The Holy Lord of Ghosts

It felt like it was unfinished. There could have been more emotional scenes, and the story of the two getting along could have been written in more detail. I didn't expect it to end like this. It felt too rushed, and Xiao Shou's feelings were not written out. But I have to say that this is a good article. It seems relaxed, stress-free, and very comfortable.

It's obviously a great article, but I'm speechless when it comes to nitpicking some small details. It just ends too quickly.

It took me 2 nights to read it. It took up a lot of space when I was a kid, but the progress became very fast after that. The ending is a bit sad. I originally thought that the child would die after his parents passed away. Of course, the author's arrangement may be more suitable for Xiu Zhen's indifference.

Especially when I'm at work and I can't connect to the Internet~~, okay! I really haven't left many messages, and I'm really sorry for your serious writing, hey! I'm a fool, I'm a bad person, well, I got better after insulting myself, hahaha, am I a pervert? All right! Really need to go to sleep

Before going to bed, I still think I should leave you another message, hey! There is no wifi, and the traffic is not strong!

I've just finished reading a few more chapters~ Wait a minute and read the next article~ Hahaha

Although I think your name is very ordinary (your pen name), your writing is quite good! I only watched two of them after adding this one, but I liked them both, so keep up the good work! I've only read a few chapters of this, and I'm afraid I'll forget to leave a message, so I think I'd better tell you first, because I'm afraid you won't know.

This is the second novel I've read. I really like it. Haha, it's still the same. Download it first and then read it slowly. Come on!

I'd better not give any points. I'm not used to negative scores. I'm halfway through the novel, and the protagonist is still the Utano doll. Then it progressed by leaps and bounds from decade to decade. All right. There are countless passerby NPCs. The main CP didn't see any emotional development until the end. How much do those NPCs have to do with the protagonist? Ask weakly. The main content of this article. Central idea. What exactly are characters. ?

Although I scored 2 points! But in fact, I feel negative in my heart. I know that because of Harmony Ruochu, your articles cannot be interactive. However, it was really bland, and it can even be said that the emotions almost made me cry. Why all of a sudden,... Well, I have read all your previous articles, and I especially like foxes and monsters. I even think your articles are literary and I have collected them! I often come to see if you have any articles. I was very excited when you published this article... But in the end! Xie Mei Gong, well, I have seen her domineering towards others, but this is not your writing level. No matter from the side or the front, you gave me the feeling that this character is not full. But forgive me for not seeing anything about Xiao Gong in this article. You said he is indifferent, calm, indifferent... I even think he is not as popular as the king when I was a child... Xiao Gong, not to mention that as an evil ancient creature that eats everything, I even think he is arrogant and even a bit unbearable. I don't mean to say anything, I think it is true at the beginning He will definitely torture Xiao Shou. I felt this way after reading your settings →_→ But what did I see? That kind of weakness and emotion. To be honest, I think I definitely saw more than a little bit of Gong in my previous life. I even felt that there was something that could move him, or maybe it was because I was moved by Xiao Shou's sacrifice for Xiao Gong and for his sake! What,... Isn't this Su Lia... I can only say that we generally cannot conquer this kind of creature, and I even think that the little shou should be tough and even resist... Maybe attacking will torture him... But I saw a different kind of them with emotions! Do you know how I feel after taking your essay? Dull! And haha! That's the end of it... In fact, the character has collapsed. When I read novels, I like to use my own imagination and then the scenes emerge. Can you imagine a man who has eaten countless people, but his heart softens when he sees a child crying? Even of course because this kid cares about him! But this really makes me feel sad! Is it so warm? Moths fly into the flame! If this is really the case, then I think his possessiveness is even perverted ←_←But →_→I see a normal Jun. One will not eat meat just to endure it! I understand! But I cry! Because he is still the same after he collapses... Or rather! I even think you gave up on this article, Ruochu Dada! …I've already gone into romance… I don't know how to express all my feelings after reading this article… I love your article, it's domineering and possessive! Calm and gentle. Warm and not abusive are my cute points! However, don't write it like a romance about falling in love with a horse or something. Why do you fall in love with me, oh. You warmed me! You can be warmed, but I think there are some things engraved in your bones that cannot be tolerated! And in the end, what others said was so vicious! To be honest, that painting didn't wrong him! But he didn't care at all... It was his painting. He would have destroyed the painting if he used it for evil! But. Not a single question! All right! Because I fell in love with Gong! So the former 9 gentleness, kindness and love for family slowly disappeared due to cultivation... But wasn't Gong the one who fell in love with me because he was gentle, kind, loving and loving his family →_→ Of course, there is also good fighting... I can only say that this paper tiger Gong is not as good as... Directly writing the character of a loyal dog! Like this! I can understand it too! ∨∨ Even I Gugu... Turned around and read Ruo Chuda's article! So sad! Ruochu is big! Please write carefully. Are we also watching it seriously? Although I actually often read pirated articles. But in fact, I like the author I like very much. I will go to VIP... I look forward to your next Danmei article... I am so sad that I cry