The first time they met, she killed the leading general in his army with a single sword thrust. The next time they met, he saw her ordinary face beneath her mask, yet told her she was beautiful. Why should the rise and fall of the realm concern either of us? That flash of red beside his white robes was all that mattered.
They did not truly get to know each other until five years later. Her country had killed his mentor. How would he face her now? His sworn-brother of a junior fellow disciple wanted to overturn the realm, but all he wanted was to protect this peaceful, prosperous world. Amid grudges and passions, right and wrong, the world of martial arts and the imperial court, where would they go from here? They loved and fought each other, but what could they do?
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When my hair reaches my waist, it covers my fat body. Even if he is a tough guy, he still needs to be aloof and arrogant to support him! .
If only you can understand my mood, why are there only memories left? Maybe only you can make me understand love, as if I am still living in a dream, you have always been silently caring about my expression. It has not been easy for a long time. I want to walk into your heart and exhale with you. Anyway, our hearts are together. Can I just love you like this? Stay in my heart. I am still myself. Can I love you like this? Turn around and leave. It's all over. If I can't be with you at all, I can only let myself go and maybe face you. Happiness is not just a dream. I will always be exiled here. It has always been me silently caring about your grievances. No matter how wronged you are, it is not easy. I want to hold you in my arms. From warmth to loneliness. Anyway, our hearts are together. Can I just love you like this? In the blink of an eye, I am still myself. Can I love you like this? Turn around and leave. It's all gone. Can I love you like this? Where are you? I have your breath. Can I love you like this? I want to know where happiness is.
Why do I always think that Feng Guangling can defeat an army by himself==
I received a pure ancient style article, the writing style is good, the little beast is very porridge, I will accept it first
Fortunately, it didn't turn red in the later chapters!
You should be an immortal, but why should you be relegated to the mortal world?
It flows like clouds and water, I am deeply attracted, and it is beautiful!
Maybe it's because I am also writing ancient Chinese classics, so I read them with a learning attitude. Okay, without further ado, let's get to the point. When I took the order, I first saw the title of the article [Su Jin Tian Xia]. I personally thought it was a very grand title. Most readers who like ancient Chinese are partial to ancient styles. Such a title is very attractive to readers. Judging from the copywriting and cover, I concluded that this would be a heart-wrenching novel, and after reading the text, my thoughts were confirmed. The woman on the cover gives people an elegant feeling. The copywriting is in lake blue font. The entire layout looks very clear and fresh. The slightly ancient text matches the content of the article very well. When I read the article, there were a total of eighteen chapters. Both the number of words and the time to update the article were very stable. In terms of click-through rate, the click-through rate of the first few chapters was better than that of the later chapters. Regarding this point, I think the author should organize his outline carefully and compare the previous article with the content to be written in the future. Content, and look for the reasons why I lost readers. Everyone likes it differently, but there is definitely a reason for giving up halfway. I read the article seriously, and I generally feel that it is not a problem with the writing style. Generally speaking, a person's style will not change much in an article. Let's talk about the male and female protagonists. The male protagonist is Feng Guangling and the heroine is Su Jin. To be honest, when I read the article, I actually suspected that the heroine was someone else. As far as the author updated the article, Su Jin's aura of the heroine has not been fully brought out. Maybe the article has not been updated a lot. I think in the later articles, I hope to restore a clear heroine. As far as characters are concerned, Feng Guangling's laid-back temperament is very endearing. He is strong enough, has enough aura, has a deep love, and a sad past. His story and his emotional line are all ropes that affect the readers' hearts. The author's portrayal of the male protagonist is more real and convincing compared to the female protagonist. Su Jin is a good example of falling in love and killing each other. In fact, in my opinion, Su Jin is very weak. In front of Feng Guangling, she is really just a little girl. She loves him and is willing to give everything for him. She is not like Feng Guangling who can hide herself well, so I say she is weak. However, this also reflects the true reaction of a woman. Even if she knows that they are destined not to be together, she still can't help but break her body for him. There are many characters mentioned in the article, and each of them is interconnected, making the article seem smooth and smooth. All events happen naturally. The author handles this very well. I like articles with strong storytelling, so I like the author's articles very much. Sometimes there are a lot of slashes in the words of the characters in the article. To be honest, I don't understand what they mean. I added them accidentally, but they still have a deeper meaning, or it may be a personal typing habit. However, I don't think this will give readers a good feeling. The layout of the entire article will look very messy. I hope the author will think twice about this. Overall, the article is good. Keep up the good work and look forward to the future development of the article. By typo king comment shop, Wanwan
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