He could give her a tender, lingering love, but he couldn't promise her a love that would last forever,
because he kept an unspeakable secret hidden in his heart.
Two men like this surrounded Ye Zhaoxi:
one as gentle as water, the other as passionate as fire.
They brought her surprises, but they also gave her quite a fright!
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A recommendation for my good friend's story:
Come on Wanwan!!!!
This heroine is overwhelmed by love.
Hhhhhhhhhhhh
Cheers for Wanwan The plot is attractive~~
Expect. . Even more exciting. . . . .
Pretty good, I hope it will be updated soon. . . .
I think it's a bit unreasonable to call the police just because someone didn't show up without any explanation. It would be reasonable to call the police if there were at least blood stains or some bad hints. Normal people would not think of an accident or death when an important person is absent, right?
"It must be him, she won't be mistaken." "This must be Uncle Qiao. Last time I received an invitation from my father, I couldn't come because I was sick. I'm rude." These two sentences have a linguistic problem
The plot is compact and the plot has twists and turns. For reasoning and suspense, such a plain narrative should be said to be just right. But just looking at the opening chapter, this is undoubtedly a story about a fight between wealthy families. There is no suspense at all yet, and if it focuses on romance, I think the language is too straightforward, a bit like a narrative. I always feel that the sense of substitution is weak and the conflict is not strong enough. If the atmosphere creation and sense of substitution are strengthened, it should be more attractive.
Suspense and romance, a very fresh theme, I really like it. Come on, author, please update more!