Luo Qian nearly drowned.
By a stroke of misfortune, he was given a new life,
and gained an unexpected ability,
which led him to embark on the path of cultivating immortality.
Later, he made a friend he was quite fond of,
but he had no idea what the friend’s real motive was for approaching him.
Could it really be because of his ability?
This story is entirely fictional.
Any resemblance to real people or events is purely coincidental!
This is a cultivation progression story!
Slow burn
By the way, I tidied up the paragraph breaks in the first 100 chapters. It looks much easier on the eyes now...
[Possessed by a Ghost] My new story is getting updates again (^o^)
Feel free to add it to your favorites!
Mwah! ≧◇≦
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Why is such a good article not included? Of course it is not included in V. I, a poor man, am very happy, but the level of this article is obviously very high. Can't even the editor see it? Come on, please
I'm reading the article, and I feel a bit awkward at the beginning. It feels like cultivating immortality and being modern, and the language sounds a little bit ancient. But there's no v for such a long time, what's wrong with the author! I will read the article!
I discovered this book by chance. Why didn't the author continue to open new holes?
Congratulations on the completion! It's amazing that such a long article was able to be completed. Come on, I will keep chasing it.
I always feel that it is not easy for an author... I wrote such a long article slowly by myself.
To be honest, this is a very good article, but if you can't say good about the qualifications of the protagonist, it's still fair. But the author, you are already in the middle stage of foundation building in less than 20 chapters, and it took more than 400 chapters to form a pill. It's not that you want to write a story. The detailed story is not good, but it drags on too long. There are too many elements arranged in the middle, and the pace is slow. The long length of the story with high qualifications makes me feel like a person with low qualifications is practicing. What's more, there are things in the protagonist's body to assist him in cultivation. It's not what I want to watch. For low cultivators, I think the energy absorbed by the protagonist at the beginning of the chapter is more than enough for the protagonist to be a cultivator of Nascent Soul or above. After all, according to your author's description of the pill formation stage, it should only be the threshold for cultivating immortals. I don't quite believe that a cultivator who has just stepped into the threshold can have one. The power to destroy thousands of cities with one breath may not be possible even at the Nascent Soul stage. In fact, I am just criticizing the speed of cultivation. After all, it takes more than 400 chapters to form elixirs, and then it starts to escalate rapidly. Finishing it quickly will inevitably make people feel that the gap is too big.
I finally finished reading it~ It would be better if the author could write more concisely in some parts of the book! Great happy ending
It's great to be able to write it down~
~\\(≧▽≦)/~It must be praised even for this length!!!! It's really great that you persisted in writing for so long and lasted so long!!!! Spread flowers spread flowers
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