Song of the Cang Sea and Chang'an

I feel a little depressed when I see this. So far, the male protagonist has been entangled with the two girls. It is certain that he likes Bichen, but he is not shy about his intimacy with Qinglian. It is really frustrating to see Qinglian thinking about the male protagonist wholeheartedly. Now I am waiting for a turning point in the female protagonist's relationship 🙏 I want to see the growth of her abilities and spiritual personality.

Seeing this place, I feel that Pei and Hongzhu are a bit tooly. Fortunately, the young master can occasionally say a few words to increase his sense of presence. Hongzhu is almost transparent, and the edges are very sparse. I feel that it would be better if the group portraits were lost, or some character design could be written in one or two strokes [Three Flower Cat Head]

The author's writing is good, but the layout is too crowded. Please change it.

Are you still writing articles? Come on.