[Twilight] A Chance Encounter Turns to True Love

It's okay... I can only say that the writing style is not very good, so I am really a novice, but my ideas are good.

Can the heroine stop being such a virgin and be so mean? Why are you so servile to the protagonist of the original work? Evil or not, bitch or not.

I'm sick. There is a bug in this article. Doesn't Edward have a superpower and be able to listen to other people's voices? Then why is the heroine, an idiot, still thinking about a lot of things in her mind? Since she knows that she doesn't have the ability to shield like Bella, she should just stop thinking too much! Wonderful imagination

I feel that the author has made a big mistake. Writing a fan fiction that is negative is a big problem. I think you must have read the original work or at least watched the movie when writing a Twilight fan fiction. Alice likes Bella very much. This part is handled very poorly. You added an original character, but it actually doesn't conflict with Twilight's original plot. Is there any need for Black Bella to do this? You can completely intersperse your own stories with the original plot. For example, in this paragraph, why can't you write that Edward brought Bella here? Bella is an ordinary person in the original work. She falls in love with Edward, but she is essentially afraid of vampires, at least in the first movie. So it is impossible for her to write a foreign story like you said, a relative or someone who comes to visit. Even if the language cannot be close to the original work, at least she must follow the foreign living habits. The second question is that there is no need for the author to use the first person when writing this book. Although the original work is written in the first person, it does not mean that your fans must also use the first person. The advantage of the first person is that you can write about the inner activities of the protagonist. For example, how the female protagonist feels when she sees a scenery, and how she feels when she sees the male protagonist. However, you can hardly see those in this article, and the author will switch perspectives from time to time, so this first person writing is not very successful. The most obvious evidence is that all the individuals in the article call me Miranda, which is completely valid. It's just a personal opinion, please support the author~

The setting of Twilight Vampire is very special. The heroine turns into a vampire that shines in the sun. Who would have thought of it after seeing Twilight?! You should be the first to guess/doubt whether she is wearing Twilight, right?!

It can't be Marcus, right? Quite in line with the above conditions

I like it a lot, even though the character of Caius is not written out.

Happy wedding, be happy

Be happy! ! ! ~\\(≧▽≦)/~

I wish you a happy wedding~Be happy~~