[Alternate history, don't nitpick the facts]
A story about a cold, aloof imperial physician and a transmigrated, snarky woman rekindling their romance after a painful separation.
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I saw it at 3:30 in the morning... I thought it was pretty good QAQ
Author, please keep up the good work!
I spent a day reading it yesterday, and I felt that there were some things I didn't want to say. I think the jokes at the beginning are pretty good. Some people say it's not good to add modern language, but I think it's harmless in my heart. It's only when I spit it out that it becomes abrupt. The most blunt thing here is the male protagonist's feelings. Some people fall in love at first sight, some fall in love with each other over time, some find love in times of need, and some just go with the flow. In short, when everyone meets their significant other, they meet by chance. The plot in this article is not perfect, and the transition is not perfect. Of course, it was very confusing, but I continued reading, and then I watched the otaku fight, which was also noisy. I feel that the current otaku fights all have similar plots, setting up traps, traps, in short, the opponent has countless weaknesses and mistakes waiting for you to catch. In fact, how can it be that easy? It is the most difficult to fight without breaking the skin, and the easiest if it is broken. Later, we will drive out the second uncle's family and kill them all, which is actually unnecessary. And those disgusting parents, regret? Do you believe it? I don't believe it, people will always be partial, not to mention that the son-in-law is powerful, so there is no need to be a bad person. I really don't understand the heroine's approach of being reformed and returning to her parents' family in the end. The same goes for the house fight at the male protagonist's house. It's so complicated. If you stab it with a knife or pour a bowl of poison, it's over. You can do it without anyone noticing. Did you have to plan it for so many years? Miss Wen's method is even more inexplicable. Can the Ji sisters also use it? Aren't you afraid of being stabbed in the middle of the night? Do you want Qiuyue to marry the male protagonist, not have children, and treat the servant's children as sons? Such IQ. Logically speaking, I should have given up on the article due to so many irrationalities, but I still finished reading it. What you lack is practice. Your writing skills are still good. In the future, you must consider human nature in many aspects when writing articles.
This article would be better if there were less common modern exaggerations.
Zhao Kuo? Talking on paper...
Forgot to mention, the heroine's mother is actually very familiar with allusions...
I can't even afford extras! ! ! !
Sons are favored everywhere. Don't you love your daughter very much? You should just look at what's good for you. If you don't have the ability, you still think your daughter is vicious. If you see your daughter has the ability, you will change your face. This kind of parent
Haha, it's a bit unexpected that it ended so quickly, but it's not bad. By the way, will there be a sequel?
Damn, is the article about the house real?
I have been thinking about whether I should read it again and comment again. The author's writing is generally good, but it is not perfect. For example, the description of the character of the male protagonist or the female protagonist is different from the writing. The female protagonist is violent and evil and has no expression →_→ I only typed it out after seeing it. . When I have time, I will re-read it and give the author some meager comments. The overall subject matter and writing style are quite good. The number of favorites and comments are quite small. The description is not particularly outstanding. Anyway, keep it up↖(^ω^)↗
It's not bl! ! My father-in-law really loves Xiao Di! ! The author wouldn't want to marry his father-in-law to Xiao Di! ! I agree! !
I saw it at 3:30 in the morning... I thought it was pretty good QAQ Author, please keep up the good work!
I spent a day reading it yesterday, and I felt that there were some things I didn't want to say. I think the jokes at the beginning are pretty good. Some people say it's not good to add modern language, but I think it's harmless in my heart. It's only when I spit it out that it becomes abrupt. The most blunt thing here is the male protagonist's feelings. Some people fall in love at first sight, some fall in love with each other over time, some find love in times of need, and some just go with the flow. In short, when everyone meets their significant other, they meet by chance. The plot in this article is not perfect, and the transition is not perfect. Of course, it was very confusing, but I continued reading, and then I watched the otaku fight, which was also noisy. I feel that the current otaku fights all have similar plots, setting up traps, traps, in short, the opponent has countless weaknesses and mistakes waiting for you to catch. In fact, how can it be that easy? It is the most difficult to fight without breaking the skin, and the easiest if it is broken. Later, we will drive out the second uncle's family and kill them all, which is actually unnecessary. And those disgusting parents, regret? Do you believe it? I don't believe it, people will always be partial, not to mention that the son-in-law is powerful, so there is no need to be a bad person. I really don't understand the heroine's approach of being reformed and returning to her parents' family in the end. The same goes for the house fight at the male protagonist's house. It's so complicated. If you stab it with a knife or pour a bowl of poison, it's over. You can do it without anyone noticing. Did you have to plan it for so many years? Miss Wen's method is even more inexplicable. Can the Ji sisters also use it? Aren't you afraid of being stabbed in the middle of the night? Do you want Qiuyue to marry the male protagonist, not have children, and treat the servant's children as sons? Such IQ. Logically speaking, I should have given up on the article due to so many irrationalities, but I still finished reading it. What you lack is practice. Your writing skills are still good. In the future, you must consider human nature in many aspects when writing articles.
This article would be better if there were less common modern exaggerations.
Zhao Kuo? Talking on paper... Forgot to mention, the heroine's mother is actually very familiar with allusions...
I can't even afford extras! ! ! !
Sons are favored everywhere. Don't you love your daughter very much? You should just look at what's good for you. If you don't have the ability, you still think your daughter is vicious. If you see your daughter has the ability, you will change your face. This kind of parent
Haha, it's a bit unexpected that it ended so quickly, but it's not bad. By the way, will there be a sequel?
Damn, is the article about the house real?
I have been thinking about whether I should read it again and comment again. The author's writing is generally good, but it is not perfect. For example, the description of the character of the male protagonist or the female protagonist is different from the writing. The female protagonist is violent and evil and has no expression →_→ I only typed it out after seeing it. . When I have time, I will re-read it and give the author some meager comments. The overall subject matter and writing style are quite good. The number of favorites and comments are quite small. The description is not particularly outstanding. Anyway, keep it up↖(^ω^)↗
It's not bl! ! My father-in-law really loves Xiao Di! ! The author wouldn't want to marry his father-in-law to Xiao Di! ! I agree! !