A loner transmigrates? And a precocious child transmigrates? Who could imagine that this child would transmigrate to a place straight out of a transmigration novel? Who could imagine that a mere kid could analyze all sorts of things from a scientific perspective, like that dashing secret agent? Who could imagine that a little child could be so domineering? Zhu Yangmo, just a middle school student, transmigrated in the most spectacular fashion.
The writing is okay. . . It's just that the wording is accurate, you need to improve.