The Roof

What kind of beautiful love is this???? I'm so dry

[Copywriting question] Maybe you will care why this article has so few collections. Hmm... The copy is too short and unattractive. Some people will read the article when they see the copy they like. Copywriting is like a door. If your exterior decoration doesn't look good, who will go in and take a look at what's inside? Emotional issues In the article, Harry will be slightly confused about his ignorant feelings for the professor. If Hermione hadn't pointed it out, I believe this Harry would not be aware of it. At this time, the author might have to rewrite the novel. The professor in the article also said that he had been confused, and after he was confused, he understood his own feelings. The professor's words would make people very heart-warming, maybe it was the separation after the war. I hope they can be happy in the author's article. [Typesetting issues and punctuation issues] I can't say that the layout of this article has any major shortcomings. It's just a bit crowded. A little enter will have unexpected benefits and it won't look too complicated. However, there are a few sentences where the author seems to have lost a punctuation mark or used it incorrectly. 1. "Potter," he deliberately used the sweetness when Harry called him just now. Error correction: ""Pote."" 2. However, the most bizarre thing, and something Harry will never admit to himself, is that he was obviously and irrevocably seduced by Snape's "Potter" ""Pote" is tempting" 3. "Really? Harry felt that all his wishes had come true, and he felt like a dream for a moment. "(Really) This is a psychological question of whether there are pre-quotes or not. This is the author's own division. 4. Harry shook his head, "No," "No. " In fact, there is a lot more in the article, mainly because the author did not use carriage returns or line feeds. Feeling Hello dear author. This is a story about Harry and his professor after the war. After reading the article, I have to say it is very heartwarming. I thought it was a cruel story because the professor died in the original work. The professor spent the first half of his life relying on the dead Lily, while the middle period of his life was spent protecting Harry, and the rest of his life was in the grave. In the author's article, Harry enters the professor's heart, and the rest of this professor's life belongs to Harry. PS. This is a very cute and sweet short story. The above is from the sub-review of [Shicheng Studio] [Luoyang]. Please forgive me if there is any inappropriateness.

[Copywriting question] Maybe you will care why this article has so few collections. Hmm... The copy is too short and unattractive. Some people will read the article when they see the copy they like. Copywriting is like a door. If your exterior decoration doesn't look good, who will go in and take a look at what's inside? Emotional issues In the article, Harry will be slightly confused about his ignorant feelings for the professor. If Hermione hadn't pointed it out, I believe this Harry would not be aware of it. At this time, the author might have to rewrite the novel. The professor in the article also said that he had been confused, and after he was confused, he understood his own feelings. The professor's words would make people very heart-warming, maybe it was the separation after the war. I hope they can be happy in the author's article. [Typesetting issues and punctuation issues] I can't say that the layout of this article has any major shortcomings. It's just a bit crowded. A little enter will have unexpected benefits and it won't look too complicated. However, there are a few sentences where the author seems to have lost a punctuation mark or used it incorrectly. 1. "Potter," he deliberately used the sweetness when Harry called him just now. Error correction: ""Pote."" 2. However, the most bizarre thing, and something Harry will never admit to himself, is that he was obviously and irrevocably seduced by Snape's "Potter" ""Pote" is tempting" 3. "Really? Harry felt that all his wishes had come true, and he felt like a dream for a moment. "(Really) This is a psychological question of whether there are pre-quotes or not. This is the author's own division. 4. Harry shook his head, "No," "No. " In fact, there is a lot more in the article, mainly because the author did not use carriage returns or line feeds. Feeling Hello dear author. This is a story about Harry and his professor after the war. After reading the article, I have to say it is very heartwarming. I thought it was a cruel story because the professor died in the original work. The professor spent the first half of his life relying on the dead Lily, while the middle period of his life was spent protecting Harry, and the rest of his life was in the grave. In the author's article, Harry enters the professor's heart, and the rest of this professor's life belongs to Harry. PS. This is a very cute and sweet short story.

So sweet~~~Wonderfully written!!!

This chapter is so sweet!!!