A soul transmigrates?!
Although I’ve wanted to transmigrate countless times, it was only ever a passing thought.
Heavens, haven’t you heard the story of Lord Ye, who feared the very thing he claimed to love?
Thank goodness!
I haven’t got bound feet, and I’m not a man.
Why on earth have I come here?
A love I dare not touch, a debt I cannot repay!
For Yun Xuan, gratitude has always outweighed affection.
For Yin Zhen, I cannot bring myself to give up my pride.
Should someone like me
return home at any cost,
or stay by my love’s side?
(I’ve wanted to write a lighthearted Qing dynasty transmigration story for ages. This is my first time writing, so please go easy on me.)
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The story frame is okay, but the writing style is a bit weak, and it is written like a running account. I finished scanning ten lines at a glance in less than 2 hours.
I don't know how to evaluate it! The writing is average! The plot is not very good! But it was very hard to finish it!!! I give you a thumbs up for this!!!
Fortunately, it has a happy ending, otherwise the part about Liu Guiren would still be a bit disappointing. After reading so many Qing Dynasty novels, I still can't accept the idea of pampering others. Even if they are all fake, the heroines who travel through time are much stronger than me.
Haha, I'm here to give you a score. I'm reading Bawang. If there's no one around, I'll just downgrade it.
It's okay, but since April 4th has also come back, can there be a continuation? I'm looking forward to the author's reply:
I haven't changed any of my articles, so it's unlikely that I'll continue the article. Besides, the other article hasn't been updated for a long time, and the third article is being conceived, but it's still far away! O(∩_∩)O~
After reading it, I breathed a sigh of relief and had a happy ending. Author's reply:
In fact, it was originally going to have a tragic ending. I was afraid that people would throw bricks, so I chose a very ambiguous ending!
There was no transition between events, so I was confused. The time is not specified either. This article is not top-notch among Qingchuan articles. I seek truth from facts and am impartial. Point out the author's shortcomings, I hope the author doesn't like hearing it
There was no transition between events, so it was baffling. The time is not specified either. This article is not top-notch among Qingchuan articles. I seek truth from facts and am impartial. Point out the author's shortcomings, I hope the author doesn't like to hear it. The author's reply:
It's nothing, I'm a novice at writing. At that time, I just thought I'd read too much about Qingchuan and wanted to write one, without doing any research! Just for fun! There is a big gap between my writing ability and that of many writers in JJ. Personally, I think that as long as I am willing to write, I will gradually make progress. I hope you can see my growth!
There is no connection between many chapters. Many times, it suddenly jumps to another place while reading, which is very baffling. Too jumpy. Author's reply:
I welcome flowers and bricks equally!
№6 Netizen: mili Comments: "Love You - Guarding You (Qing Chuan)" Rating: 0 Publication time: 2008-09-22 17:04:16 Chapters reviewed: 59
The writing is really not that good
Author's reply:
Ashamed! It stains your eyes!
I took a quick look at the article, it's okay, I'm going to read it for a long time
These comments and replies are interesting.
The story frame is okay, but the writing style is a bit weak, and it is written like a running account. I finished scanning ten lines at a glance in less than 2 hours.
I don't know how to evaluate it! The writing is average! The plot is not very good! But it was very hard to finish it!!! I give you a thumbs up for this!!!
Fortunately, it has a happy ending, otherwise the part about Liu Guiren would still be a bit disappointing. After reading so many Qing Dynasty novels, I still can't accept the idea of pampering others. Even if they are all fake, the heroines who travel through time are much stronger than me.
Haha, I'm here to give you a score. I'm reading Bawang. If there's no one around, I'll just downgrade it.
It's okay, but since April 4th has also come back, can there be a continuation? I'm looking forward to the author's reply: I haven't changed any of my articles, so it's unlikely that I'll continue the article. Besides, the other article hasn't been updated for a long time, and the third article is being conceived, but it's still far away! O(∩_∩)O~
After reading it, I breathed a sigh of relief and had a happy ending. Author's reply: In fact, it was originally going to have a tragic ending. I was afraid that people would throw bricks, so I chose a very ambiguous ending!
There was no transition between events, so I was confused. The time is not specified either. This article is not top-notch among Qingchuan articles. I seek truth from facts and am impartial. Point out the author's shortcomings, I hope the author doesn't like hearing it
There was no transition between events, so it was baffling. The time is not specified either. This article is not top-notch among Qingchuan articles. I seek truth from facts and am impartial. Point out the author's shortcomings, I hope the author doesn't like to hear it. The author's reply: It's nothing, I'm a novice at writing. At that time, I just thought I'd read too much about Qingchuan and wanted to write one, without doing any research! Just for fun! There is a big gap between my writing ability and that of many writers in JJ. Personally, I think that as long as I am willing to write, I will gradually make progress. I hope you can see my growth!
There is no connection between many chapters. Many times, it suddenly jumps to another place while reading, which is very baffling. Too jumpy. Author's reply: I welcome flowers and bricks equally!
№6 Netizen: mili Comments: "Love You - Guarding You (Qing Chuan)" Rating: 0 Publication time: 2008-09-22 17:04:16 Chapters reviewed: 59 The writing is really not that good Author's reply: Ashamed! It stains your eyes! I took a quick look at the article, it's okay, I'm going to read it for a long time These comments and replies are interesting.