The Legend of Qin Ke

By the way, Ah Jiu, you've been off the watch for a month, come and apologize...

Next chapter, why is it locked? I haven't read it yet~~ Is it written down to the neck? Didn't Ah Jiu use "the parts that cannot be described below the neck" to mosaic it? Hahaha Some forums wrote that the parts that cannot be described below the neck have been included in the parts that cannot be described below the neck, so they cannot be described~~Hahaha~~

Ah Jiu, why don't you update the article? It's almost a week since you stopped updating. In this way, you will lose a lot of readers... Update it quickly, update it quickly, didn't you agree that the article will be finished in early June?

Small websites are indeed a place for new writers to accumulate popularity, but they do not necessarily allow them to hone their writing skills. On the big stage, authors will feel strong advantages and disadvantages, and a strong impact. There are two meanings to the author, one is a blow, and the other is energy. I have been working on so-called small websites for many years. I have never managed readers. Although my books are not selling well, I am still very satisfied. Only when I feel that I have established myself, can I find a big stage to perform. Basically this is a step-by-step method for new writers, but when I came here, I realized that I wasted too much time there. Many of my author friends have come to Jinjiang to publish articles. There are many authors with high popularity on the website, but every one of them failed. It is difficult to surface the vast ocean of literature, because our writing style and subject matter are very different from those here, and are not the taste of readers here. What I want to say is that as long as you are willing, newbies can practice wherever they go. As long as they don't get knocked down, the big stage is a shortcut to learning. There are more opportunities to learn and hone. It also takes time for small websites to accumulate popularity. Because of the traffic, it may not be faster than big websites. The way to hone your writing is to read more, write more... The most important thing is to understand. I have a friend, ha~~ She used to be a master on the website, but then her articles were rejected one after another. The reasons for rejection include poor writing, too many typos, and incorrect punctuation. People who have not read her articles may be surprised (she used to be a master, and she has not made any progress, but she has good subject matter). People who have read her articles will not be surprised. What surprises me is that you can become a master this way, but this kind of master will not last long. Frankly speaking, my friends asked me to go back. I posted the same article in Jinjiang, and then went back to post it. It received more than a thousand views a day. Readers thought that I would finish the post there and collect it every day, but that was not the case in Jinjiang... Should I go back? I didn't hesitate, because I thought that only by standing up here could I write for the rest of my life. I could go anywhere. Even though I knew I would still go back to my place (the other side), I still wanted to try it here... Ah Jiu, do you understand what I mean? (I gave myself four chances, and this was the third time I fell into a trap. I'm surprised. I used to be an excellent author in the eyes of other editors, but here I failed repeatedly. My writing style and subject matter were too different.) I am willing to tell Ah Jiu this, because Ah Jiu is very serious, as can be seen from your page... Maybe writing cannot be a career, but it can be a lifelong ambition... So I am willing to cheer for you! However, it is not easy to be a recognized author. First of all, as an author, you must give readers the most appropriate reading method from the reader's perspective. (I am also working hard on this) I didn't do much homework here, but then a Canadian reader who I was on his website, who was also a Jinjiang reader in the past, not only helped me write the copy for my first pit, but also told me some precautions, which I will mention to Ajiu here. As soon as she entered the home page of my article, she immediately told me that my copywriting was not good and that my "summary" was too long! She reminded me that the content summary must not be two lines, but only one line. If there are too many words, readers will scroll down and give up. Moreover, it is best for readers to see the copy and article title at a glance as soon as they enter the page, without having to turn the scroll bar~~ The copy must have attractive highlights, and the content summary is the essence of the article, and it must be concise, because readers have no patience to read so many words~~ I remember that I mentioned the content and setting of the novel before. I found that the most confusing aspect of Ah Jiu's story is the change of scene. For example, this paragraph: Suddenly a green shirt appeared in the field of vision, and the spirit couldn't help but be shocked? Is it her? . He took another closer look, and sure enough, the person in the green shirt was the one he had missed for a long time. Next to him was the woman in the yellow shirt, the princess Li Hongyan, whom she had met at the court banquet last year. "Master, could you be gentler next time? It hurt me so much when I fell yesterday." Li Hongyan pulled Qin Ke's sleeve and said coquettishly, "Oh, then you don't want to learn? That's right...". Before Qin Ke could finish speaking, Li Hongyan grabbed her sleeve tightly. Qin Ke estimated that if she was tall enough, she would have covered her mouth tightly. . In fact, I have tried it many times before, but unfortunately they all failed. For example, the paragraph above. In fact, you can't tell how much of a line you have left between the two scenes (it is recommended to use symbols to separate them). In addition, a light shirt appears in the field of vision, and there is no clear description of what the scene is. The sentence jumps to "Lost father, you will do it next time..." This sentence will make the reader confused and unable to form a concrete image in the mind. Therefore, when writing about what you saw, you must write it in detail, rather than carrying it with ideology. And the "man in plain clothes" at the beginning of this article... Who is in plain clothes? If this man has appeared in the previous plot, then it must be stated who is wearing plain clothes, so that readers can take the role as quickly as possible. The author must also write clearly with the mentality that readers may skip reading or new readers just click on this article, so that readers will not be confused about who he is referring to. Unless this character only appears once, it's best to tell who he is directly. Next, "Li Hongyan pulled Qin Ke's sleeve..." Why did Li Hongyan pull Qin Ke's sleeve? As I read on, I realized that they were practicing dancing (but it was very vague), so it must be mentioned in this sentence, or before it, that they were practicing dancing. What kind of martial arts were they practicing (it would be best to roughly write down the moves)? What to try? Many attempts. The author does not explain clearly and it is difficult for readers to understand. Ah Jiu, after you finish writing, you might as well read your text as a reader (I am used to reading out the parts I am not sure about) to see if it can form a clear image in my mind~~ When writing, there must be an image in the mind. This image is like when we are watching TV. The author must write down the TV scenes in detail and cannot skip the shot, such as the frames of the photographer's negatives. Write each frame step by step so that the picture the reader sees will not be blurred. Ah Jiu's problem is not with his writing style, but with his writing skills that are too raw and unable to describe the characters, actions, and plots in detail. However, this is also the author's biggest shortcoming. It can be comforting. In fact, this kind of problem can be solved as long as you are enlightened. It is much better than my poor writing skills~~ In short, just try to "simulate the decomposition action" and write it. As for the description of the character's thinking, this requires some experience. Sometimes writing too much is counterproductive. I think Ah Jiu's description is OK, but the description of the character's emotional ups and downs is not very vivid. Maybe you can hone it and see how others write~~ Come on!

I'm Sazuo Yun (I know!) I am currently using this pen name. I haven't looked at the previous ones. I didn't find "Backlight Like Love" when I searched for it. I didn't look for it because I was busy. I can't find your pen name to enter (Frankly speaking, I don't know how to pronounce Ah Jiu's pen name. I really don't know what the traditional Chinese character is? I have little talent and little knowledge) I quite like that story. I hope Ah Jiu can finish it one day~~Maybe the heroine can travel through dreams~~I fantasize (don't pay attention to me) To be honest, writing articles is an arduous and long road. The hard work invested is often not proportional to the rewards. Most people choose to give up halfway and do not waste time and energy on this path. They would rather use the time to do other things. But there are still some people who refuse to admit defeat and strive for the upper class, and the ones who succeed are often those who strive for the upper class. Only in this way can you get the results you want. The so-called achievement is not necessarily becoming a great god, or making money by writing articles, but a kind of self-affirmation and recognition from readers, or, along the way, meeting close friends and people who understand each other and cherish each other. I am such a person. Writing online articles is very hard. It is impossible for an author to maintain the best condition continuously. There will be ups and downs. As long as you are willing to learn and follow the footsteps of others, even if you don't become famous, you will still have some achievements. It depends on how much effort you are willing to put in! Come on!

Wow! Suddenly I discovered that Yaoxian is so cute! Hehe, when I saw the front page before, it seemed to say that Yaoxian has a wife. Well, I guess it's not a wife. She hasn't married her yet. Isn't this a conflicting couple? It seems that he still has a daughter, but can Ah Yue ask in a weak voice? Yaoxian now looks like a baby, his wife seems to be called Ghost Aunt or something, and the daughter looks like he can be his sister. Is it possible for such a strange family to get back together? It feels like these three people are working together, which is very strange! More importantly, who is the male protagonist? Why haven't I seen Qin Ke and Lian Xun together yet, but were snatched away by some Cheng Yu halfway? Are you so cruel? Ah Yue wants to see Lian Xun, wants to see Lian Xun and Qin Ke together... T^T I hope Ah Jiu's writing is not too cruel. After reading it for so long, the process is tortuous, why do the two of them still have to separate, and likes the evil fox prince! ~\(≧▽≦)/~

Wow! Suddenly I discovered that Yaoxian is so cute! Hehe, when I saw the front page before, it seemed to say that Yaoxian has a wife. Well, I guess it's not a wife. She hasn't married her yet. Isn't this a conflicting couple? It seems that he still has a daughter, but can Ah Yue ask in a weak voice? Yaoxian now looks like a baby, his wife seems to be called Ghost Aunt or something, and the daughter looks like he can be his sister. Is it possible for such a strange family to get back together? It feels like these three people are working together, which is very strange! What's more,

Ah Jiu, come on! Ah Yue supports you. However, Ah Yue feels that this ancient proverb can be written a little more richly and the characters can be drawn a little more, so that it can attract readers. What should I say? I've been busy with various exams recently, and it's really boring! Why is the book so swollen that you can't read it? Is Ajiu also a student? Hey, can you leave a buckle for Ah Yue? (^_^)

It's really hard work, Ah Jiu, come on...

Haha, there is adultery, look forward to it😘