A Journey Through Luoyang in Mist and Rain
烟雨洛阳行
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 3k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 19y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
2Chapters
264Clicks per chapter
6Comments
Reader comments 5
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烟雨洛阳行
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Well, after reading the text... I ended up following the martial arts trend. Read the text. Avoiding the warm sunshine --The word "warmth"... Also, since it is "warm sunshine", do you still need to "hold a paper umbrella to hide"? "Sister Linxiang, sister Linxiang, look at the little tiger bullying me!" A clear child's voice --Is this really... A child's voice? The rolling hills surround the village in a ring shape --I can only OTL... (PS this one is 54, my little girl is too picky) Okay, stop here I haven't read the plot yet, but in terms of the copywriting and the parts I've read, your writing is not very attractive. The mainstream of martial arts can cater to the psychology of most readers, but after all it is not enough... Qi Your copywriting is very ordinary, similar to an introduction. However, the introduction relies on "oddity" to attract readers, and yours is inappropriate. My daughter is very talented and has little knowledge. I am afraid that I cannot understand the connotation that you want to convey through the popular plot, so I can only let it go. I also hope that the author will not blame my daughter for her words and continue to work hard. I believe that I will produce excellent works in the future. At that time, I will definitely look at it with a new mentality and appreciate your literature.
It's too short, it ends before you enter the state... Then the previous chapter felt so eerie, "Speaking of ten years ago..." Well, in this chapter, it seems that this group of charlatans talk a bit too much. It can be seen that they want to introduce these sects through their dialogue, but usually charlatans don't talk so much when chatting. It is enough to explain it straightforwardly below. But it's just my personal opinion, keep up the good work~
Too short bird! After reading it, I felt that the plot developed too fast and seemed abrupt, but that's what everyone thinks.
Well written, please keep updating ********
Come on, spread the flowers******* You must work hard to fill it out