Nothing Ever Happens in This World (GL)

"Nothing in the World" is a novella with more than 40,000 words, and it is also the only article I have read recently that made me want to write a long review. Let's first look at a passage from the author (I'm really not trying to make up the word count, this passage is very helpful for my analysis): "In many costume GL novels, the protagonists are too perfect, and the perfection is a bit unreal. In fact, I also want to write the characters with many advantages that people can only look up to. But I am skeptical whether such a person exists. So I want to write about small characters, not very perfect characters. They have all kinds of unsatisfactory aspects, but it does not prevent them from loving life, pursuing true love, and working hard to survive in their own era. That's why Xu Wuyou was created. I think her character is suitable for today's society and is a modified Ah Q spirit. But we can't all write about little people, because the reason why little people are little people is that they obviously lack courage, luck, and decisiveness. It is difficult for such people to accept feelings like GL. I think so. " I secretly think that the author's analysis of the little characters in this paragraph is very accurate, which can more accurately locate the character written by the author: Xu Wuyou, a wandering doctor in the Jianghu. She is just a wandering doctor, so she is greedy for money, but a gentleman loves money and gets it wisely. She is timid, but not cowardly. This can be seen through a shared adversity. Even if her life is in danger when helping others, she is not ashamed to run away. When she encounters love, even if it is forbidden love, after some beating and ideological education (hearing a personal experience story in front of Master Foxin that cannot be missed), she finally understands that this can also be love, and she can face it bravely and act decisively - snatching the bride. She has the compassion and kindness of a little person, and a little bit of loneliness. If she were a "perfect character", she wouldn't have so many shortcomings, but at the same time, she would also lose the cuteness and amiable character caused by these shortcomings and become a relatively stereotyped "high-level" character; if she was a complete little person, then the final pursuit Begging becomes a big problem: she is just a small person, without external help and support. She lacks confidence and cannot muster the courage; when she cannot muster the courage, how can the people she likes believe that they can have a bright future, so they will definitely behave more cowardly than she does. In this way, you cannot have a happy future. Master Foxin and Xu Diqiu are examples. Therefore, the wandering doctor Xu Wuyou is set to be a low-level little person, and at the same time she is also a big shot (the missing palace owner of Anxiang Palace and the daughter of Prince Jin), so as to facilitate the shaping of her little character's character and at the same time give her the hardware facilities to meet the challenges. Therefore, Xu Wuyou is such an imperfect little person. She always dares not to protest loudly against the little beauty and grumbles. She always has a poor memory and seems confused when she doesn't understand the little beauty's thoughts. She refuses to suffer but suffers repeatedly at the hands of the little beauty. She is very cowardly, including being trained later. The pitiful energy in various skills can make us smile knowingly, and Xu Wuyou's cuteness is lifelike (I can even imagine in my mind that she has a round face, round eyes, and a plump little mouth, and she looks like a not-so-handsome young man dressed in men's clothing... Pia Feizhong). How could we not like such a lovely person? As a new writer who is also working hard at writing, what I admire most about the author is that the protagonist is very prominent and the minor characters and events are clearly explained in a few words without wasting too much pen and ink. In terms of descriptions of appearance and other details, we mainly look at it from the perspective of the characters. For example, the appearance of the little beauty was praised by Xu Wuyou, which saves a lot of words (inferiority). However, I felt that the explanation about Lian Jiao was not clear enough... Structurally, the latter part is a little faster, but it doesn't hurt. After all the praise, I would also like to slap some bricks and ask the author to keep it together: Personally, I feel that the character creation of the little beauty is not as successful as that of Wuyou, especially in the second half. When they are about to separate, it seems that they suddenly remember that they like Xu Wuyou. It is a little abrupt, maybe because Xu Wuyou is written more in the front, and the little beauty does not have enough psychological activities (readers who think that the little beauty is also very good, please automatically 54 this paragraph = =), but when it comes to the extra chapter, the little beauty comes to life again. Even so, I feel that the little beauty is not special enough. She is just a normal little beauty who is unruly and willful but kind and pursues love (there are only a few types of beauties who are either gentle or unruly. What do you want to do? Pia flies again...). She is not enough to have more outstanding characteristics of her own personality. In comparison... Xu Wuyou is cuter and cuter, making people want to kiss her! Above. Long comment sent, please check.

I especially like Teacher Yi Baishou's articles. The long stories have their own themes, and the short stories have very personal humor. The background story is also detailed and appropriate for the short stories. The writing style is very personal.

Why do I feel like I clicked on fast forward, I haven't read enough... But the large text is really beautiful, the writing is delicate, and it looks very comfortable. I want to read "Traffic Light", Yi Da. I have been following it from the third year of junior high school to the time when I am about to enter the third year of high school. I hope I can see the ending before the college entrance examination. A little wish (quietly...)

Yi Datian looks so sweet, I kept laughing while watching it

There is nothing wrong in the world, it's up to people to disturb themselves. If you love, you should fight for the one you love.

Little simplicity, little peace, little happiness

What should I do? I love this article so much. The little doctor and the heroine are so cute~

There is nothing wrong in the world, it's up to people to disturb themselves. Haha, well said. The most interesting thing is to read Yi Da's question. My heart is a little worried, but it will develop in the direction I expected ~ Hoho ~ Yi Da Mighty!

A mediocre person comes to disturb this peaceful place

Just for this chapter I have to memorize Li Shangyin's poems