[Harry Potter Fanfiction Fanfiction] The Angel of the Rainbow
[HP同人的同人]彩虹的天使
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 9k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 12y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
5Chapters
18Favorites
8.0Score
1.3kClicks per chapter
11Comments
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Can I say. . . I don't understand this guy a bit. . . [Is it really an IQ problem? -_-||
No matter how many times I watch it, I still feel that the last part is truly healing [It's really healing, not depressing, look at my serious face So Hui Hui should change it and write it into lyrics! [What and what = = It feels really warm. . The question is, is it really a manly thing to have a threesome like this? ! What a threesome? So listen to me, let the professor kidnap Elise and then Ariel and Sirius HE! You really have enough!
I don't even know whose jealousy Elise is... Jealous of Ariel? Jealous of Sirius? Sure enough, the relationship between these three is ambiguous! ! CP is actually the same person←w←
As expected, my comments were swallowed... The gray text is good for healing QAQ Ariel is so heart-wrenching. . . Let's just go straight to Ariel and Sirius, and then Elise and the Professor! Is there any author who treats your heroine like you = =
Inexplicably abused QAQ Ariel should be happy, innocent and happy! ! How can it be so sad! ! She shouldn't have to endure this! ! [Where did you put Elise = =
Well no more couches…front row… Ariel is so cute [face covering] Elise is so calm... She really deserves to be from the Snake House = =
--Now, Merlin, and God to whom the Muggles pray, please help me. . ——A little more would be nice, allowing me to be a child longer. It would be nice to have a little more time so that I can spend a little more time with her. . As I said, I like your details. This sentence makes people want to touch Elise~~ "Elise is still young! If the relationship with the people around her changes, she will be upset! I won't date or get married until Elise finds a good partner!" It turns out Ariel has such a careful side. . . . Yes, pffff~~ Ariel is very cute. Doesn't that sound like a grandma selling melons? Haha, I like the Ariel you created, a person forgotten by time, a mature age, and a pure heart~~
Hui Hui, I like your detail processing very much. In the last sentence here, Elise bit the candy in her mouth. I don't know why, but I can empathize with Elise's mood, even though it is a short sentence. . . .
Hehe~~~Catch a bug~When Elise asked Ariel if she wanted to play together, Ariel should have shaken her head~~I read your article, and I felt that I wanted to get back to the original setting. . . .
I like your details, such as when Snape called Potter, Elise also raised her head, and Ariel's tolerance and gentleness, well, she finally grew up. . . . What's the point of speaking in such a vicissitudes of tone? . . .