(Transmigrate into a Book) My Master Is the Boss

There is still a lot of room for improvement.

There is no love for each other, dear~, why don't we change it again?

Ma Dan, have you agreed that the apprentice and the master will love each other? ? What's going on with those people who came out to disrupt the situation? ?

Don't think I didn't see the last sentence - "Actually, this is just the beginning" What's behind... Not happy T^T Oh, I have a little suggestion. I feel that because this article is not an orthodox cultivation article, the highlight is not the fighting, so my focus is mainly on the master-disciple rivalry. But the daily life of master and apprentice is too little... I was initially attracted by the cute little apprentice and the silly master... As a result... First Tianji, then Xiaobai, and Mo Tuantuan... All blocked our sister Awan and the master! (The background music here is the Queen Mother angrily rowing across the Milky Way to separate the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl ←_←) It got worse later, the master in the future chapter even lost his body... He finally returned home and his body was restored, but you were finished... Fall! Of course, I still like this article +_+ because she is very cute ╮(╯▽╰)╭ but her flaws are also quite obvious, the running account feels a little heavy. As a story, her overall structure is very smooth, but every detail is not important. Mr. Fuyun can consider some parts in more detail when writing articles in the future. It may be better to write after determining the focus. The above are just my little thoughts. After all, from the first few chapters until now, I still have a lot of affection for this article. Looking forward to Fuyunjun's new article O(∩_∩)O

I was so full... I suddenly thought about how Hansel and Gretel broke up →_→Are there any normal people in this world orz...

So Master, have you succeeded in getting into shape?

Awan is in danger... Call Master urgently!

When I saw Gao Yi say, "You are jealous of my high IQ" - he really said it! ! ! And Awan didn't deny it! ! !

Is it going to end? ? It feels like a lot of the plot has not been unfolded... T^T

Sister Awan said that she will definitely cheat her second apprentice for ten thousand years, O(∩_∩)O hahaha~