =..= The details and some action descriptions feel stiff, and the writing can't be rushed. You can make progress by writing slowly. Moreover, the biggest flaw in a writing style is that it's as big as a rose! You must understand the context of the idiom or word! The idiom itself may be related to the scene at that time, but when used there, it is wrong or extremely awkward. Just to give you a random example, it's Chapter 43: "How could he be so shameless as to invite her to take a bath together?" The bath is the key point. This word seems to be right in the sentence, but it reads strangely. It would be better if it were replaced by "take a bath together"! This is the psychological description of the heroine. This word makes this sentence extremely strange... There are also some improper use of words and idioms in the article, and someone must have discovered it, so reviewing and catching bugs is very important... -About the male protagonist This is probably the most vivid male protagonist in my mind! The male protagonist Zhou Cheng created by the author is so successful! The first chapter firmly caught my attention. He was short-cut and tall. This was the first impression. Later, the character gradually became more fleshed out. But in the last few chapters, or when the relationship with the heroine gradually stabilized, his image seemed to be different from what the author had described before. The writing collapsed - it is not only fan fiction that will collapse a character, it also collapses when the character's behavior is inconsistent. Zhou Cheng became, how should I say, a little irrational? For example, in chapters 72 and 3, when Qingyin was slapped by Suning, Zhou Cheng comforted him in a low voice? He also said, "'Okay, okay, if he hits you, let's hit him too, okay.' After Zhou Cheng said that, he punched Suning." This part made me scorched on the outside and tender on the inside. The image at the beginning of the article of being cool and shocking or calm and calm with one fatal move suddenly collapsed! Let's just assume that he became like this because of his lover, but a truly rational and mature man should calmly pull Suning away, ask him seriously why, and not let him do it again. So my impression of Zhoucheng was that at first I was excited and passionate about it, but later on, I had a question - is this still Zhoucheng? Or is it the Zhoucheng who took things by force? How to break the feeling of being suddenly possessed by a boy! Therefore, while the author is successfully shaping the character, he must also pay attention to the consistency of the character's words and deeds. -About the heroine Shen Qingyin, I especially liked this name when I first appeared. My impression of her when she first appeared was "upright, brave, strong, not understood but not discouraged", but later it became clear that she was not. She was selfish, cowardly, and somewhat negative. Many people criticize this heroine, she does have a lot of shortcomings, and I think she really doesn't deserve the love of the hero. It's not that Qingyin is a Mary Sue if she is "upright, brave, kind, strong" or any other good thing. If the female protagonist has no good character, why should the male protagonist like her? Would anyone love such a person in real life? If Zhou Cheng hadn't remembered her for seven years and hated her, Qing Yin would never have had any interaction with Zhou Cheng! I won't get together with him! Therefore, although this article is HE, if the heroine's character can be shaped better, it will be smoother! The whole story makes sense now: the male protagonist hated the female protagonist for seven years, and took revenge wildly after being released from prison. However, the female protagonist was neither humble nor arrogant, faced it bravely, and apologized for the fact that she had indirectly caused Zhou Cheng to go to jail. Zhou Cheng was gradually attracted to her, and the huge hatred turned into love... Although it was very bloody, it was much more reasonable. The creation of characters promotes the development of the plot, which is very important! ! -About female matching or male matching I have read about twenty chapters of "Marriage", and I have finished reading it every step of the way. I found that the supporting characters in Rose's novel are mostly black ones and clueless ones. Let's not mention the male supporting characters for now, but the female supporting characters are just as mindless. Zhou Bing didn't think she was strong, and Zhao Wen didn't find any merits worthy of Zhou Cheng's liking. The supporting characters gave people a dark feeling, and all of them were cannon fodder. Even the character of the heroine's friend Yang Xinxin was so bad. It turns out that people can only make friends with the heroine based on their differences. Of course, there are good sides, such as Li Mi, although she is arrogant, but she also has the kindness of a little girl; Zhou Bing likes children, which is very loving. My favorite female supporting character is Ling Yi in "Marriage". Her son was injured because An Su couldn't take care of her. Although the author didn't write about her pain in a big way, his impression of her was still that of a 'very good mother'. Male supporting actors, such as Suning, only wrote about the bad side, or the bad side was highlighted too much, making it unrealistic. -Finally After all, there are many areas worthy of improvement in Da Da Wen, but Wendu Grass Chicken suits my taste! And the style is very obvious, so I will follow it in all future articles! Looking forward to the next article. I wrote a lot without thinking, just to express my love for this article, that's why there are so many dissatisfactions, laugh, please don't mind... The next article will definitely be better and more complete! ! ! By the time I saw the article, I had already joined Rose Da's fan group and decided to love Da Da all the time! ! "Step by Step" has its faults, but it's great! Otherwise, I wouldn't be typing out such a string of words to evaluate. I'm especially looking forward to Little Baozi's extras and Zhou Cheng's childhood! ! ! Fat little Zhou Cheng is so cute! I want to see the two of them because of this OOXX...=..= The evil face is revealed... In short, come on, big brother! ! ! !

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This year, my family didn't even notify me, so I cut it off. I found out it was already night time, and it took me a long time to get it right.

Congratulations on finishing the roses and scattering the flowers! *★,°*:.☆\\(￣▽￣)/$:*.°★* But the ending. . Sort of. . Unsatisfied? If you have time, the rose can be trimmed later. .

This is the hardest book I have ever struggled to pursue. You lamented that it was finally finished, and I am also quite moved, but~! It was too fast, and Zhou Cheng was not tortured at all. TAT

It's really over so quickly