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Forehead. . . I like those silly but funny sentences. As for the story, your writing style, plot, etc., Not so much. . . . . Maybe you should practice more. . . .
The sentences are okay, but it feels like they are just piled together. Maybe they should...
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I think it's very well written. Maybe you can submit it and write some short or medium-length stories, because your language is very concise. . . . Really, I admire it, it seems like we are still from the same school. . . . . I'm also a novelist. . .
28 Years old means 16 years old, right? The storyline needs to be strengthened, please describe it more yourself, and some places need it. . . . .
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